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Post  DIABLO258 Tue Jan 08, 2013 8:42 am

It's early morning, if someone can review the apps.
Honestly Masey's look's really good.
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Post  Archimedes Tue Jan 08, 2013 11:27 am

Don Walker - DENIED

RP examples:
Passive was good, just to short. You had 21 lines but only 17 lines of rp (looc and lines that carry over do not count as a line.)

Active was good up until the point where you powergamed. You have to roll to hit the guy with the stunstick.

Also, we don't have UNION division in CCA and out format is...
"C18-CCA-CORE.##.#####"

Backstory:
Really good, but I would like if you tied in how you got into a city or City 18 in particular.

[Reapply in two days]

@Masey - ACCEPTED
-PENDING TIME-ON-SERVER CHECK


Everything is spot on except for your use of our CCA unit layout. We use "C18-CCA-CORE.##.#####". Apps are only allowed one mistake to be accepted so you pass... barely.

If your time on the server is less than 6 hours you will have to wait two days and until you have attained 6 hours to be whitelisted. Otherwise Welcome to the CCA.
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Post  Dewfan Tue Jan 08, 2013 8:28 pm

Steam name: Dewfan97
Steam ID: STEAM_0:1:29252830
Age: 15
How long have you been roleplaying?: About one year.
How long have you been playing with The Crew?: Around seven hours or more, last time I checked it was six hours and forty minutes.
How long have you played on our server, in total?: Around seven hours.


20 lines of passive roleplay examples, using /it and /me. (Eg: /it The citizen runs through the checkpoint /me Gives chase)
Me, CCA-C18-CORE.04.42916 is patrolling around the city.
/it A citizen buys a can of water as I walk by him.
/me Continues walking.
/it The citizen throws the can of water at me, and runs off.
/me I turn around and give chase radioing in to tell a unit to block the slums entrance so the citizen can not escape.
/it The citizen runs into C.A.H. apartments.
/me I run in behind him, and activate the lock on the door so he is trapped.
/it The citizen hides in the first room on the third floor.
/me I check all the open rooms and knock on the owned doors to check the rooms.
/it The citizen hides in the bathroom of the room.
/me I get to the first room on the third floor and check the room since the door is open.
/it The citizen continues to hide in the bathroom.
/me I open the door and find him. I tell him to get on the wall.
/it The citizen gets on the wall.
/me I attempt to tie his hands.
/it He does not resist.
/me I tell him to apply.
/it He says his name is John Stover, CID 67395
/me I pull out my stun stick, turn it on ( A few sparks fly off of it as I turn it on) and set it to high.
/it The citizen clutches his teeth.
/me I beat him till he is unconscious, and put him in detainment for one cycle.
/me I then write a report on the citizen and turn it in.

20 lines of action role play examples, using /it and /me. (Eg: /it The citizen runs through the checkpoint /me Gives chase)
Me, CCA-C18-CORE.01.32715 is in a raid on the Slums.
/it A notorious anti citizen run out in front of me, but is unarmed.
/me I radio in to the other units of the spotting.
/radio The other units radio back and tell me they are setting up a trap, try to flush the anti citizen this way.
/me Runs after the anti citizen.
/it The citizen runs to the catwalks and climbs down the ladder.
/me I quickly climb down the ladder, I then pull out my pistol and fire a couple of shots at the ground near the anti citizen to keep them running.
/it The anti citizen runs into a alleyway and turns the corner.
/me I turn the corner realizing we are getting close to the ambush point.
/it The citizen continues to make a run for the warehouse in the distance.
/me I radio in and tell them the citizen is getting close to the warehouse.
/radio They radio back and tell me they are ready.
/it The anti citizen pushes the button for the garage door to the warehouse to open.
/me I get behind cover to avoid any stray bullets.
/it The garage door opens only for three OTA soldiers to be standing there waiting.
/me I duck my head down.
/it The OTA soldier's AR2s open fire on the citizen in a barrage of bullets.
/me When the shooting is over I get up and walk towards the dead anti citizen.
/it The dead anti citizen layed there with multiple bullet holes in the chest and head.
/me We then head back to the Nexus.

Character backstory (10 lines at least detailing you character's background. Events, job, family etc and should reflect your skills): Timothy Baker grew up in New York. He was average, nothing too special about him. He went to school made friends and was generally known as the "class clown." As he got older he eventually grew out of trying to make people laugh. He went into high school and focused on making good grades not playing sports. He eventually graduated and then got himself an apartment in New York. He got a job delivering packages. Life was going good until the Portal Storms started happening. Luckily for him he was already in the city so most of the creatures that teleported to Earth from the storms couldn't get him since the city's were essentially safe havens. Then the Seven Hour War began. Timothy saw reports on the news about and was amazed and stunned at the same time. He was amazed in the since there was actually an intelligent alien species out there. He also stunned in the sense how intelligent they were, and how they just crushed Earth's militaries in just a few hours! He figured there was nothing he could do, so he waited. The war ended and Earth Surrendered. He got shipped to a new city, City 45. He lived there for a while and moved with life but he got shipped again. Eventually after being moved from city to city he ended up in C18. He was tired of living the life he was and wanted something he thought was better.

---IC Information---
____________________________________________

Name: Timothy Baker
CID: 86904
Amount of loyalist points: 0
Age: 35
Country of origin: United States of America
Hair colour: Brown
Eye colour: Blue

Specific skills and specialist, such as medical knowlege, knowlege of technology etc?: No special medical knowledge, and not very good with technology either. He was pretty good with his computer but not anything special.


Have you had any previous affiliations with the CCA of the city or the UU as a whole?: No.


Have you had any previous infactions from the CCA or the UU as a whole?: No.
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Post  Archimedes Tue Jan 08, 2013 8:50 pm

Dewfan97 - ACCEPTED

Very straight forward app. Aside from the lack of rolls in the action roleplay everything was accurate.
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Post  Snake4199 Wed Jan 09, 2013 12:10 am

Steam name: Snake4199
Steam ID: STEAM_0:1:28392550
Age: 15
How long have you been roleplaying?: 8 Years Now
How long have you been playing with The Crew?: 3 Days
How long have you played on our server, in total?: /playtime isn't working at the moment, but yesterday it was 4 hours and 45 mins. It's most likely gone up.

20 lines of passive roleplay examples, using /it and /me. (Eg: /it The citizen runs through the checkpoint /me Gives chase)
/me steps out into the cold dark night.
/it It's cold, chilly, and the usual around here.
/me begins to walk his daily stroll along the side of the road.
/me makes certain to be as quiet as possible when stepping
/it As expected, the steps weren't heard
/me circles around a corner, stopping at the same bench as the last 7 months.
/me let's out a cold breath into the January air... or was it December still?
/it The breath thickens into a misty fog, fading away as the wind blew
/me zips up his coat up tighter as he listens to the silence
/it It is contrasted with a sharp horn of a train
/me jumps in reaction to the noise, almost tripping in the process
/it The train begins to sound closer, closer, it's definitely coming this way
/me Hesitates for a second, then decides it's time to walk over to the abandoned station to see it pass by.
/it As he walks, the sound keeps coming closer
/me continues walking at a calm pace... then a bit faster
/it The train horn was definitely signaling a stop... for what reason, this was an abandoned station outside the city, in the ghetto.
/me continues to walk faster towards his destination, that station.
/it The determined one would've looked odd to others, if there were anyone around.
/me quickly steps up the stairs and slowly creaks the door in so that he can see in side the dark, gloomy, barren, lobby.
/it It is quiet, except the noise of the rustling of leaves.
/me quietly steps inside, and slowly closes the door behind him. Quietly, he awaits the arrival of the train.
/it The shadows began to lift from the tracks as the train neared...
/me chuckles, "Perfect..."

20 lines of action roleplay examples, using /it and /me. (Eg: /it THe citizen runs through the checkpoint /me Gives chase)
/it A pair of CCA units walk along side the train
/it "I just don't see what went wrong...", said one in a bubbly voice
/me moves through the shadows until he is behind both of them
/it Both units, remain oblivious to him, even as he moves. "Careful recruit, you don't want to screw up anything else today."
/me steps up behind them, clocking their heads together taking the elder officer's pistol from his holster with the leverage from his fall.
/it Another officer steps out, "Hey we're ready to g-"
/me greets the petrified unit with a 9mm round to the head
/it The sound of the train's horn as it was about to depart muffled the noise.
/me Tosses the body of the unit slumped against the entrance into the train onto the station floor.
/it It thud no louder than a bookbag being tossed to a wall.
/me Checked unlocked the USP's magazine, checking the clip
/it There was still 16 in the clip and 1 in the chamber.
/me continued onto the train into a cargo compartment...
/it It was oddly empty, other than the metal walls and knick nacks.
/me Continued up the train, holstering his pistol as he realized the next cart was a passenger one.
/it The pistol fit snugly within his overshirt
/me Slides the door open carefully, as to not disturb the resting passengers or the one's without rest.
/it A man turned his head to me as I approached the center of the cart.
/it The trains was now nearing the city... city 18
/it He begins to speak, "I didn't see you get on."
/me replies with a cheeky smile, "No I bet you didn't..."
/it He raises a brow, but the train had come to a stop, "Well, end of the line..."

