CCA Applications

edit'd app hopefully better now

---OOC Information---
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Steam name: Fansastick
Steam ID: Fansastick
Age: 19
How long have you been roleplaying?: Like 3 years~
How long have you been playing with The Crew?: Look at the question below
How long have you played on our server, in total?: 6 hours 21 mins


20 lines of passive roleplay examples, using /it and /me. (Eg: /it The citizen runs through the checkpoint /me Gives chase)
/me Patrols the plaza with her stunstick at her side
/it Some citizens are begining to group up
/it the citizens start raising fists and yelling
/me She runs over to the group turning her stunstick on
/me "Everyone put your fists down now!"
/it The scared citizens back off slightly putting there fists to there sides
/me Points to the citizens who put there fists up
/me "Both of you on the wall now!"
/it The citizens hobble to the wall
/me She starts to tie the first citizen
/it The citizen elbows her in the side
/me She stubbles back turning on the stunstick
/it The citizen moves back onto the wall becoming scared
/me Beats the citizen and ties him on the ground
/it The other citizen is awaiting to be tied
/me ties the second citizen and searchs him
/me Beats the citizens untill he falls
/me Picks up both the citizens taking them to detainment
/it The CORE DvL leader walks in
/me salutes him
/it "Good work, write a report and get back to patrolling"

20 lines of action roleplay examples, using /it and /me. (Eg: /it THe citizen runs through the checkpoint /me Gives chase)
/me patrols the plaza with her stunstick at her side
/me notices two citizens in a verbal altercation
/me approaches the two, stunstick at her side
/me raises her stunstick
/me "What is the problem here?"
/it the two citizens turn, scowls across both of their faces
/me "I said what what is the problem here, citizens!"
/it Citizen 1 points to Citizen 2
**Citizen 1 "He stole my ration!"
/me points to citizen 2
/me "Is this true, citizen?"
/it Citizen 2 remains silent, before breaking into a sprint away
/me clips her stun baton onto her belt, giving chase to Citizen 2
/me catches up to Citizen 2, due to him being malnourished
/me tackles Citizen 2 to the ground
/it Citizen 2 struggles to get away
/me "Citizen! Stop resisting arrest!"
/me attempts to forcibly tie the criminal
/it Citizen 2 doesn't resist
/me zipties his wrists together, dragging him up from the ground onto his feet
/me Reports the citizen's infractions, before walking him to the nexus
/me throws the citizen into a cell, filling out a sheet and returning to standard operatives.

Character backstory (10 lines at least detailing you character's background. Events, job, family etc and should reflect your skills):
Myzie Stone was born in a small town somewhere in the United Kingdom. She was born to a loving mother, two older brothers, and one sister. She never knew her father, which still bothers her to this day. Her family members were all lazy, but she always tried to best to be active.

In elementary school she had only one friend, they spent all their days together, they could’ve been called inseparable… In junior high, her friend moved to another state, Myzie was devastated, but she forced herself to quickly get over it. She was a loner for the rest of junior high. She never talked to anybody, and nobody talked to her. In high school she became noticed by many, because she was one of the best players on the Volleyball team. Still she didn’t have any friends, she sometimes thought to herself that having no friends was good, because it improved her grades not having to worry and think about someone else.


She has just completed her days of college, gaining her doctorate degree in Psychology. She has decided not to continue on with a job in that field, instead spend a year resting. During that year she was active in many local sports events.

Later that year… Storms started raging across the planet, strange creatures were seen being transported out of the portals, wreaking havoc everywhere. Myzie and many other in her area were rushed to safety shelters, few shelters could hold out the alien creatures. Unfortunately, her shelter was one of the ones that just couldn’t hold out. During the invasion, a different alien race started to invade; they were more organized, like a full army. They began to drop towering buildings onto the surface, and they slaughtered innocent children and pregnant women. Earth tried to defend itself, but the forces from the portal were too strong, before Myzie even knew it, her planet had just been taken over by a strange alien race

Much isn't remembered by her after the takeover, except many deaths.. Where she is now they have broken up the world into districts or "cities." After being tested and broken down by the combine alien race, she is transferred to what the aliens call District 8…

In City 8, she resurfaces. It is strange to her, not knowing the native language, she sometimes wonders if she should have studied other languages. In her current district, she lays low. Only coming out when told to, or to get her ration. Reporting the occasional crime, she gains minimal respect from the units.

About a year later…

She is in City 18, the reason is unknown to her why she isn't in City 8 anymore, but it doesn't bother her... In City 18 her life reaches a new height... She had reported multiple crimes in City 18, which seem to happen a lot. In that time she also begins to open up to others, communicating more, maybe a vow to herself made her do this, or more chances in city 18, but she was going somewhere. By now she has been rewarded many times with rations and other goods by unit's thankful for her reports.

About a month later, still in City 18. Myzie has been loyalist for about 2 months now. She has reported multiple crimes, and is also trying to become well known as loyal. She decides she wants to be more beneficial to the union.. After many days of thinking, she has finally decided she wants to join the CCA.

Her back story ends here, at the present time, where she is trying to apply to join the CCA

---IC Information---
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Name: Myzie Stone
CID: 65342
Amount of loyalist points: 0
Age: 29
Country of origin: UK
Hair colour: Blonde
Eye colour: Green

Specific skills and specialist, such as medical knowlege, knowlege of technology etc?:
Degree in Psychology.

Have you had any previous affiliations with the CCA of the city or the UU as a whole?:
No.

Have you had any previous infactions from the CCA or the UU as a whole?:
No.

Steam name: Jackal Blackout
Steam ID: STEAM_0:0:53221136
Age: 15
How long have you been roleplaying?: 2 years
How long have you been playing with The Crew?: 3 days
How long have you played on our server, in total?: You must have played here for at least 6 hours. (Don't know how to do this? Click here!) 6 hours


20 lines of passive roleplay examples, using /it and /me. (Eg: /it The citizen runs through the checkpoint /me Gives chase)
/me Walks around the checkpoint leading to the Nexus
/it Sees a citizen come near the checkpoint
CCA-C18-CORE.06.66868 says "Move along citizen."
/it Citizen sits down and is watching the officer
CCA-C18-CORE.06.66868 says "This is your last warning."
/it Citizen gets up and walks away.
/me Continues to guard the Nexus checkpoint
/it Citizen walks back with more people
CCA-C18-CORE.06.66868 says "Isolate."
/it All but one citizen leaves
/me Thinking what to do with him
/it Citizen gets up and starts walking to the check point
CCA-C18-CORE.06.66868 says "Move back right now."
Citizen says "No sir."
CCA-C18-CORE.06.66868 says "Move back now."
/it Citizen still doesn't move back
/me Walks over to citizen
CCA-C18-CORE.06.66868 says "Wall."
/it Citizen gets on the wall
/me Ties up citizen
(We roll i win)
CCA-C18-CORE.06.66868 says "Apply."
Citizen says "James Bround, 56974."
/me Checks James Broud
/me Finds nothing
/it James Broud tries to struggle
/me Holds James Broud
CCA-C18-CORE.06.66868 says "Hold still."
/it James holds still
CCA-C18-CORE.06.66868 says "Ok your clean get out of here."
/me Unties James Broud
/it James Broud walks away
/me Goes back to Nexus checkpoint