Character backstory (10 lines at least detailing you character's background. Events, job, family etc and should reflect your skills):
With no family, no job, nothing, this man sought redemption within the CCA's ranks. He was an outcast, an outcast who excelled in harming things During child hood, he'd been known to be a prankster and a bully. It was an attention thing, but he'd begun to realize it was getting him no where. As he came of age and all his friends were either dead of their stupidity or out drunk, he became anti-social. He'd only come out after he saw this young blonde girl, much younger than him, walking by his house. At first he tried to talk, like a civilized being. Yet her reluctance to accepting him was met with a beating... he had been easily angered in the past, but this was different. He only stopped when the girl's older brother and younger sister intervened. He was arrested, but soon after the 7 hour war, broke out. Ever since then he'd wanted redemption among humanity and the UU, and revenge on anyone he saw fit.

---IC Information---
____________________________________________

Name: John Patrizzi
CID: 20303
Amount of loyalist points: 5
Age: 49
Country of origin: Southern U.S.A.
Hair colour: Blonde
Eye colour: Blue

Specific skills and specialist, such as medical knowlege, knowlege of technology etc?:

(Taking this ICly)
I know how to put people in their place, is there something else you need? If thatz the case I'm experienced in shooting from my pop's old huntin trips back on the farm's forest.


Have you had any previous affiliations with the CCA of the city or the UU as a whole?:
No.

Have you had any previous infactions from the CCA or the UU as a whole?:
No.
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Join date : 2012-08-28
Age : 26
Location : New Jersey

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Post  DIABLO258 Wed Jan 09, 2013 12:18 am

Snake4199: ACCEPTED

Very impressive. This should be taken as an example to the new RP'ers out there.
Your passive RP examples were stupendous in the fact that they were not only very detailed, but they brought a sence of danger and allitle bit of depression with them. Very well done.
Your action examples were also very incredible. Although not a lot of "action", it still kept me on my toes to see what he would run into next, if anything at all.
The background story explains why he joined the CCA very well, although I would have liked to know abit about his background. Family, friends, how he even got to City 18 maybe? But, your RP examples were far to impressive to turn down. Perhaps you can develop it more, IC'ly.

Welcome to the CCA, Unit.
Ask any SA to whitelist you.
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Post  Lt.FallenAngel Wed Jan 09, 2013 4:25 pm

Steam name:|EGS|^0Lt.^1FallenAngel
Steam ID:STEAM_0:0:19684804
Age:16
How long have you been roleplaying?:About 4 years
How long have you been playing with The Crew?: Nearly 5 days now
How long have you played on our server, in total?: Over 10 hours


20 lines of passive roleplay examples, using /it and /me. (Eg: /it The citizen runs through the checkpoint /me Gives chase)
/me Stands guard by the checkpoint into slums
/it Several citizens appear heading towards the checkpoint
CCA-C18-CORE.06.33892 says "Citizens, Move Along!"
/it Most of the citizens disperse but one stays and just stands outside looking at the officer
CCA-C18-CORE.06.33892 says "Citizen, I said Move Along!"
/it The citizen backs away seeming to be quite interested in the slums.
/me Continues standing guard by the slums.
/it A citizen fight begins to rebel in the plaza
/me Runs down in order to break up the commotion
/it As the the officer runs down the man standing near the slums comes back and slips through
/me Notices in time to see the citizen go through the checkpoint, but when he turned back around to the fight the citizens had already dispersed
/me Heads back to checkpoint and takes guard.
/it More citizens begin to come and try to begin to fight again.
/me Realizes his mistakes last time and calls in on his radio.
/radio "Citizens in plaza are fighting, believe it is a ploy to get into through slums checkpoint. Need Assistance."
/it Metropolice Force arrive quickly to handle the situation at the plaza
/me Notices a man hiding behind the wall
/me Gets the man trapped in the corner
CCA-C18-CORE.06.33892 says "Citizen, Wall."
/it the citizen goes to the wall and prepares to be searched
CCA-C18-CORE.06.33892 says "Citizen, Apply."
Citizen says "James Drekim, 39085"
/me Checks the information on his PDA to find out the citizen has several black marks against his name
/me attempts to tie the man
James Drekim doesn't resist
/me beats the man unconscious
/me brings the man in for questioning
CCA-C18-CORE.DvL.90210 says "Halt, who is this?"
CCA-C18-CORE.06.33892 says "James Drekim, resistance."
CCA-C18-CORE.DvL.90210 looks at the citizens uniform and his facial features and compares them to what he has done.
CCA-C18-CORE.DvL.90210 "This isn't James Drekim but bring him in for questioning."
/me Nods and brings the citizen in for questioning.

20 lines of action roleplay examples, using /it and /me. (Eg: /it THe citizen runs through the checkpoint /me Gives chase)
/me Radios in "Patrol"
/me Walks down the road and goes to the corner giving him a fair line of sight of the citizens in the plaza
/it A citizen begins to attack another citizen in the plaza
/me Walks over and says to everyone near the citizens "Isolate!"
/me unholsters his stun stick and says to the citizens who were fighting "Citizens, wall, now!"
/it one of the citizens move towards the wall and waits for the unit, the other begins to approach the unit.
/me Flicks his stun stun to the on position as sparks begin to emit from it and says "Citizen, Final Warning."
/it The citizen still does not back down and attempts to attack the unit.
/me The unit attempts to dodge the attack.
*Citizen rolled 10/100*
*CCA-C18-CORE.06.33892 rolled 60/100*
/me dodges the attack from the citizen and attempts to give a hard hit on the back of the citizens head to knock him unconscious.
/it As he goes for the attack the citizen is struck by fear and does not attempt to evade
/me Hits the citizen on the back of the head knocking him out.
/radios Anti-Citizen in Plaza, taking in for questioning
/me ties the citizen and then grabs him by the legs and takes him into the nexus.
/me Opens the nexus doors.
/me walks into the jail cell and throws the citizen in the cell.
CCA-C18-CORE.06.33892 says, "Citizen, Apply."
/it The citizen spits on the glass wall through which the unit is looking through.
/me Opens the door to the cell and brings out his stun stick.
/me Begins to beat the citizen until his face is scared and bloody.
/me Walks out and locks the cell.
CCA-C18-CORE.06.33892 says, "Citizen, Apply. Final Warning."
/it The citizen just stares at the unit and doesn't do anything.
CCA-C18-Core.06.33892 says, "I will let the officers deal with you."
/it The larger doors to the jail cell and in comes a CORE DvL.
/me Salutes the officer.
/it The DvL nods to the unit and then gives him a signal to leave.
/me Nods and leaves the jail cell.


Character backstory (10 lines at least detailing you character's background. Events, job, family etc and should reflect your skills):
My name is Brad, Brad Chen. My family moved to America many years ago. We loved China, it was our homeland, I have much pride in that fact. But, my father felt differently. When we moved my mother told me one thing I will never forget, she said, "No matter what happens you respect those above you, your father knows what he is doing and he is doing it for the better." I have stuck with that moral through my entire life. Therefore, once the war began I knew it was my job, my duty, to stand with the Universal Union. It is true, I am unsure of their plan, but what they are doing is for the good of the people. So, I spent a majority of my time helping the Universal Union and soon became a Loyalist. I will always do what I can to help the Universal Union, preserve there right of power, for they our here for us. Now, I believe it is time for me to take part in the fight against the scum who wish to bring down the UU.

---IC Information---
____________________________________________

Name:Brad Chen
CID:39805(This isn't a real character just making this up)
Amount of loyalist points: (Since I have yet to create this character don't know what to put here)
Age: 31
Country of origin: China
Hair color: Black
Eye color: Green

Specific skills and specialist, such as medical knowledge, knowledge of technology etc?: Previously was a medic and has a lot of experience dealing with the medical field. He has preformed amputations on legs and arms.


Have you had any previous affiliations with the CCA of the city or the UU as a whole?: Brad has always been loyal to the CCA abiding by there rules. He never has caused trobule and now he thinks it is the right time to help them out.


Have you had any previous infactions from the CCA or the UU as a whole?
None.
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Post  Noobstrike Wed Jan 09, 2013 4:31 pm

Fallen Angel:
Accepted

Incredibly detailed Rp examples, both passive and action-wise. Great job! You put a lot of effort into this application, and you have a decent backstory. I've also seen you RP on your rebel character, so I know you'll do a great job as a combine unit. Put the effort you put into this app into CCA and you'll be a an EpU in no time.
Ask any SA for a white list.
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Post  Cergis Wed Jan 09, 2013 6:49 pm

OOC Info____________________________________________________
Steam Name: Cergis
Steam ID: STEAM_0:0:40362518
Age:15
How long have you been roleplaying?: September 2012
How long have you been playing with The Crew?: January 6 2013
How long have you played on our server, in total?: 3 days so far
Passive Roleplay_____________________________________________

/me Walks down the path to secure Checkpoint A and notices some thing odd about the Checkpoint.
/me Gets closer to examine the Checkpoints And see's some thing not right.
/me Radio's in "Looks like Checkpoint A has picked up some thing going through it at 3:30 AM.
/it SeC Radios back "I'll be there in a moment 02."
/me As i wait for the SeC i notice some Civilians come up to me and shout at me.
/it Civilians Say "Screw the combine!" "You whores!" "Let them burn in hell!".
/me Starts to take out my shotgun and shoots in the air, Hoping they will run away.
/it The civilians starts to run off, except one of them.
/it SeC comes and helps me to get this one to the wall and he does.
/me Starts to ask him for his CID and Name. He doesn't Reply.
/it SeC gives me his Stunstick to warn him. I take it and after that he starts mumbling.
/me Starts to yell "Tell me what your CID is now!" i did it with a scary manner.
/it Says "John Barker, 76120..." I get a tie and get ready to tie him.
/me Says "resist?" He says "No" I tie him up and Pat him down.
/it Sec says "You are doing well for a new member, I like it."
/me Salutes the High ranks, and says "Thank you sir, it is a honor."
/me See's he has a crowbar on the civilian, and takes it, i start to laugh at the crowbar.
/it Civilian starts to yell "You bastard CCA! You will die!" I says "Haha."
/me Says "Prepare to meet Civil Judgement!" I hit him 3 times before he gets knocked out.
/me Drags him to the nexus, hoping next time wont be so easy.
/me hears the SeC say " your going to integrate him, got it? After that i nod and watch this man suffer by my hands.
ACTION Roleplay_____________________________________________

/me Sits at the Checkpoint A, then Receives a Radio message that says "Rebel Forces incoming on bridge."
/it 05 Tells me "Get your gun, you're coming with us to help." I kinda get excited but not much.
/me Starts to head toward the CAH building, loading my weapon I start to hear gunshots on the bridge.
/me Yells "Get out of CAH, Civilians!" I watch as all civilians get out of our way and get to the lobby.
/it 05 Tells me "You have your gun reloaded?!" I nod with a Yes.
/it 05 Opens the door, with a swiftly move, and runs toward cover yelling "02 get over here!"
/me Thinks "Just run for it 02!" And i say "I'm going!" somehow i get to 05 without getting shot!
/it Rebels Yell "Get out here combine assholes!" they start to laugh behind cover.
/it 05 whispers "Take this grenade. Throw it!" he hands me the grenade
/me i grab it with a swift movement and throw it with ease and it hits one rebel, then i hear a big Boom!
/me Says "1 down 3 more to go!" 05 gives me a look.
/it 05 says "No time for fun and games 02!" he gives me a angry look.
/it Rebels yell "You bastards! he was my friend... I'm gonna kill you!"
/me gives a laugh and 05 laughs with me against his mockery.
/me Radios in "03 and 01 could you come up here and give us some help?
/it 05 says "Get ready to shoot, i can hear them coming closer!" we count to 3 together
/me i burst out with my SMG and burst out alot of bullets into one of the Rebels that were closer to us.
/it 05 Kills the vort with his shotgun and aims at the other rebel.
/it The rebel shoots 05 in the face, he falls down with a sudden dud...
/me starts to shoot the rebel with full force and keep shooting even if he was dead.
/it 03 and 01 show up and didn't make it in time and all 3 of us walk off to nexus carrying 05.

I was a farm boy helping out my pa and he helped us survive the cold winters and hot summers.

I was born before the combine came, but when i was 21 they came, but let us focus on my earlier life for now.

When i was 10, it was the first time i had shot my dad's rifle it was small, so i could use it, my dad taught me to hunt fish and survive in the wild.

When i was 12 i got my first deer kill it was a 15 pointer, i was so interested in guns, i told my dad that i would join the U.S. Army one day...

My mother was not into that idea, her and my dad never got along. i would hear them fight at night. It was scary...

I was 14, when school started to get on my bad side, i was stressed, angry, and humiliated at school.

One day at school, i went there with my rifle had 6 mags with me, and i started shooting everyone i hated! it was hell that day.

The cops showed up and arrested me. It was my birthday too, My dad said i needed time to think straight, but i did not listen.

After 6 years of prison, i heard on a television that the earth was being token over, Then a combine guard came over to me, asked me what my name was. i told him

He unlocked me and showed me to a aircraft. I was surprised but i followed
him and we went to the first city i ever say... City 18

IC INFO____________________________________________________

Name: Alex Mckinly
CID: 24242
Loyalist points: 1 point
Age: 21 years old
Country of orgin: U.S.A
Hair colour: Brown
Eye color: Dark brown

Skills?: A great Marksman, Talented with surviving in the wild, Knows how to knife (was in prison)

Have you had any previous affiliations with the CCA of the city or the UU as a whole?: Yes, i have helped them, when they are looking for wanted civilians


Have you had any previous infactions from the CCA or the UU as a whole?: No





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Post  Gremnkai Wed Jan 09, 2013 6:54 pm

Your passive is 19 lines and there is an inconsistency in your back story. All people under 18 were killed by the combine and your grammar leaves something to be desired.
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Post  Cergis Wed Jan 09, 2013 7:08 pm

i fixd it
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Post  Jaquecz Wed Jan 09, 2013 9:42 pm

Steam name: Jaquecz
Steam ID:STEAM_0:1: 42590752
Age:15
How long have you been roleplaying?: 3 years
How long have you been playing with The Crew?: 2 days
How long have you played on our server, in total?: 5 hours


20 lines of passive roleplay examples, using /it and /me. (Eg: /it The citizen runs through the checkpoint /me Gives chase)
/me Sits with his head in his arms
/it MPF appears and approaches
/me Becomes wary and sits up more properly
/it MPF approaches and the trademark sound of his vocoder sounds as he speaks
CCA-C18-### says "Citizen."
/it Pulls out a stun stick and flips the nearby can of Breen's water to the ground off the trash can
/me Raises an eyebrow staring at the trash can and the Cop
/it He begins to tap his foot, obviously waiting for something
/me Sits still
CCA-C18-### says"Citizen, pick up the can, and put it in the trash can."
/me Gets up and begins to walk away
CCA-C18-### "I said, Pick, up, the can."
/me Stops and turns around
CCA-C18-### "Heh heh heh"
/me Walks to the can and picks it up
CCA-C18-### "Now put it in the trash can"
/me Crunches the can in his hand and throws it in the cop's face
/it The Can bounces from the facemask and drops from the Cop's face mask pathetically, but the Cop flinches anyway.
/me Goes for the Metrocop's testicles with his foot
/it The Cop lets out a scream, made into an unnatural screech by his vocoder
/me Laughs hysterically and sprints away into a nearby alleyway
Markoslo, Sheperd yells "Screw You!!"
/it The Echo of the vocoder from the metrocop can be heard along with his request, it comes out as an series of crackly mumbles and numbers.


20 lines of action roleplay examples, using /it and /me. (Eg: /it THe citizen runs through the checkpoint /me Gives chase)
/me Stops at the edge of the alleyway panting
/me Looks out on the road
/it A few Metrocops with their stunsticks flicked on approach, the crackle of the sticks send a shiver through nearby citizens
/me Eyes widen and turns back to the alleyway only to find the Metrocop from earlier standing there
/it The cop pulls out his gun and points it at you
CCA-C18-### "Your dead now you little punk!"
/me Turns the alleyway and sprints for the slums, avoiding the shot from the cop and making the three others break into a run as well.
/it The cop from the alleyway lets loose with more shots, most going wide, one connecting
/me Grunts from the bullet wound and tries to ignore it
*Markoslo, Sheperd rolled 10/100*
/me Stops foolishly for a few seconds, cradleing his arm
/it The metro cop from the alleyway puts his pistol up to Markoslo's head
/me Gulps and begins to plead for his life
/it The Cop reloads and tighten's his finger
/me Drops to the ground with a blank stare

Character backstory (10 lines at least detailing you character's background. Events, job, family etc and should reflect your skills):

---IC Information---
____________________________________________

Name: Markoslo, Sheperd
CID:10596
Amount of loyalist points: Don't know, i haven't had much interaction with Cp's on this server
Age: 25
Country of origin: Canada eh?
Hair color: Black
Eye color: Black

Specific skills and specialist, such as medical knowledge, knowledge of technology etc?:Was an engineer before and regular non-combine and has had experience with fixing multiple vehicles and making and fixing multiple types of technology, and has experience with firearms and some explosives.


Have you had any previous affiliations with the CCA of the city or the UU as a whole?: Mark has never caused any trouble for the CCA, and heard how they lived from eaves dropping on multiple conversations of patrolling metro-cops.