20 lines of action roleplay examples, using /it and /me. (Eg: /it THe citizen runs through the checkpoint /me Gives chase)
/me Stands guard at the Nexus checkpoint
/it Five rebels appear and start to shoot at the officer
/me Takes cover behind checkpoint
/me Calls for back up
/it Rebels start moving closer
/it Two Combine soldiers come out of the Nexus
/me Rises up from cover and pulls out mp7
CCA-C18-CORE.06.66868 says "Give me some cover!"
/it The two combine soldiers starts to fire at rebels
/me Moves behind a blown up wall
/me Rises up from wall and starts shooting at rebels
/it The rebels run into the apartments and closes the doors
/it Rebels get into cover they can find
/me Moves from wall over to the apartment doors
/it The two combine soldiers follow
/me Opens door
/it One Combine soldier gets shot and dies
/me Sticks mp7 around the door corner and shoots one rebel
/it Rebels fall back and run upstairs
/me Walks slowly up stairs
/it Rebel shoots CCA-C18-CORE.06.66868 in the arm
/me Falls down and starts rolling over in pain
CCA-C18-CORE.06.66868 says "I'm hit!"
/it CCA-C18-CORE.06.78863 comes up to help CCA-C18-CORE.06.66868
/it Rebels shoot CCA-C18-CORE.06.78863
/it CCA-C18-CORE.06.78863 dies
/me CCA-C18-CORE.06.66868 bleeds to death

Character backstory (10 lines at least detailing you character's background. Events, job, family etc and should reflect your skills):
Jackal Blackout was born in Berlin Germany 1992 August 20th, he lived in a troubled house hold and his dad drank and abused his mother and him, one day his mother disappeared and was never found. Over the loss of his mother he was very depressed and his grades in school started to go down, since his mom wasn't there any more his dad was very abusive to him and was hitting him. One day he was taken away from his dad and put in a orphanage. He grew up in a orphanage most of his life. He was adopted when he was 15 and lived with a very nice family with two other children one a girl and one a boy, he never liked to spend time with his new family he would mostly stay in his room and cry about his real mother. He ran away when he was 17 and got a job at a tv store. When he turned 18 it wasn't long till the Combine invaded Earth, He was put in City 17. He lived in City 17 ever since the Combine took over Earth and never had to leave.

---IC Information---
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Name:Jackal Blackout
CID:66868
Amount of loyalist points:0
Age:24
Country of origin:Germany
Hair colour:Brown
Eye colour:Brown

Specific skills and specialist, such as medical knowlege, knowlege of technology etc?:
No.

Have you had any previous affiliations with the CCA of the city or the UU as a whole?:
No.

Have you had any previous infactions from the CCA or the UU as a whole?: No.

Denied.

[OBC] Scares70rm JR. [µC]

Rp examples were great, but your back story ruined it. There were no children in the hl2 universe, fix this and re apply in two days! And this is more or less realistic just cause they took over the earth in seven hours, does not mean the rebel lost for that reason.

Dracul i didn't know you were able to reply to apps..?

Ok here comes a doosey, sorry if I'm not ultra in depth:
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[OBC] Scares70rm JR. [µC] - DENIED

You understand the roll mechanics pretty well (as you were shoving it down my throat like valve shoves hl2's physics engine down on its gamers), but you missed the most important part, the actual rp. It's not just a sequence of events but a vivid story being played out.

Also you backstory is completely against preset hl2 canon. Read up on it and trash this app.
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[][*][]HollerHavoc - ACCEPTED

Just beautiful, there is a clear sign of time and effort which is what rp is all about.
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Cergis - DENIED

Your grammer... is just awful. The rp examples are ok, but when I have to spend a minute to understand what they mean, its just annoying.

Also, Combine would have killed you in prison, not relocated you. They killed all people with military experience, mental illnesses, children, prisoners, and anyone not inside a city when it was sealed.
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Jaquecz - DENIED

Rp examples were ok, but we don't call them mpf, they are CCA (Combine Civil Authority)

Backstory was in the wrong section, unrealistic, and didn't include any of his life as a child or before the 7 hour war.
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Fansastick - ACCEPTED

Rp examples were good, compact but very descriptive.

Backstory was AMAZING
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Jackal Blackout - ACCEPTED

Rp examples were solid.

Backstory has a slight inconsistency with when his age the the 7 hour war but I'm not gonna be that much of an ass.

Archimedes wrote:
Cergis - DENIED

Your grammer... is just awful.

Grammar*

Steam name: Jamiefoxx121
Steam ID: 0:1:26761500
Age: 17
How long have you been roleplaying?: I have been roleplaying for 6 year’s now.
How long have you been playing with The Crew?: About 9 hours
How long have you played on our server, in total?: You must have played here for at least 6 hours. (Don't know how to do this? Click here!) I have been playing on this server for about 9 hours now


20 lines of passive roleplay examples, using /it and /me. (Eg: /it The citizen runs through the checkpoint /me Gives chase)
John Jacoby casually walks into a restricted sector.
CCA.Core.03.818 Says: Citizen!, Hold it right there!
John Jacoby stops and turns to the unit.
John Jacoby says: Did I do something wrong sir?
CCA. C18.CORE.03.818 Says: Citizen, you have walked into a restricted sector.
CCA. C18.CORE.03.818 upholsters stun stick and flick’s it on
CCA.C18.CORE.03.818 Says: Citizen, Wall!
John Jacoby walks over to wall and places hands on it.
CCA.C18.Core.03.818 Radios in: I have a citizen that trespassed into a restricted sector. Detaining him for five minutes.
Dispatch says :Copy that
CCA.C18.CORE.03.818 Says: Citizen apply!
John Jacoby says: John Jacoby 99918
CCA. C18.CORE.03.818 types his information into his data pad. Comes back clean.
CCA.C18.CORE.03.818 ties the citizen
CCA.C18.CORE.03.818 Says Resist?
John Jacoby Says: No
CCA.C18.CORE.03.818 flicks on stun stick
CCA.C18.CORE.03.818 knocks out the citizen.
John Jacoby drops to the floor.
CCA.C18.CORE.03.818 picks up the citizen and bring him to a cell.
CCA.C18.Core.03.818 throws John Jacoby into a detainment cell.





20 lines of action roleplay examples, using /it and /me. (Eg: /it THe citizen runs through the checkpoint /me Gives chase)
Jack smith walks by Jamie Jacoby
Jack smith stops right in front of Jamie Jacoby and pulls out a gun
Jack smith yells: Give me all your money, or they’re going to have scrape your brains off the side walk.
Jamie Jacoby steps back a few steps
Jamie Jacoby says: Pleases man I don’t want any trouble.
CCA. C18. CORE. 03.991 see’s the confrontation.
CCA.C18.CORE.03.991 Yells: Citizen!, Hold it Right there!
Jack smith turns from Jamie Jacoby and looks at the Civil protection unit.
Jack smith says: Oh shit.
Jack smith runs
CCA.C18.CORE. 03.991 Radio’s in: In pursuit of Anti Citizen.
Dispatch Says: copy that.
CCA.C18.CORE.03.991 Attempts to tackle Jack smith.
CCA.C18.CORE.03.991 Rolls 99 out of 100
Jack smith Roll’s 87 out of 100
CCA.C18.Core.03.991 tackle’s Jack smith to the ground.
Jack smith try’s Attempts to get out of the unit’s grip
Jack smith Roll’s 94 out of 100
CCA.C18.CORE.03.991 Roll’s 99 out of 100.
CCA.C18.CORE.03.991 Slams Jacks smith face on the brick wall.
Jack smith spits out out a tooth
Jack smith says: you bastared.
CCA.C18.Core.03.991: Resist?
Jack smith says: No
CCA.C18.CORE.03.991 Radios in: Detaining Anti citizen.










Character backstory (10 lines at least detailing you character's background. Events, job, family etc should reflect your skills): Jamison Mark smith grew up in the city of Chicago in a 2 room apartment with 3 brothers and 2 sisters before the invasion . When Jamison was only 11 years old his father got killed in a shooting accident. So to keep up with the rent Jamison mother had to work two jobs. One as a parking Attendant and the other at a bartender at a local pub down the street. Jamison was fascinated in computers and technology. When his mother was out working Jamison use to take the family computer and take it apart and put it back together again. Jamison wanted to start his own computer repair buissness but sadly he dident have enough money to put him through school. so jamison dream never came true.So jamison started working at his mother's bar as a chef.
---IC Information---
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Name: Jamison mark smith
CID: 29833
Amount of loyalist points: None
Age: 17
Country of origin: United states
Hair colour: Brown
Eye colour: Brown

Specific skills and specialist, such as medical knowlege, knowlege of technology etc?: I have Knowledge in technology .


Have you had any previous affiliations with the CCA of the city or the UU as a whole?: No


Have you had any previous infactions from the CCA or the UU as a whole?: No I have not


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Last edited by DIABLO258 on Mon Jan 07, 2013 8:35 pm; edited 6 times in total
DIABLO258
Owner



Posts: 401
Join date: 2012-07-21
Age: 16
Location: Minnesota

Jamiefoxx121: DENIED

Your Steam ID was incorrect. Please fix that, its important.
I need picture evidence of your Playtime amount.

You did not meet the required amount of 20 RP example lines.
Your RP examples didnt start with /me or /it once. There for do not count as RP lines.

Your Backstory was also not long enough nor in depth enough.

Please Re-Apply in 2 days.

Steam name:X-Anthony
Steam ID:STEAM_0:0:52521030
Age:16
How long have you been roleplaying?: I have role played for about 2 full days now in servers
How long have you been playing with The Crew?: hours. LEAST
How long have you played on our server, in total?: 7 hours 30 minutes 45 seconds. You must have played here for at least 6 hours. 7 1/2 hours


20 lines of passive roleplay examples, using /it and /me. (Eg: /it The citizen runs through the checkpoint /me Gives chase)/me Walks around the checkpoint leading to the Nexus
/it Sees a citizen come near the checkpoint
CCA-C18-CORE.06.66868 says "Move along citizen."
/it Citizen sits down and is watching the officer
CCA-C18-CORE.06.66868 says "This is your last warning."
/it Citizen gets up and walks away.
/me Continues to guard the Nexus checkpoint
/it Citizen walks back with more people
CCA-C18-CORE.06.66868 says "Isolate."
/it All but one citizen leaves
/me Thinking what to do with him
/it Citizen gets up and starts walking to the check point
CCA-C18-CORE.06.66868 says "Move back right now."
Citizen says "No sir."
CCA-C18-CORE.06.66868 says "Move back now."
/it Citizen still doesn't move back
/me Walks over to citizen
CCA-C18-CORE.06.66868 says "Wall."
/it Citizen gets on the wall
/me Ties up citizen
(We roll i win)
CCA-C18-CORE.06.66868 says "Apply."
Citizen says "James Bround, 56974."
/me Checks James Bround
/me Finds nothing
/it James Broud tries to struggle
/me Holds James Broud
CCA-C18-CORE.06.66868 says "Hold still."
/it James holds still
CCA-C18-CORE.06.66868 says "Ok your clean get out of here."
/me Unties James Broud
/it James Broud walks away
/me Goes back to Nexus checkpoint

20 lines of action roleplay examples, using /it and /me. (Eg: /it THe citizen runs through the checkpoint /me Gives chase)/me Stands guard at the Nexus checkpoint
/it Five rebels appear and start to shoot at the officer
/me Takes cover behind checkpoint
/me Calls for back up
/it Rebels start moving closer
/it Two Combine soldiers come out of the Nexus
/me Rises up from cover and pulls out mp7
CCA-C18-CORE.06.66868 says "Give me some cover!"
/it The two combine soldiers starts to fire at rebels
/me Moves behind a blown up wall
/me Rises up from wall and starts shooting at rebels
/it The rebels run into the apartments and closes the doors
/it Rebels get into cover they can find
/me Moves from wall over to the apartment doors

Character backstory (10 lines at least detailing you character's background. Events, job, family etc and should reflect your skills):
A man who is 24 and was born in the state of Mississippi. Lived with sister in Colorado and saw her die by the combine by a shotgun shell to the head. Fought in World War Three and saw over 50,000 men and women in his army die. Half of the rest of the remaining army retreated but the remaining 1/2 died... Except him. He was brought to a camp where the environment was very harsh. He escaped the camp and wandered around killing and hunting the people who killed his family secretly. He successfully found the six men who killed his family and murdered them. He found a old-time friend and slept on his friends couch. A few days later the man left the house journeying to other areas. Three weeks later he was found by the combine and shot two times in both arms trying to fight them off. The combined grouped together and took him down. He was put on a train and is now living where he is still standing today, promising for vengeance every day to the combine army. Many years later after searching he gave up and wanted to join the combines for more power and not be a regular citizen.

---IC Information---
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Name:James Brockway
CID:#48326
Amount of loyalist points:0
Age:24
Country of origin:Mississippi
Hair colour: Brown
Eye colour: Green
Specific skills and specialist, such as medical knowlege, knowlege of technology etc?: Can take large amounts of pain and very large amount of knowledge.