Have you had any previous infactions from the CCA or the UU as a whole?
No.
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Post  Gremnkai Wed Jan 09, 2013 9:46 pm

You don't have enough hours to apply.
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Post  Cergis Wed Jan 09, 2013 10:43 pm

OOC Info____________________________________________________
Steam Name: Cergis
Steam ID: STEAM_0:0:40362518
Age:15
How long have you been roleplaying?: September 2012
How long have you been playing with The Crew?: January 6 2013
How long have you played on our server, in total?: 3 days so far
Passive Roleplay_____________________________________________

/me Walks down the path to secure Checkpoint A and notices something odd about the Checkpoint.
/me Gets closer to examine the Checkpoint A And see's something not right.
/me Radio's in "Looks like Checkpoint A has picked up something going through it at 3:30 AM.
/it SeC Radios back "I'll be there in a moment 02."
/me As i wait for the SeC i notice some Civilians come up to me and shout at me.
/it Civilians Say "Screw the combine!" "You Idiots!" "Let them burn!".
/me Starts to take out my shotgun and shoots in the air, Hoping they will run away.
/it The civilians starts to run off, except one of them.
/it SeC comes and helps me to get this one to the wall with no trouble, and he does not get into to much trouble at this part.
/me Asks him for his CID and Name. He doesn't Reply.
/it SeC gives me his Stunstick to warn him. I take it and after that he starts to mumble.
/me Yells "Tell me what your CID is now!" I did it with a scary and dark voice.
/it Says "John Barker, 76120..." I get a tie and get ready to tie him.
/me Says "resist?" He says "No" I tie him up and pat him down.
/it Sec says "You are doing well for a new member, I like it."
/me Salutes the SeC, and says "Thank you sir, it is a honor."
/me See's he has a crowbar on the civilian, and takes it, I start to laugh at him for having a Weapon.
/it Civilian starts to yell "You stupid combine! You will die!" I Laugh "Haha."
/me Says "Prepare to meet Civil Judgement!" I hit him 3 times before he gets knocked out.
/me Drags him to the nexus, Getting ready for next time someone gets mad at me.
/me hears the SeC say " your going to integrate him, got it?" After that I nod and turn my stunstick to high.
ACTION Roleplay_____________________________________________

/me Sits at the Checkpoint A, then Receives a Radio message that says "Rebel Forces incoming on bridge."
/it 05 Tells me "Get your gun, you're coming with us to help." I kinda get Scared, Because it was my first time fighting real people.
/me Starts to head toward the CAH building, loading my weapon, I start to hear gunshots on the bridge.
/me Yells "Get out of CAH, Civilians!" As I run toward the top I watch as all civilians get out of our way and get to the lobby.
/it 05 Tells me "You have your gun reloaded?!" I nod with a Yes.
/it 05 Opens the door, with a swiftly move, and runs toward cover yelling "02 get over here!"
/me Thinks "Just run for it 02!" And i say "I'm going!" somehow I get to 05 without getting shot!
/it Rebels Yell "Get out here combine!" they start to laugh of our chicken attempt.
/it 05 whispers "Take this grenade. Throw it!" he hands me the grenade.
/me I grab it with a swift movement and throw it with ease and it hits one rebel, then I hear a big boom!
/me Says "1 down 3 more to go!" 05 gives me a look.
/it 05 says "No time for fun and games 02!" he gives me an angry look.
/it Rebels yell "You! he was my friend... I'm gonna kill you!"
/me gives a laugh and 05 laughs with me against his anger and gets ready for more shots to be fired.
/me Radios in "03 and 01 could you come up here and give us some help? 03 and 01 says with a raspy voice "Copy."
/it 05 says "Get ready to shoot, I can hear them coming closer!" we count to 3 together and wait until they get to close.
/me I burst out with my SMG and Shoot out alot of bullets into one of the Rebels that were closer to us.
/it 05 Kills the vortagon with his shotgun and aims at the other rebel.
/it The rebel shoots 05 in the face, he falls down with a sudden dud...
/me starts to shoot the rebel with full force and keep shooting even if he was dead.
/it 03 and 01 finally show up but didn't make it in time and all 3 of us walk off to nexus carrying 05.

I was a farm boy helping out my papa while we helped the family survive the cold winter and hot summer, he was my only friend during those days.

I was born before the combine came while I was 21 years old, but let us focus on my earlier life for now.

When I was 10 although it was the first time I had shot my dad's rifle it was small, so I could use it, my dad taught me to hunt fish and survive in the wild.

When I was 12 I got my first deer kill that was a 15 point Buck. I was so interested in guns I told my dad that I would join the U.S. Army one day

My mother was not into that idea, her and my dad never got along. I would hear them fight at night it was scary...

When I was 14 I got severely humiliated at school. I got stressed and angry

One day at school while I went there with my rifle had 6 mags with me then I started shooting everyone I hated! it was hell that day.

The cops showed up and arrested me while my birthday was today too although My dad said I needed time to think straight while I didn't listen.

After 6 years of prison what I heard on a television that the earth was being token over that i thought was foolish while a combine guard came over to me, asked me what my name was while I told him.

He unlocked me and showed me to a aircraft while I got surprised but I followed him and we went to the first city I ever say... city 18

IC INFO____________________________________________________

Name: Alex Mckinly
CID: 24242
Loyalist points: 1 point
Age: 21 years old
Country of orgin: U.S.A
Hair colour: Brown
Eye color: Dark brown

Skills?: A great Marksman, Talented with surviving in the wild, Knows how to knife (was in prison)

Have you had any previous affiliations with the CCA of the city or the UU as a whole?: Yes, i have helped them, when they are looking for wanted civilians


Have you had any previous infactions from the CCA or the UU as a whole?: No


Last edited by Cergis on Thu Jan 10, 2013 6:48 pm; edited 8 times in total (Reason for editing : Fixing Grammar)
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Post  DeadMercy Wed Jan 09, 2013 11:16 pm

---OOC Information---
_______________________________________________________


Steam name: DeadMercy or MisterQuiggles
Steam ID: STEAM_0:0:47614181
Age: 18
How long have you been roleplaying?: For about 1 or 2 years now.
How long have you been playing with The Crew?: Just joined today.
How long have you played on our server, in total?: You must have played here for at least 6 hours. (Don't know how to do this? Click here!)


20 lines of passive/action roleplay examples, using /it and /me. (Eg: /it The citizen runs through the checkpoint /me Gives chase)
/me looks at his photo in his hands of his family /me he closes his eyes, smiles /me his last and final thoughts will be of home /me she waves her arm to motion the civilian through the gate /me she hesitates, then responds to the man on the radio /me he raises his eyebrow at the witty joke the officer had just made /me she panics as she is undecided who to save from this horrible situation /me he pushes her out of the way and takes the bullet /me she tries to pull him up to safety, desperately and barely holding onto him /me he is thrown into the cellblock, coughing with blood /me he closes his eyes and kneels before the grave /me he cries as he regrets his horrible decision he has made /me she puts her hand on his shoulder, trying to reassure him /me he looks up at her, and then back to the grave, still sad, still crying /me she embraces him tight, telling him "It's going to be okay" /me she offers her hand to him /me he grabs her hand, standing up /me she takes him alongside with her to safety

Character backstory (10 lines at least detailing you character's background. Events, job, family etc and should reflect your skills): Fiona is a quiet, respectful woman who was born and raised into a wealthy family. She was taken away from her mother, father, and brother during the Combine Invasion. She hasn't seen or heard from them since. Fiona does her best to help others, whether it's civilians, or officers. She was taken away from the ones she's loved, and she doesn't want anyone else to have to go through that much pain. Although the Combine were the ones that took her family away, she still wishes to serve them. She wants to be somebody. A protector. An officer. A friend.

---IC Information---
____________________________________________

Name: Fiona Wellington
CID: #37599
Amount of loyalist points: None.
Age: Early 20s.
Country of origin: America.
Hair colour: Light Brown
Eye colour: Hazel

Specific skills and specialist, such as medical knowlege, knowlege of technology etc?:


Have you had any previous affiliations with the CCA of the city or the UU as a whole?: No.


Have you had any previous infactions from the CCA or the UU as a whole?: No.
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Post  DIABLO258 Thu Jan 10, 2013 12:38 am

Cergis: DENIED

The story sounds great to be honest. But, the grammar needs improvement.
Please fix that.


DeadMercy or MisterQuiggles: DENIED

Steam name: DeadMercy or MisterQuiggles
Steam ID: STEAM_0:0:47614181
Age: 18
How long have you been roleplaying?: For about 1 or 2 years now.
How long have you been playing with The Crew?: Just joined today.
How long have you played on our server, in total?:(Don't know how to do this? Click here!)

Fix that.
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Post  Chris_Hansen Thu Jan 10, 2013 4:40 pm

Steam name: Don Walker
Steam ID: STEAM_0:1:33066220
Age: 16
How long have you been roleplaying?: Over 2 Years
How long have you been playing with The Crew?: About a day
How long have you played on our server, in total?: 6+ Hours
( Proof http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=118898146 ) Prob about 8 to 10 hours now, that was taken for my first application


20 lines of passive roleplay examples, using /it and /me. (Eg: /it The citizen runs through the checkpoint /me Gives chase)

Jack Johnson:Dang man, I remember back when there weren't any CCA. Good times.
Al Boier:Laughs a bit,"Yeah, that was the good days."
Jack Johnson:You know what? We need to mess this place up.
Al Boier:Yeah! Lets do it!
/it Distress call comes in from CWU to the CCA.
C18-CCA-CORE.05.3241:Copy, 03821 Moving in on targets.
C18-CCA-CORE.05.3241: Citizens! Face the wall!
/it Jack Johnson and Al Boier almost break their necks turning around to see the .03
Jack Johnson:Run!
*Jack Johnson tries to run, but is shot in his back calf.
C18-CCA-CORE.05.3241:Anti-Citizen!
C18-CCA-CORE.05.3241: /meTurns to Al Boier Citizen, face the wall.
C18-CCA-CORE.05.3241:Citizen, face the wall.
*Al Boier listens to the CORE officer.
C18-CCA-CORE.05.3241 /me Attempts to tie the man
[LOOC]C18-CCA-CORE.05.3241: Resist?
[LOOC]Al Boier:Nope.
*C18-CCA-CORE.05.3241 /me Successfully ties the man.
*C18-CCA-CORE.05.3241 /me Walks over to the other citizen
*C18-CCA-CORE.05.3241 /me Picks up the citizen and drags him to the Nexus along with his friend
CCA.UNION.03.03821: /me Laughs
C18-CCA-CORE.05.3241: What were you two thinking?
Jack Johnson: I guess we werent sir.
Al Boier: It was him that had the ideas, he was just telling me.
C18-CCA-CORE.05.3241: Thats why you didnt run?
Al Boier: Yes
C18-CCA-CORE.05.3241: Oh I see so...
Jack Johnson: /y Hold it right there
Jack Johnson: He was hel....
C18-CCA-CORE.05.3241: SHUTUP! You will have time to explain in the interrogation room.

20 lines of action roleplay examples, using /it and /me. (Eg: /it THe citizen runs through the checkpoint /me Gives chase)

/it*C18-CCA-CORE.05.3241 gets request of a citizen selling contraband, runs to area given.
John Dunnah: He's right there
**/it John Dunnah /me points toward the Contraband seller.
***C18-CCA-CORE.05.3241 /me goes to the Paul Massey
*C18-CCA-CORE.05.3241: Citizen
*C18-CCA-CORE.05.3241: Wall
**/it Paul Massey walks to wall
***C18-CCA-CORE.05.3241 /me Attempts to tie the man to preform a search
**Paul Massey /me attempts to elbow the Unit in the face.
*C18-CCA-CORE.05.3241: /Roll
*C18-CCA-CORE.05.3241 rolled 52 out of 100
Paul Massey: /Roll
Paul Massey rolled 57 out of 83
***C18-CCA-CORE.05.3241 /me blocks Citizens attempt to attack, Grabs his arm to complete tying him
***C18-CCA-CORE.05.3241 /me unholsters stun-stick
***C18-CCA-CORE.05.3241 /me attempts to knock anti citizen out
Paul Masses: /me attempts to doge the hits
C18-CCA-CORE.05.3241: /roll
C18-CCA-CORE.05.3241 rolled 87 out of 100
Paul Massey: /roll
Paul Massey rolled 45 out of 100
C18-CCA-CORE.05.3241: /me Beats citizen with stuntick untill he is knocked out
***C18-CCA-CORE.05.3241 /me Grabs Paul by the arm dragging him the the nexus
***C18-CCA-CORE.05.3241: Thought you could get away with it, didnt you?
***C18-CCA-CORE.05.3241 /me Laughs to himself
/it John Dunnah is standing in the corner watching C18-CCA-CORE.05.3241 drag away paul
John Dunnah: Thank you officer



Character backstory (10 lines at least detailing you character's background. Events, job, family etc and should reflect your skills):

-Childhood: Chris was born in the United States in 1993, His mother was a doctor and his father was a banker, When he was 5 his mother said to his father: "We should send Chris here to a Private school, He has been a smart boy so he should get a smart education." Chris was sent to a Private school for smart kids, He got trough the school pretty easy and was then sent to a Prep school, Were he has a interest in science.

-Adulthood: Chris was starting his study to earn a Bachelors physics, He gained the degree and started working on astrophysics and cryptology, He would go to the observatory every night and look at space to see if he was going to find aliens or a new star, Chris found this was getting him nowhere so he gave the job one last chance before he would quit.

-Seven Hour war: Chris was looking into space with his scope, He saw nothing but starts and the sun, Chris was angry and starting screaming at space, But suddenly he looked out the window and saw Portals transporting Xen creatures into the area, Chris was amazed he never knew that this was going to happen, So he decided to stay inside and wait, Before he knew it the portals raged and started ripping holes in the observatory, Chris screamed and ran to the exit, A bang was heard and Chris fell to the ground.

He woke up and saw Xen beings running to the City, Chris was shocked and he needed to get out of the country, Chris got into his car and drove, He thought about what would happen if he was caught by the Xen aliens, Looking at the portal storms from all directions which he knew was a bad thing that would send Xen beings to earth, He put his foot on the accelerator and drove as fast as he could.





---IC Information---
____________________________________________

Name: Chris Stevens
CID: 02897
Amount of loyalist points:0
Age: 23
Country of origin: United States
Hair colour: Brown
Eye colour: Blue

Specific skills and specialist, such as medical knowlege, knowlege of technology etc?: Chris attended a small nursing school as a teen, Other than that no.


Have you had any previous affiliations with the CCA of the city or the UU as a whole?: Chris has always been loyal to the CCA abiding by there rules. He also helps them out as much as possible.


Have you had any previous infactions from the CCA or the UU as a whole?: None
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Post  Archimedes Thu Jan 10, 2013 4:46 pm

Don Walker - ACCEPTED

Good rp examples and backstory. We don't have a UNION division of our CCA though.
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Age : 29
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Post  Cergis Thu Jan 10, 2013 6:53 pm

OOC Info____________________________________________________
Steam Name: Cergis
Steam ID: STEAM_0:0:40362518
Age:15
How long have you been roleplaying?: September 2012
How long have you been playing with The Crew?: January 6 2013
How long have you played on our server, in total?: 3 days so far
Passive Roleplay_____________________________________________

/me Walks down the path to secure Checkpoint A and notices something odd about the Checkpoint.
/me Gets closer to examine the Checkpoint A And see's something not right.
/me Radio's in "Looks like Checkpoint A has picked up something going through it at 3:30 AM.
/it SeC Radios back "I'll be there in a moment 02."
/me As i wait for the SeC i notice some Civilians come up to me and shout at me.
/it Civilians Say "Screw the combine!" "You Idiots!" "Let them burn!".
/me Starts to take out my shotgun and shoots in the air, Hoping they will run away.
/it The civilians starts to run off, except one of them.
/it SeC comes and helps me to get this one to the wall with no trouble, and he does not get into to much trouble at this part.
/me Asks him for his CID and Name. He doesn't Reply.
/it SeC gives me his Stunstick to warn him. I take it and after that he starts to mumble.
/me Yells "Tell me what your CID is now!" I did it with a scary and dark voice.
/it Says "John Barker, 76120..." I get a tie and get ready to tie him.
/me Says "resist?" He says "No" I tie him up and pat him down.
/it Sec says "You are doing well for a new member, I like it."
/me Salutes the SeC, and says "Thank you sir, it is a honor."
/me See's he has a crowbar on the civilian, and takes it, I start to laugh at him for having a Weapon.
/it Civilian starts to yell "You stupid combine! You will die!" I Laugh "Haha."
/me Says "Prepare to meet Civil Judgement!" I hit him 3 times before he gets knocked out.
/me Drags him to the nexus, Getting ready for next time someone gets mad at me.
/me hears the SeC say " your going to integrate him, got it?" After that I nod and turn my stunstick to high.
ACTION Roleplay_____________________________________________

/me Sits at the Checkpoint A, then Receives a Radio message that says "Rebel Forces incoming on bridge."
/it 05 Tells me "Get your gun, you're coming with us to help." I kinda get Scared, Because it was my first time fighting real people.
/me Starts to head toward the CAH building, loading my weapon, I start to hear gunshots on the bridge.
/me Yells "Get out of CAH, Civilians!" As I run toward the top I watch as all civilians get out of our way and get to the lobby.
/it 05 Tells me "You have your gun reloaded?!" I nod with a Yes.
/it 05 Opens the door, with a swiftly move, and runs toward cover yelling "02 get over here!"
/me Thinks "Just run for it 02!" And i say "I'm going!" somehow I get to 05 without getting shot!
/it Rebels Yell "Get out here combine!" they start to laugh of our chicken attempt.
/it 05 whispers "Take this grenade. Throw it!" he hands me the grenade.
/me I grab it with a swift movement and throw it with ease and it hits one rebel, then I hear a big boom!
/me Says "1 down 3 more to go!" 05 gives me a look.
/it 05 says "No time for fun and games 02!" he gives me an angry look.
/it Rebels yell "You! he was my friend... I'm gonna kill you!"
/me gives a laugh and 05 laughs with me against his anger and gets ready for more shots to be fired.
/me Radios in "03 and 01 could you come up here and give us some help? 03 and 01 says with a raspy voice "Copy."
/it 05 says "Get ready to shoot, I can hear them coming closer!" we count to 3 together and wait until they get to close.
/me I burst out with my SMG and Shoot out alot of bullets into one of the Rebels that were closer to us.
/it 05 Kills the vortagon with his shotgun and aims at the other rebel.
/it The rebel shoots 05 in the face, he falls down with a sudden dud...
/me starts to shoot the rebel with full force and keep shooting even if he was dead.
/it 03 and 01 finally show up but didn't make it in time and all 3 of us walk off to nexus carrying 05.