Have you had any previous affiliations with the CCA of the city or the UU as a whole?: No


Have you had any previous infactions from the CCA or the UU as a whole?: No

The member 'anthmaster' has done the following action : Rolled:

#1 'Roll' : 4, 3, 3, 6, 2, 2, 4, 3, 4, 4, 3, 3, 3, 5, 6, 2, 5, 5, 6, 4, 2, 3, 5, 1, 2, 5, 4, 4, 4, 1, 5, 5, 1, 6, 6, 6, 4, 3, 2, 1, 1, 6, 2, 1, 6, 3, 3, 3, 4, 5, 6, 5, 2, 6, 4, 4, 1, 6, 3, 1, 3, 4, 6, 3, 1, 4, 3, 1, 2, 5, 1, 1

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#2 'Roll' : 2, 5, 6, 2, 1, 5, 4, 6, 1, 5, 3, 1, 3, 2, 4, 4, 3, 5, 3, 2, 1, 3, 4, 4, 6, 6, 5, 4, 6, 2, 3, 1, 1, 5, 6, 4, 4, 6, 4, 5, 6, 5, 3, 1, 6, 3, 2, 5, 3, 3, 2, 1, 5, 2, 5, 3, 1, 3, 1

---IC Information---
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Name:Matt Kealin
CID:#93978
Amount of loyalist points:
Age:67
Country of origin: American
Hair colour:Grey
Eye colour:Black

Specific skills and specialist, such as medical knowlege, knowlege of technology etc?: I was hired to be a test subject for special drugs used by the U.S.M.C in riot control. Before this, I went to medical school before this for about 3-4 years.


Have you had any previous affiliations with the CCA of the city or the UU as a whole?: No, I tryed my bust to stay away from the C.C.A, but I feel that I should help them because I saw how other people gatter around posts and cause trouble.


Have you had any previous infactions from the CCA or the UU as a whole?: No, I would never bother with any of that stuff, I would only leave my home in 45th if I was getting my rations.

X-Anthony - DENIED

Action RP is not 20 lines.

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rightbehindu28 - DENIED

You are missing the first half of your app (the ooc part)

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[REAPPLY IN 2 DAYS]

OOC INFO___________________________________________________
Steam name:Cergis
Steam ID:STEAM_0:0:40362518
Age:15
How long have you been roleplaying?: 2010
How long have you been playing with The Crew?:January 6 to today
How long have you played on our server, in total?:at least 4 days? enough to get CCA

ROLEPLAY EXAMPLES___________________________________________
/me I start to head to Checkpoint A before talking to 04 about the citizens being "disorganized".
/it 04 says "These citizens seem to be quite messy around the streets."
/me I nod at 04 agreeing with him saying "True, make sure they don't stink either.
/it A citizen comes up to us and laughs like something is funny while we give him a cautious look.
/me I say "Citizen, move back right now!" he backs off while he laughs that's when I get mad
/me I take out a stunstick and yells "Citizen, wall now!" he goes to the wall, that made him shut up.
/it 04 watches from a distance silently while tapping his foot quietly.
/me I take out data tablet and says "Citizen, apply." he starts to mumble quietly before I push him to speak louder
/it The citizen says with a rusty voice "Bob Nefhur, 29741." I tap on the data tablet quickly and find his name while nodding.
/me attempts to tie him (resist?) he then starts to run like the wind!
/me Gives him a chase with a sprint before 04 starts to run toward me.
/it The citizen runs toward a dark alley and somehow has a flashlight, I see the light and know that it is a rebel.
/me Radios 04 "Anti-Citizen has a flashlight, Copy?" I get my flashlight out and starts to run again.
/it 04 Reply's with a excited voice "Copy that over." he turns on his flashlight and continues toward the alley.
/me Starts to walk slowly through the alley while having my gun pulled out.
/it The anti-citizen then jumps out with a knife and attempts to knife me.
/it The anti-citizen rolls 61 out of 100.
/me Attempts to dodge, i Rolled a 72 out of 100.
/me Dodges and attempts to tackle him with a bruteful force.
/it The anti-citizen attempts to dodge 27 out of 100.
/me Rolls a 62 out of 100.
/me Tackles him while being tied.
/me Then knocks him out with his stunstick, i grab him and drag him to nexus.
ACTION ROLEPLAY___________________________________________
/it The radio tower yells "All ground personal please report to checkpoint B. *repeats*"
/me Gets my pistol loaded with 12 bullets and extra mags in his backpack.
/me Heads out of nexus while checking my pistol for jams.
/it 04 runs past me and nods to me to catch up and hurry.
/me Starts to sprint toward checkpoint B with a reckless run.
/it EpU starts to brief with us about the rebels movements before they tell us that we are going to starts a little more safety provisions.
/me Asks a question "When will we do this, today or any day?" he nods while saying "today..."
/it Yells "Move out!" everyone agrees and heads through the force field.
/me Runs through while getting a radio signal "Rebels!" i get wary or my surrounding
/it 03 gets shot by a sniper while I watch him fall with a sudden *clank* from his armor.
/me Takes cover while a sniper almost hits me. I fall to the ground reaching cover.
/it A rebel throws a grenade quite close to me after that I couldn't hear anything while I got out my pistol.
/me Jumps out shooting the closest rebel I could see while getting a direct hit to his forehead.
/me Runs closer to the rebel snipers while reloading his pistol.
/it 04 runs up to me and hands me some extra ammo and says "Your gonna need it."
/me I give him a nod and looks toward the last 2 rebels while i jump out running toward them with a high speed chase.
/it The rebels starts to shoot at me but has no luck at getting me.
/me I shoot at the rebels one getting in the chest and one in the arm.
/it both the rebels scream with agony and fear while the limp away with a brisk pace.
/me chases after them but 04 stops me saying "We don't have to do that..."
BACKSTORY_________________________________________________
I grew up in the U.S Before i was born my dad died from a car accident, My mother was a doctor when I was born but while I was a boy my mother said nothing about my father and got married to a different man.
When I was 12 years old.I lost my mother to another car accident after that my step-dad left me to a adopted family.
I was 14 when I had grief about my lost family and I was left of my family... I had nothing, my "parents" hated me a lot, my "brothers" hated me too, they thought i was a nobody.
When I was 17 I left my home and went to Cottage grove, after 2 days driving it was my birthday and I knew i was 18 so after that I went to college to study, to become a writing teacher.
I was 24 when i became a writing teacher, I had everything set after getting that job, I signed up to be a Middle School teacher, to teach the Children of today.
One day during the middle of summer while the news said that aliens came out of these things called portals and after a bunch of fighting after that came another race of aliens but this race was more organized.
I was being transported to city 5, when I got there, it was a nice feature and nice people around after the zombies broke out. They killed all of my friends but not me...
I was the remaining few to survive that outbreak, i was then sent to city 18, they told me that i could work in the library while i was being kept safe. But for some reason I said no.
I taught people that didn't have a education in college and taught them to write other languages, like for most people we don't study any more, that has changed for me.
2 years later
I was being treated like a respected member of society that i was a good loyalist after that i decided whether i should join the CCA or not?!
IC INFO__________________________________________
Name: Alex Mckinly
CID: 24242
Amount of loyalist points:1
Age:26
Country of origin: United States of America
Hair colour: Brown
Eye colour: Blue

Specific skills and specialist, such as medical knowledge, knowledge of technology etc?: My skill was to teach and I have a great writing, reading skill.