I was a farm boy helping out my papa while we helped the family survive the cold winter and hot summer, he was my only friend during those days.

I was born before the combine came while I was 21 years old, but let us focus on my earlier life for now.

When I was 10 although it was the first time I had shot my dad's rifle it was small, so I could use it, my dad taught me to hunt fish and survive in the wild.

When I was 12 I got my first deer kill that was a 15 point Buck. I was so interested in guns I told my dad that I would join the U.S. Army one day

My mother was not into that idea, her and my dad never got along. I would hear them fight at night it was scary...

When I was 14 I got severely humiliated at school. I got stressed and angry

One day at school while I went there with my rifle had 6 mags with me then I started shooting everyone I hated! it was hell that day.

The cops showed up and arrested me while my birthday was today too although My dad said I needed time to think straight while I didn't listen.

After 6 years of prison what I heard on a television that the earth was being token over that i thought was foolish while a combine guard came over to me, asked me what my name was while I told him.

He unlocked me and showed me to a aircraft while I got surprised but I followed him and we went to the first city I ever say... city 18

IC INFO____________________________________________________

Name: Alex Mckinly
CID: 24242
Loyalist points: 1 point
Age: 21 years old
Country of orgin: U.S.A
Hair colour: Brown
Eye color: Dark brown

Skills?: A great Marksman, Talented with surviving in the wild, Knows how to knife (was in prison)

Have you had any previous affiliations with the CCA of the city or the UU as a whole?: Yes, i have helped them, when they are looking for wanted civilians


Have you had any previous infactions from the CCA or the UU as a whole?: No
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Age : 24
Location : Minnesota

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This was submitted via steam chat from a user who is having problems with the forums.
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Steam name: [OBC] Scares70rm JR. [µC]
Steam ID: STEAM_0:1:18176535
Age: 14
How long have you been roleplaying?: 2 months.
How long have you been playing with The Crew?: 1 week.
How long have you played on our server, in total?: 1 week.

20 lines of passive roleplay examples:
Oliver Black: /me attempts to push past CORE at slums hardpoint.
Oliver Black: /roll
Oliver Black rolled a 87
CCA-C18-CORE.03.54123: /roll
CCA-C18-CORE.03.54123 rolled a 99.
CCA-C18-CORE.03.54123: /me pushes Oliver back.
CCA-C18-CORE.03.54123 yells: Move away, right now!
Oliver Black: /me attempts to spit in CORE's face.
Oliver Black: /roll
Oliver Black rolled a 39.
CCA-C18-CORE.03.54123: /roll
CCA-C18-CORE.03.54123 rolled a 21.
Oliver Black: /me spits in CORE's face.
CCA-C18-CORE.03.54123 radios: I need help at the slums hardpoint I got a anti-citizen here.
CCA-C18-CORE.03.54123 yells: Wall!
CCA-C18-CORE.03.54123: /me attempts to tie the man.
CCA-C18-CORE.03.54123: Resist?
Oliver Black: /me doesn't resist.
CCA-C18-CORE.03.54123 radios: anti-citizen down and being detained.
CCA-C18-CORE.03.54123: /me hits citizen until knocked out.

20 lines of action roleplay examples:
Oliver Black: /me attempts to shoot John.
Oliver Black: /roll
Oliver black rolled a 78.
John brown: /roll
John brown rolled a 53.
Oliver Black shoots John.
CCA-C18-CORE.03.54123: /me notices the man shoot the civilian and runs over to him.
Oliver Black: /me attempts to run from the CORE.
Oliver Black: /roll
Oliver Black rolled a 23.
CCA-C18-CORE.03.54123: /roll
CCA-C18-CORE.03.54123 rolled a 25.
CCA-C18-CORE.03.54123: /me trips the rebel and slams his body down on the ground.
CCA-C18-CORE.03.54123 radios: I have a rebel who shot a civilian in front of the plaza.
CCA-C18-CORE.03.54123: /me attempts to tie the rebel.
CCA-C18-CORE.03.54123: Resist?
Oliver Black: /me attempts to slip free and shoot the the CORE.
Oliver Black: /roll
Oliver Black rolled a 78.
CCA-C18-CORE.03.54123: /roll
CCA-C18-CORE.03.54123 rolled a 76.
Oliver Black: /me slips free and shoots CORE once.
CCA-C18-CORE.03.54123: /me rolls over.
CCA-C18-CORE.03.54123: /me attempts to shoot rebel twice in the head.
CCA-C18-CORE.03.54123: /roll
CCA-C18-CORE.03.54123 rolled a 98.
Oliver Black: /roll
Oliver Black rolled a 1.
CCA-C18-CORE.03.54123: /me shoots rebel twice in the head.
CCA-C18-CORE.03.54123 radios: Rebel amputated and dealt with.

Character backstory :
One day, when I was 6, I was playing with a suitcase I had found then a CP a lot bigger than me walked up the me and took it from me, pushed me up against the wall and said stay. At first I didn't know what he meant until I saw a rebel running past us with a fully loaded shotgun and fired at the CP. The CP's armor wasn't enough to hold back a point-blank shot from a shotgun. I sat there next to the CP's dead body and cried. I hated the rebels ever since.
I was taking a walk down to get my rations when this rebel walked out and was shooting CPs because he didn't get his rations. It turned into a firefight of 5 combine and 1 rebel. Of course the combine won because they were able to take over the earth in seven hours. So it was ended and I was able to get my rations like every other citizen.


---IC Information---
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Name: Calvin Box
CID: 43902
Amount of loyalist points: 0
Age: 25
Country of origin: City 18
Hair colour: Brown
Eye colour: Brown

Specific skills and specialist, such as medical knowlege, knowlege of technology etc?: Knowledge of technology.


Have you had any previous affiliations with the CCA of the city or the UU as a whole?: Nope.


Have you had any previous infactions from the CCA or the UU as a whole?: Nope.
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Post  [Redacted] Fri Jan 11, 2013 12:40 am

---OOC Information---
_______________________________________________________


Steam name:[]
[*][]HollerHavoc
Steam ID:STEAM_0:1:16735004
Age:15
How long have you been roleplaying?:2 years
How long have you been playing with The Crew?:About a week now.
How long have you played on our server, in total?:1 Day


20 lines of passive roleplay:

(CCA Unit on Patrol)

/me Patrols the plaza making sure everything is in line.
/me Walks down the street that leads to the slums checkpoint towards the main Plaza area.
/it The entrance into the nexus is around the corner waiting to be guarded.
/me Turns the corner after reaching the end of the street.
/me Walks towards the nexus checkpoint with the intention of guarding it.
/it Two suspicious looking citizens can be seen outside of the nexus entrance.
/me Approaches the citizens who can now be heard talking about the nexus.
C18-CCA-CORE.04.55332(The Unit I am.) says: "Isolate!"
/it The citizens quickly move without question.
John Walker says:"Sorry Sir..."
C18-CCA-CORE.04.55332(The Unit I am.) says: "Get out of here!"
/me Watches the specific citizens that were asked to isolate.
/it The citizens that were near the nexus can now be seen traveling towards the apartment, obeying the order they were given.
/me Feeling satisfied, moves behind a barricade at the nexus checkpoint and stands guard.
/me Watches the almost empty plaza making sure everybody is obeying the combine's will.
/it Only few citizens can be seen in the plaza, though they seem to be behaving.
/it Fellow CCA unit footsteps can be heard approaching the nexus checkpoint from the opposite side of where C18-CCA-CORE.04.55332(The Unit I am.) stands.
/me Sees fellow CCA step outside.(CI8-CCA-CORE.03.33256)
CI8-CCA-CORE.03.33256 says:"Everything going okay in the Plaza?"
/me responds with a nod "Everything is good for now..."
CI8-CCA-CORE.03.33256 says:"Need an assist for guarding? I've been asked to come and patrol out here."
C18-CCA-CORE.04.55332(The Unit I am.) says:"Negative, but the slums checkpoint seems pretty vulnerable to Anti-citizens."
CI8-CCA-CORE.03.33256 says:"Copy! I'll head there now."
/it CI8-CCA-CORE.06.33256 can be seen making his way towards where C18-CCA-CORE.04.55332(The Unit I am.) suggested with haste.
/me watches CI8-CCA-CORE.03.33256 head to the suggested checkpoint.
/me Continues to guard the nexus plaza with ease.
/it The plaza seems to be going well for the CCA, at the moment...