Have you had any previous affiliations with the CCA of the city or the UU as a whole?:no


Have you had any previous infactions from the CCA or the UU as a whole?:no

Cergis - ACCEPTED

The most improved app I've seen by far. Good job.

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Steam name: | EGS | Willeh
Steam ID: STEAM_0:1:2512725
Age: 16
How long have you been roleplaying?: About a year and a half now. I have administrated on HL2RP servers before, most significantly the esteemed SLA (Sneaky Loud Assassins) HL2RP server.
How long have you been playing with The Crew?: About a week now, although regrettably I have not earned myself many hours.
How long have you played on our server, in total?: 7 hours, thirty minutes, ten seconds... eleven seconds... twelve seconds...


20 lines of action roleplay examples, using /it and /me. (Eg: /it The citizen runs through the checkpoint /me Gives chase)
/me spots the jogging citizen.
Citizen, halt!
/it The malignant continues to run, ignoring the officer's orders.
/radio Got a sociopathic citizen here, running! Commencing pursuit, at plaza!
/it The citizen runs up to a man, pushing him to the ground and continuing to run.
/radio Malignant just assaulted another citizen! Need backup, asap!
/me continues to sprint after the anti-citizen, gaining on him.
/it The anti-citizen wheels around for a few seconds, gauging where his pursuer is.
/me slides his stunstick out of the holster, clicking it on. The familiar buzz spurs him on.
/it The citizen hears the buzz. His pace quickens, but is not enough to outpace the CCA authorities.
/me gets within a few feet of the fleeing individual, and attempts to tackle him.
/it The citizen falls to the ground, his legs pinned, and he instinctively puts his arms over his head.
/me raises his stunstick, and proceeds to rain many consecutive blows on the malignant.
/it The officer does not stop until he is sure that his prey is unconcious.
/me picks up the citizen, throwing him over his shoulder.
/it The citizen's head lolls unconsciously to one side.
/radio Overwatch, this is 39523. Malignant in custody.
/me quickly lays the man down, tying him up.
/me finishes tying the anti-citizen, and picks him back up, heading off to the Nexus.
/me clicks his stunstick to his belt as he walks, flicking it off.

** CCA-C18-CORE-06.39523 spots the jogging citizen.
CCA-C18-CORE-06.39523 says "<:: Citizen, halt!"
** The malignant continues to run, ignoring the officer's orders.
CCA-C18-CORE-06.39523 radios "<:: Got a sociopathic citizen here, running! Commencing pursuit, at plaza!"
** The citizen runs up to a man, pushing him to the ground and continuing to run.
CCA-C18-CORE-06.39523 radios "<:: Malignant just assaulted another citizen! Need backup, asap!"
** CCA-C18-CORE-06.39523 continues to sprint after the anti-citizen, gaining on him.
** The anti-citizen wheels around for a few seconds, gauging where his pursuer is.
** CCA-C18-CORE-06.39523 slides his stunstick out of the holster, clicking it on. The familiar buzz spurs him on.
** The citizen hears the buzz. His pace quickens, but is not enough to outpace the CCA authorities.
** CCA-C18-CORE-06.39523 gets within a few feet of the fleeing individual, and attempts to tackle him.
** The citizen falls to the ground, his legs pinned, and he instinctively puts his arms over his head.
** CCA-C18-CORE-06.39523 raises his stunstick, and proceeds to rain many consecutive blows on the malignant.
** The officer does not stop until he is sure that his prey is unconcious.
** CCA-C18-CORE-06.39523 picks up the citizen, throwing him over his shoulder.
** The citizen's head lolls unconsciously to one side.
CCA-C18-CORE-06.39523 radios "<:: Overwatch, this is 39523. Malignant in custody."
** CCA-C18-CORE-06.39523 quickly lays the man down, tying him up.
** CCA-C18-CORE-06.39523 finishes tying the anti-citizen, and picks him back up, heading off to the Nexus.
** CCA-C18-CORE-06.39523 clicks his stunstick to his belt as he walks, flicking it off.

20 lines of passive roleplay examples, using /it and /me. (Eg: /it THe citizen runs through the checkpoint /me Gives chase)
/me walks along, patrolling the ramp to the hospital.
/it Three citizens stand together, whispering on a sidewalk about thirty feet from the officer.
/me looks over, and notices the citizens.
/me starts striding towards the citizen, putting his hand on his belt.
/y Citizens!
/y Isolate!
/it The citizens start walking away from each other, watching the CCA official.
/it The citizens reconvene about twenty feet away, their gazes falling off of the cop.
/radio May have some malignants at Plaza, over.
/me pulls out his stunstick, clicking it on.
/me starts jogging over to the citizens, brandishing his shock baton.
/y Citizens!
/y Isolate!
/y Final warning!
/it The citizens disperse, this time in different directions. They all face the ground as they walk away.
/radio Situation under control. Resuming patrol.
/it A citizen across the street drinks from a cyan can, and throws it on the ground.
/me sighs.
/y Citizen! Pick up that can!
/me clicks on his stunstick, jogging to the citizen.

** CCA-C18-CORE-06.39523 walks along, patrolling the ramp to the hospital.
** Three citizens stand together, whispering on a sidewalk about thirty feet from the officer.
** CCA-C18-CORE-06.39523 looks over, and notices the citizens.
** CCA-C18-CORE-06.39523 starts striding towards the citizen, putting his hand on his belt.
CCA-C18-CORE-06.39523 yells "<:: Citizens!"
CCA-C18-CORE-06.39523 yells "<:: Isolate!"
** The citizens start walking away from each other, watching the CCA official.
** The citizens reconvene about twenty feet away, their gazes falling off of the cop.
CCA-C18-CORE-06.39523 radios "<:: May have some malignants at Plaza, over."
** CCA-C18-CORE-06.39523 pulls out his stunstick, clicking it on.
** CCA-C18-CORE-06.39523 starts jogging over to the citizens, brandishing his shock baton.
CCA-C18-CORE-06.39523 yells "<:: Citizens!"
CCA-C18-CORE-06.39523 yells "<:: Isolate!"
CCA-C18-CORE-06.39523 yells "<:: Final warning!"
:: The citizens disperse, this time in different directions. They all face the ground as they walk away.
CCA-C18-CORE-06.39523 radios "<:: Situation under control. Resuming patrol."
:: A citizen across the street drinks from a cyan can, and throws it on the ground.
:: CCA-C18-CORE-06.39523 sighs.
CCA-C18-CORE-06.39523 yells "<:: Citizen! Pick up that can!"
:: CCA-C18-CORE-06.39523 clicks on his stunstick, jogging to the citizen.