20 lines of action roleplay:

(Sweep situation)

/it Alarm is heard.
/me Searches the subway with Unit CI8-CCA-NOVA.03.88274.
CI8-CCA-HELIX.02.67355 radios in:We've got necrotics in the area.
CI8-CCA-NOVA.03.55332(My Unit) radios in:Rodger that!
/it Several moaning sounds are heard deeper in the subway.
/me Readies Ar2 Turning on flashlight as well.
/it CI8-CCA-NOVA.03.88274 moves in ahead of CI8-CCA-NOVA.03.55332(My Unit) With Ar2 at the ready carefully heading towards the sound.
/me Enters deeper into the Subway, following CI8-CCA-NOVA.03.88274 closely in case of an ambush.
/it Moans are heard in all directions.
/me Points Ar2 to the right aiming at where some of the moans are coming from with concentration.
CI8-CCA-NOVA.03.88274 yells: "Shit!, We've got necrotics!"
/it Zombies can now be seen by CI8-CCA-NOVA.03.88274 and CI8-CCA-NOVA.03.55332(My Unit).
/me Aims and fires several rounds at the incoming zombies which are to his right hitting and killing one.
/It several rounds are fired from CI8-CCA-NOVA.03.88274's Ar2 hitting and killing two zombies with a head shot. Both are on the opposite side.
/me Aims to the left now, pointing the ar2 at the now three incoming fast zombies and firing a single pulse round which vaporizes one instantly.
CI8-CCA-NOVA.03.88274 yells: "Lookout!"
/it He shoots the 2 other now very close fast zombies, killing one while CI8-CCA-NOVA.03.55332(My Unit) struggles to reload.
/it The remaining fast zombie pounces on CI8-CCA-NOVA.03.88274 knocking him to the ground as is rips his face apart.
/Me turns after reloading his Ar2 and shoots the zombie in the face at point blank range, killing it instantly.
/Me now sees a very mangled unit CI8-CCA-NOVA.03.88274 on the ground who appears to have had his mask torn apart.
/It Unit  CI8-CCA-NOVA.03.88274 is unconscious and bleeding out from wounds in the chest and face.
/Me Quickly whips out radio.
CI8-CCA-NOVA.03.55332(My Unit): "We need a medic down here ASAP!"
CI8-CCA-HELIX.02.67355 radios in: "Rodger, proceeding to your location!"
/me Waits for the Medic to arrive while carefully dragging the hurt unit up to a near by wall and resting him carefully there.
/it CI8-CCA-NOVA.03.88274 clearly needs immediate attention or else he well surely die.


Background Of Jacob Wilson:

       Jacob Wilson was born and not really properly raised in California. His parents Kate and John Wilson were both of Australian decent meaning Jacob inherited an accent from them. He lived in a very dirty apartment with his parents for his childhood. His dad was a lazy old factory worker who was only making $15 an hour and his mother worked in a dollar store stacking shelves only making minimum wage. Jacob always hated how lazy and stupid his parents were and never really properly bonded with them. Jacob was always encouraged to make it somewhere in life and change is family's history for once because he was mostly encouraged by his friends at school.

        Jacob was an apple that definitely fell very very far from the tree he was born from. He was the smartest kid in all of his classes and had taken a very heavy interest in becoming a skilled surgeon. Jacob had received many scholarships in high school and had very high marks as well. This had helped him get into Stratard University when he graduated from high school. Jacob had a very successful 7 years in university and had graduated as something he very much wanted to become, a very skilled surgeon. Jacob had received his medical degree and then later got accepted to work as a doctor in a hospital. He made a $111 salary which gave him enough money to buy a nice house to live in. Jacob had always had a rock solid heart meaning he never got involved in any relationships or such as he was never really raised properly. At this point Jacob had moved on way passed his parents and they were nothing to him.

       One lonely night Jacob had just finished performing very very difficult heart surgery with a team of 4 other surgeons. As per usual they were successful with the surgery. When Jacob got home that night it was 11:11 pm. He was alone in his house with nothing to do but sit and think about his life at the table. As he sat there thinking about his life his thoughts started to feel very green to him, but wait, these weren't thoughts they were the green lights of the portal from Xen to earth. There was a loud ground shaking sound coming from the portal. Jacob got up quickly and rushed over to his window to see many UFOs and such coming from the portal. He could not believe what he was looking at. There were aliens all over the streets causing mass hysteria. Screams were heard and chaos had arrived. Jacob was dazed, unable to think properly about what was going on. This happened for so long that time it seemed had caught up to Jacob. Suddenly the door to his house was smashed down with great force. Jacob turned to meet the eyes of three combine soldiers who had weapons pointed at him. Jacob surrendered and was taken by the soldiers. This was only the beginning of the earth changing 7 hour war.

             Many days had passed since this event and we now find Jacob confused aboard a train leading to City 18 apparently. Jacob notices an advertisement about the combine on the wall. It is at this point where Jacob makes a pretty smart choice. He decides to apply to become apart of the CCA. This is the only thing he sees that seems best for him.  


---IC Information---
____________________________________________

Name:Jacob Wilson
CID:30458
Amount of loyalist points:*Unknown*
Age:29
Country of origin:USA
Hair colour:*No hair colour as he is bald*
Eye colour:Dark Brown *Basically Black*

Specific skills and specialist, such as medical knowlege, knowlege of technology etc?:I am a skilled surgeon who received a Medical degree at a Stratard University. I have slight technical knowledge but mostly with medical technology used on patients and such. I know martial arts as I have trained as a hobby.


Have you had any previous affiliations with the CCA of the city or the UU as a whole?:No but I am hoping to start here.


Have you had any previous infactions from the CCA or the UU as a whole?:
No.


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Post  Cergis Fri Jan 11, 2013 8:04 pm

OOC Info____________________________________________________
Steam Name: Cergis
Steam ID: STEAM_0:0:40362518
Age:15
How long have you been roleplaying?: September 2012
How long have you been playing with The Crew?: January 6 2013
How long have you played on our server, in total?: 3 days so far
Passive Roleplay_____________________________________________

/me Walks down the path to secure checkpoint A and notices something odd about the checkpoint.
/me Gets closer to examine the checkpoint A And see's something not right.
/me Radio's in "Looks like checkpoint A has picked up something going through it at 3:30 AM.
/it SeC Radios back "I'll be there in a moment 02."
/me As i wait for the SeC i notice some civilians come up to me and shout at me.
/it Civilians Say "Screw the combine!" "You Idiots!" "Let them burn!".
/me Starts to take out my shotgun and shoots in the air, hoping they will run away.
/it The civilians starts to run off, except one of them.
/it SeC comes and helps me to get this one to the wall with no trouble, and he does not get into to much trouble at this part.
/me Asks him for his CID and Name. He doesn't Reply.
/it SeC gives me his Stunstick to warn him. I take it and after that he starts to mumble.
/me Yells "Tell me what your CID is now!" I did it with a scary and dark voice.
/it Says "John Barker, 76120..." I get a tie and get ready to tie him.
/me Says "resist?" He says "No" I tie him up and pat him down.
/it Sec says "You are doing well for a new member, I like it."
/me Salutes the SeC, and says "Thank you sir, it is a honor."
/me See's he has a crowbar on the civilian, and takes it, I start to laugh at him for having a Weapon.
/it Civilian starts to yell "You stupid combine! You will die!" I Laugh "Haha."
/me Says "Prepare to meet Civil Judgement!" I hit him 3 times before he gets knocked out.
/me Drags him to the nexus, Getting ready for next time someone gets mad at me.
/me hears the SeC say " your going to integrate him, got it?" After that I nod and turn my stunstick to high.
ACTION Roleplay_____________________________________________

/me Sits at the Checkpoint A, then Receives a Radio message that says "Rebel Forces incoming on bridge."
/it 05 Tells me "Get your gun, you're coming with us to help." I kinda get Scared, Because it was my first time fighting real people.
/me Starts to head toward the CAH building, loading my weapon, I start to hear gunshots on the bridge.
/me Yells "Get out of CAH, Civilians!" As I run toward the top I watch as all civilians get out of our way and get to the lobby.
/it 05 Tells me "You have your gun reloaded?!" I nod with a Yes.
/it 05 Opens the door, with a swiftly move, and runs toward cover yelling "02 get over here!"
/me Thinks "Just run for it 02!" And i say "I'm going!" somehow I get to 05 without getting shot!
/it Rebels Yell "Get out here combine!" they start to laugh of our chicken attempt.
/it 05 whispers "Take this grenade. Throw it!" he hands me the grenade.
/me I grab it with a swift movement and throw it with ease and it hits one rebel, then I hear a big boom!
/me Says "1 down 3 more to go!" 05 gives me a look.
/it 05 says "No time for fun and games 02!" he gives me an angry look.
/it Rebels yell "You! he was my friend... I'm gonna kill you!"
/me gives a laugh and 05 laughs with me against his anger and gets ready for more shots to be fired.
/me Radios in "03 and 01 could you come up here and give us some help? 03 and 01 says with a raspy voice "Copy."
/it 05 says "Get ready to shoot, I can hear them coming closer!" we count to 3 together and wait until they get to close.
/me I burst out with my SMG and Shoot out alot of bullets into one of the Rebels that were closer to us.
/it 05 Kills the vortagon with his shotgun and aims at the other rebel.
/it The rebel shoots 05 in the face, he falls down with a sudden dud...
/me starts to shoot the rebel with full force and keep shooting even if he was dead.
/it 03 and 01 finally show up but didn't make it in time and all 3 of us walk off to nexus carrying 05.

I was a farm boy helping out my papa while we helped the family survive the cold winter and hot summer, he was my only friend during those days.

I was born before the combine came while I was 21 years old, but let us focus on my earlier life for now.

When I was 10 although it was the first time I had shot my dad's rifle it was small, so I could use it, my dad taught me to hunt fish and survive in the wild.

When I was 12 I got my first deer kill that was a 15 point Buck. I was so interested in guns I told my dad that I would join the U.S. Army one day

My mother was not into that idea, her and my dad never got along. I would hear them fight at night it was scary...

When I was 14 I got severely humiliated at school. I got stressed and angry

One day at school while I went there with my rifle had 6 mags with me then I started shooting everyone I hated! it was hell that day.

The cops showed up and arrested me while my birthday was today too although My dad said I needed time to think straight while I didn't listen.

After 6 years of prison what I heard on a television that the earth was being token over that i thought was foolish while a combine guard came over to me, asked me what my name was while I told him.

He unlocked me and showed me to a aircraft while I got surprised but I followed him and we went to the first city I ever say... city 18

IC INFO____________________________________________________

Name: Alex Mckinly
CID: 24242
Loyalist points: 1 point
Age: 21 years old
Country of orgin: U.S.A
Hair colour: Brown
Eye color: Dark brown

Skills?: A great Marksman, Talented with surviving in the wild, Knows how to knife (was in prison)

Have you had any previous affiliations with the CCA of the city or the UU as a whole?: Yes, i have helped them, when they are looking for wanted civilians


Have you had any previous infactions from the CCA or the UU as a whole?: No
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Post  [Redacted] Sat Jan 12, 2013 2:00 am

I have looked over Jacob's background in my CCA application and it has come to my attention that this would probably lead to Jacob becoming apart of the resistance so I am making revisions to his back story.


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Post  Jaquecz Sat Jan 12, 2013 2:08 pm

team name: Jaquecz
Steam ID:STEAM_0:1: 42590752
Age:15
How long have you been roleplaying?: 3 years
How long have you been playing with The Crew?: 1 week
How long have you played on our server, in total?: CCA Applications - Page 4 D9EB10132262F8F247E5A2110A756E3D03637DB2


20 lines of passive roleplay examples, using /it and /me. (Eg: /it The citizen runs through the checkpoint /me Gives chase)
/me Sits with his head in his arms
/it MPF appears and approaches swinging his stun baton like a toy
/me Becomes wary and sits up more properly, not wanting to leave any reasons for the cp to beat him
/it MPF approaches and the trademark sound of his vocoder sounds as he speaks
CCA-C18-### says "Citizen."
/it flips the nearby can of Breen's water to the ground off the trash can, it makes a clank as it hits the ground
/me Raises an eyebrow staring at the trash can and the Cop
/it He begins to tap his foot, obviously waiting for something
/me Sits still, simply shocked this is happening to him
CCA-C18-### says"Citizen, pick up the can, and put it in the trash can."
/me Gets up and begins to walk away, hoping the obnoxious Cp will ignore him
CCA-C18-### "I said, Pick, up, the can."
/me Stops and turns around
CCA-C18-### "Heh heh heh"
/me Walks to the can and picks it up
CCA-C18-### "Now put it in the trash can"
/me Crunches the can in his hand, simply boiling with rage at how this little #@!%^ thinks he can do this because he has a @#^ing weapon, and throws it in the cop's face
/it The Can bounces from the facemask and drops from the Cop's face mask pathetically, but the Cop flinches anyway, apparently shocked at how a lowly little citizen can just defy him.
/me Goes for the Metrocop's testicles with his foot
/it the blow lands home with a satisfying thwack.
/it The Cop lets out a scream, made into an unnatural screech by his vocoder
/me Laughs hysterically and sprints away into a nearby alleyway
Markoslo, Sheperd yells "Screw You!!"
/it The Echo of the vocoder from the metrocop can be heard along with his request, it comes out as an series of crackly mumbles and numbers.


20 lines of action roleplay examples, using /it and /me. (Eg: /it The citizen runs through the checkpoint /me Gives chase)
/me Stops at the edge of the alleyway panting
Markoslo says:"haha who's the big,bad wolf now"
/it a comical cricket sound is heard
/me Looks out on the road
/it A few Metrocops with their stunsticks flicked on approach, the crackle of the sticks send a shiver through nearby citizens, obviously they responded to the previous cp's call, goal in mind, and very angry.
/me Eyes widen and turns back to the alleyway, only to find the Metrocop from earlier standing there
/it The cop pulls out his gun and points it at you
CCA-C18-### "Your dead now you little punk!"
/me Turns the alleyway and sprints for the slums, avoiding the shot from the cop and making the three others break into a run as well.
/it The cop in the alleyway swears and exits the alleyway to get another chance to kill
/it The cop from the alleyway lets loose with more shots, most going wide, one connecting
/me Grunts from the bullet wound and tries to ignore it
*Markoslo, Sheperd rolled 10/100*
/me Stops foolishly for a few seconds, cradling his arm moaning like a little child at the insignificant injury.
/it The metro cop can be heard chuckling as he walks up casually to Markoslo.
/it The metro cop from the alleyway puts his pistol up to Markoslo's head, the metal barrel sends chills down his spine, made even colder as he thoughts turn to how he will die.
/me Gulps and begins to plead for his life, sobbing and simply blathering incomprehensible words.
Markoslo says:"N-No i don't wanna die, i don't know what i was doing, i-i'm sorry p-please....
/it The Cop reloads and tighten's his finger, making his hand jump back from recoil and his facemask becoming yellow from a flash
/me Drops to the ground with a blank stare and a sickening wet thud
/it Blood pools around the body expanding from his skull.
CCA-C18-### "Heh,heh,heh"


Character backstory (10 lines at least detailing you character's background. Events, job, family etc and should reflect your skills):

---IC Information---
____________________________________________

Name: Markoslo, Sheperd
CID:10596
Amount of loyalist points: Don't know
Age: 25
Country of origin: Canada eh?
Hair color: Black
Eye color: Black

Specific skills and specialist, such as medical knowledge, knowledge of technology etc?:Was an engineer before and regular non-combine and has had experience with fixing multiple vehicles and making and fixing multiple types of technology, and has experience with firearms and some explosives.


Have you had any previous affiliations with the CCA of the city or the UU as a whole?: Mark has never caused any trouble for the CCA, and heard how they lived from eaves dropping on multiple conversations of patrolling metro-cops.

BACKSTORY: Mark was your average citizen, nothing really special besides a few encounters with headcrabs before the Combine took over, combined with his uncanny curiosity, he ended up learning alot about the parasites and how they work, he didn't exactly want to learn some of it.
After the 7 hour war he wasn't too happy about how restricted life was, so he ended up in the slums and had ended up needing to avoid multiple Sweeps Out-run zombies and as far as the CCA is concerned, he isn't in their bad books.
since he wasn't seen yet, he decided to make his way back to where it was more "civil" deciding that he would take beatings over being used as a snack or getting shot anyday. he recently made it back into the plaza and now wants to join the CCA seeing being in the slums wasn't worth it, too much antlions and zombies for his taste.

Have you had any previous infactions from the CCA or the UU as a whole?
Nope i don't think so...


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Post  Gremnkai Sat Jan 12, 2013 2:17 pm

There.... Is no backstory..... Your Action RP is 16 lines (Every /me or conversation counts as one even if it spans through several lines) and on this server its CCA not MPF.
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