Character backstory (10 lines at least detailing you character's background. Events, job, family etc and should reflect your skills): When Jeremy's family was still all together, they lived on a farm in the former Czechoslovakia. Him, his mother, and his father were all that were left, as a strain of the flu had killed his newborn baby sisters. Life treated Jeremy well. Up until the age of five, Jeremy used to go out and play with the barn animals and feed them, with the help of his father. However, as his fifth birthday drew nearer and nearer, Jeremy's parents' "discussions" (a substitute term for their arguments), escalated. Two days after Jeremy turned five, his father packed up his bags and left, headed east. Not much later that year, the former state of Czechoslovakia split into the now-known countries of the Czech Republic and Slovakia; his mother and him living in the former.

Growing up without a father was difficult for Jeremy. Sure, his mother treated him well, and he grew up in a fairly stable reformed household. However, it still always got to him whenever he looked up at his friends to see their parents, happy and together. He grew through it, however, and put all his effort into everything he did. He managed to attain relatively good grades in the local school he attended, and at the age of nineteen, kissed his mother goodbye.

The Czech Republic had many opportunities for Jeremy, but by far his favorite occupation was security. Whether he was employed in a security firm or hired privately, Jeremy got the job done. He kept what he was paid to keep safe, safe. This opened up opportunities for him to get exposed to various kinds of weapons, as was needed in his line of work. He loved what he did; after saving up, Jeremy opened up his own security contracting company.

Leading this firm took Jeremy to many places across western and southern Europe, but eventually landed him on the southern tip of Finland. He had been hired to lead a security team that was constructing various boats, yachts, and other sea-faring vessels, from the petty thieves that had been sacking them in the night.

This is when the Combine hit. Portals ripping open the sky, huge organic aircraft occupying the sky, while all the while Jeremy secured himself in a nearby brewery. After a miraculous seven hours, the gunfire and explosions had all but stopped, and when he emerged, he could not believe what he had seen: thousands upon thousands of xeno-like beings, marching from horizon to horizon. He laid down his arms, and did not regret it; while being transported he witnessed government-run military and law enforcement being executed. Jeremy was driven to a city, presumably called "City 18" (due to the large "C18" logo over the doors).

Jeremy witnessed many harrowing events in the days to come. Many atrocities were committed by his fellow human beings. However, when the Metropolice forces were deployed in numbers, Jeremy knew he was safe. He respected the Combine, for even though they changed life on earth as he knew it, he also knew it was for the better.

Jeremy's passion for justice, along with his proficiency at leading others, inspired him to apply to the Combine Civil Authority. He knew it wasn't going to be easy, but he also knew that the rewards were bountiful. As he walked up to the application podium, he observed the form in front of him. Under "backstory", his pen started emitting a short tale. This tale began at the happiest moment of his life: "When Jeremy's family was still all together..."

cliche ending, whatever

---IC Information---
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Name: Jeremy Skidman
CID: #60715
Amount of loyalist points: 2
Age: 28
Country of origin:
Hair colour: Dark Brown
Eye colour: Blue

Specific skills and specialist, such as medical knowlege, knowlege of technology etc?: Jeremy possesses a knowledge of many different firearms, as well as how to use them effectively and efficiently. He is not very skilled at medical procedures, only due to the fact that he was very good at his job. He understands basic technology, such as how to install new parts to machinery as well as change oil and the like. His real specialty, however, is leading. Although his lack of a college education led him to not be able to become an officer in the Army of the Czech Republic (Armáda České republiky), he still went on to lead his own security contracting firm. He led many armed, capable men in order to defend what he was paid to defend. If he gets accepted, he will branch off into the officer ranks, as that was what he was raised to do.


Have you had any previous affiliations with the CCA of the city or the UU as a whole?: Besides helping Civil Protection units when they need it, no. He has earned himself two Loyalist Points for his assistance to the government, however.


Have you had any previous infactions from the CCA or the UU as a whole?: No, unlike back home, Jeremy possesses a clean slate.

| EGS | Willeh - ACCEPTED

Need I say more, about this remarkable app.

Steam name: Jaquecz
Steam ID:STEAM_0:1: 42590752
Age:15
How long have you been roleplaying?: 3 years
How long have you been playing with The Crew?:

20 lines of passive roleplay:
/me Walks into the plaza
/it rations are announced
/me Begins to sprint to the line, hoping to get rations quickly
/it a CCA notices and sprints after Adrian, because he is well fed and not malnourished, he catches up and stops him
CCA-C18 ###:: Citizen
/me Turns to the CCA and says "Yes Officer?"
CCA-C18 ###:: "No running."
Adrian Asem says:"Sorry it won't happen again"
CCA-C18###:: "Good."
/me Continues to the line, because he sprinted, he gets there before a large group of citizens follow
/it The waiting line is dull and boring, someone begins to talk
/me Looks around for the source of talking, hoping to warn him to do such a thing.
/it a CCA walks in, and firmly tells the citizen to shut up
Anonymous Citizen says "Fuck you!"
CCA-C18 ###::"Audio violation"
/it The CCA flicks on his stun stick and tears the citizen a new one, eventually to death, he over did it.
CCA-C18 ###::radios "Get someone to pick up this body"
/me Shakes his head, both in sorrow and in disappointment
Anonymous Citizen whispers "I can't believe he actually did that, monsters..."
/me Turns to face the citizen
Adrian Asem says:"He made his choice, and he paid the price, sadly."
/it The Anonymous Citizen Nods and the rest of the line soon fades as the rations are finally over.

20 lines of action roleplay:

/it An explosion rocks the plaza, a catwalk falls and decapitates an unlucky citizen
/it The plaza is sent into a state of chaos and panic as citizens run around in circles and hide in corners and CCA attempt to calm them down, or simply knocking them out and dragging the bodies in-doors
/me Holds his ears as the slightly familiar ringing sound slowly fades
CCA-C18 ###:: Citizen get up!
/me Looks up at the CCA, he is automatically calmer, as a familiar face of order looks down at him, he gets up and is told what to do
CCA-C18 ###:: Citizen go to the train statio-
/it a bullet penetrates the CCA's facemask, and exits through the other side, creating a spray of blood as he slumps to the ground
/me Looks to the area of which the bullet came from, and notices a group of rebels fighting off antlions on the bridge, along with a rebel armed with a combine sniper rifle.
/it a combine dropship appears from the nexus and descends to the City plaza, deploying a squad of OWS on the bridge, along with a few BLADE.
OWS-C18 ###:: Amputate!
/it a quick firefight ensues, as the OWS push the Rebels back and the few BLADE quickly dispatch the antlions.
/it An OWS fires at a rebel's head
** OWS-C18 has rolled 53 out of 100 [+30 roll bonus, aug]
** Anonymous Rebel has rolled 60 out of 100
/it The bullet from the OWS's SMG stay on course, and blows a hole in the anti-citizen's head and he slumps to the ground, dead.
/it The other rebels are shocked at the death of one of their comrades, and quickly retreat.
/it The rest of the OWS pursue the rebels into the slums
/me Silently wishes the Overwatch Soldiers luck as he runs to the over-crowded train station.
/it Adrian took too long, as the train station is currently surrounded by antlions, the few CCA are holding them back with support from a single BLADE.
/me Scared runs back to the CWU pharmacy, and takes refuge there and waits out the chaos
/it Bullets, screams and alien screeches are heard echoing through the hallway where Adrian hides in the corner
/it The sounds die down, eventually becoming silent.
/it A Combine drop ship enters the plaza, the roar of its thrusters drowning out most noise, voices are barely audible
/it The OWS squad which pursued the rebels approach the drop ship, a HELIX approaches them
/it The HELIX converses with a member of the squad, and tends to the OWS's injuries
/me Is intrigued by the scene, initially believing that the Combine didn't have those sort of positions open.
/me Makes his mind up on the spot, he is going to join the CCA as a HELIX



Character backstory :Adrian Asem has always been an obedient child, he is loving and caring of his peers, and spiteful and very disappointed whenever he sees someone breaking the rules, or the law. He has always tried his best in school, getting averages of 80% to 100%. He has always had a strong sense of justice, and order. In high-school he learned that that a friend of his died because of non-sufficient medical attention, because of this he decided he would learn and practice medicine to save others from the same fate.

As the Nine hour war began he was still in medical school, after he aced everything in college, he went to medical school, and was almost finished. But then it happened, portal stormed opened up all over the world, Adrian was drafted in as a field medic as the military began to falter, he was always busy with wounded soldiers, always being stuck in the tent. He later returned home to his parent's to find the UU in the middle of re-locating them, he, being the obedient person that he was, complied with them and moved to city 18, where he now spends his life, mostly chatting with those he likes.




---IC Information---
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Name: Adrian Asem
CID: 74906
Amount of loyalist points: 0
Age: 25
Country of origin: Canada
Hair colour: Black
Eye colour: Black

Specific skills and specialist, such as medical knowledge, knowledge of technology etc?: Adrian has gone through medical school, along with limited experience as a medic during the seven hour war, no combat at all. He also has limited but sufficient experience at technology, as he can repair most things.


Have you had any previous affiliations with the CCA of the city or the UU as a whole?: Nope.


Have you had any previous infactions from the CCA or the UU as a whole?: Nope.

Jaquecz - Denied

Meh passive rp examples, not the most realistic not knowing the units ranks.
(remember unit cruelty and apathy increases over ranks)

Good action RP example

Backstory had conflicts with HL2 canon
1. If he was drafted into the military he would have died
2. How do you get drafted, deployed and return home in under 7 hours
3. Its the 7 hour war not 9 hour war
4. If you weren't with your parents when the Combine invaded you never saw them again
5. Cances are your parents were killed anyway because they killed everyone over 60 and under 18 in the year 200X (when the war occurred)

Read over HL2 canon and the timeline then redo te mistakes

Reapply in 2 days

Care to elaborate on how the passive rp examples was "meh", i'll make sure to add in ranks and brush up on my lore but i don't get how passive rp was meh. kthx

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Steam name:
Steam ID: STEAM_0:0:47002229
Age: 12
How long have you been roleplaying?: 3 Years
How long have you been playing with The Crew?: One day.
How long have you played on our server, in total?: 1 hour.

20 lines of passive roleplay examples, using /it and /me. (Eg: /it The citizen runs through the checkpoint /me Gives chase)
/me Stands at the hardpoint.
/me Watches the citizens.
/me Paces back and fourth.
/me Checks the charge on his stunstick.
/me Holsters his stunstick.
(Citizen) /me Walks up to the unit.
/me Prompts his stunstick.
(Citizen) /me Walks away from the hardpoint and the unit.
CCA-C18.xxxx.xx.xxxxxx <:: 06, Patrol!
CCA-C18.CORE.06.xxxxx <:: Copy that.
/me Continues away from the hardpoint.
/me Walks around the standard patrol route.
(Citizen) /me Stares at the unit.
CCA-C18.CORE.06.xxxx <:: Move along.
(Citizen) /me Continues his stroll into the CAH.
/me Walks into the ration terminal checking for any citizens tresspassing.
/me Scans the room and finds no citizens.
/me Walks back into the plaza.
/me Stands on a corner watching for citizens.
20 lines of action roleplay examples, using /it and /me. (Eg: /it THe citizen runs through the checkpoint /me Gives chase)
/me Walks into the plaza from the nexus.
(Anti-Citizen) /me Fires a few shots at the unit walking out from the nexus.
/it A shot almost hits him but hits the ground next to him.
/me Dives for cover.
/me Unholsters his 9mm turning the safety off and readies his aim.
/me Peaks out of the cover looking for the anti-citizen.
/me Spots it on the catwalks.
/me Radios for an 11-99 at his 10-20.
/radio Anti-citizen on catwalks 11-99 at my 10-20.
/radio CCA-C18.CORE.OfC.08073 10-10 Inbound.
/radio Copy.
/me Stands up and fires two shots near the anti-citizen.
(Anti-Citizen) /me Fires a clip from its SMG at the unit.
/me Yet again is almost hit but moves back into cover.
(OfC) /me Runs out of the nexus readying his SMG.
(OfC) /me Steadies his aim right above the catwalks.
(OfC) /me Fires an SMG grenade.
/it The grenade hits the pillar holding the catwalks causing it to shake.
(Anti-Citizen) /me Holds onto the railing and plants its feet so it doesn't fall off.
/me Stands up firing four shots from his 9mm.
(Anti-Citizen) /it A shot hits it in the shoulder causing a scream of pain.
/it The Anti-citizen flees running back towards the slums.

Character backstory (10 lines at least detailing you character's background. Events, job, family etc and should reflect your skills):
James was a boy who lived in Sudbury, Ontario, Canada. He was 18 years old it was three days away from his birthday. He had his dad, Rick, His Mom,
Suziana and his little sister, Brook. James was on his final exam, two days away from his birthday. The next day he went to his graduation and earned his high school diploma. It was his birthday his mom, dad and his sister had made him a cake and got $435 for his birthday, he blew out the candles and wished that he would pass collage and get into university. The next day something rocked the earth, explosions everywhere they quickly turned on the news and the reporter said "Some unknown race is invading, the military will be sent out to defend the province. Three hours later something hit the house. It was some sort of pod, then these small crab spider like things started crawling out. His entire family ran to the basement and locked and barricaded the door shut from the unknown alien creatures. They had a battery powered radio and a four week supplies of food. The news reporter said that the army was some how desinigrated by massive three legged creatures. Four hours past, the reporter issued that Earth has surrendered to the unknown invaders now referred to as the "Combine".Seconds later the door burst open as two "Combine" blew off the door and they both looked at James sister, and shot her. Administered the Combine said. James
Entire family was shocked, Where they next? Then, It looked like a military soldier shot one of the units and the bullets ricocheted off of the unit and struck James in his shoulder area. The unit shot the soldier in every vital in his body, the brain, the heart, the liver, pancreas, both legs and arms and the lungs. The soldier gasped for air as his lungs were pierced the unit still standing crouched down and said into a radio "unit requesting Helix."
James was then sent to City 18.. all the way in Russia, James never heard from his parents again. But later in city 18, James was being attacked by a madman he said something that wasn't even words. The only thing James heard is a SMG go off and the man fell to the ground he was shot by a C.C.A Unit. James doesn't bother saying anything or touching the body he continues with his daily activities.


---IC Information---
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Name: James Johnson
CID: 69563
Amount of loyalist points: None.
Age: 32
Country of origin:
Hair colour: Blonde
Eye colour: Blue

Specific skills and specialist, such as medical knowlege, knowlege of technology etc?:
No.


Have you had any previous affiliations with the CCA of the city or the UU as a whole?:
No


Have you had any previous infactions from the CCA or the UU as a whole?:
No.

Meleepayne wrote:Care to elaborate on how the passive rp examples was "meh", i'll make sure to add in ranks and brush up on my lore but i don't get how passive rp was meh. kthx

They were bland and lacking substance. They were actions, no emotion or higher level of description. I said meh meaning passable so you don't have to change it to be accepted because what you lacked in passive you proved in active.

SovietSpartan - DENIED

1.You don't meet the 6 hour playtime requirement
2.App not fully filled out
3.RP examples are lacking; they are actions with no depth

I stopped reading your app there.

Reapply in two days

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Steam name: Araghast the Noobstriker
Steam ID: STEAM_0:0:30028117
Age: 15
How long have you been roleplaying?: 3 years (non-HL2RP), 2 years (HL2RP)
How long have you been playing with The Crew?: Since it was born, Some complications along the way.
How long have you played on our server, in total?: Summed up to 600 hours, Half the time I've played GMOD I've been in HL2RP TC.


20 lines of passive roleplay examples, using /it and /me. (Eg: /it The citizen runs through the checkpoint /me Gives chase):

/me walks out of the CAH after a good nap on the floor
/it The air is cold and calm, Noises of citizens being beaten leak through the walls of the apartments
/me begins to walk over to the benches at the center of the plaza
/me reaches the benches and sits down, Looking around at the various MPF units watching the hardpoints and the sidewalk corners
/me slumps over and looks down at his feet, Sighing out of depression as he grows tired of always being alone
/it The cold wind begins to pick up
/me shivers and lays on his side on the bench, Hugging himself in a fetal position, His favorite position
/it A CCA unit walks up to the citizen
/me looks up "Huh?"
Officer: Citizen. Get out of here.
Me: But I wa-
Officer: I said move along!
/me scoffs and sits up, still hugging him arms "Fine... Jeez."
/me walks back into the CAH and heads for the stairs
/me reaches the stairs and grunts, going up them slowly and lazily
/it The floor boards creak and moan, Old and rotting wood from ages ago
/me sighs and reaches his apartment room, Unlocking the door and going in
/me closes the door behind himself and locks it once more, Going over to the couch that came with his luxury apartment room he got for being CWU
/it The couch is blue and soft, Some stains from previous owners on it
/me ignores the stains and lays on it, Going back to sleep after his short little exercise

20 lines of action roleplay examples, using /it and /me. (Eg: /it THe citizen runs through the checkpoint /me Gives chase)

/me holds the 05 up by his weak neck, Stareing into his fearful and terrorized eyes through her emotionless blue visors, Her gloves and outfit covered in splats of blood, Her mask having a bloody hand running down it as if someone attempted to stop her from slaughtering them
/it The unit squirms and begins to softly cry, Trembling from fear
Me: You made a poor choice of coming here little 05. You should have known your leaders would be turned into the mutilation they are now, Laying around you in a lake of blood.
Unit: P-Please... D-Don't....
Me: Don't what?
Unit: K-Kill me... D-
Me: Kill you? You must have read my mind!
/me tightens her grip around the unit's neck, An audible 'crack' and 'snap' heard as the tip of his spine is snapped away from his head, Grabbing the unit's leg and pulling away from his head.
/it The unit's head rips clean from his body, The tall augmented horror tossing the headless body to the side, Adding to the pile of bodies already made
/it Phantom comes around the corner calmly, Seeing the scene "Sword! Lets go!" She says in a friendly tone
/me quickly looks over at Phantom, Quits playing with the head and tosses it over her shoulders and happily walks over to Phantom, Putting her arm around Phantom and looking down at Phantom's mask, Looking back at the hall and walking along, Heading to the Rogue Sanctuary to speak with Zero
/it Phantom puts her arm around Sword's back, Sword being too tall for Phantom to put her arm around her shoulder, Still equally as meaningful as best friends
/me makes it to the sanctuary with Phantom, Walking in and looking around, Heading to Zero's room where he requested her at
./it Zero is reading something on a table
.Zero: Hello Sword, Come over here.
./me creeps over and looks at the paper, It is a map of C45. Zero is planning to steal another APC and raid the nexus
.Sword: What are you on about now?
.Zero: I'm going to do this one alone, I want you to keep everyone else busy while I go. When I get back I'm getting everyone ready to raid the nexus so make sure they are all willing to do so.
.Sword: How can I get them to if I can't harm or kill any of them?
.Zero: Do to them what you do to me.
./me sighs, Nodding and heading back out into the main area as Zero slips out through the vehicle exit and heads off to grab the APC
(A sum of the day Jury and Ace almost died on. The way Sword became the resistance's prostitute and the day I was going to decide to make Sword a beta character, One to experiment with like the one kid I experimented with at bible camp.)

Character backstory (10 lines at least detailing you character's background. Events, job, family etc and should reflect your skills): Drake Wolf was your average kid, Liked to play in the mud, Watched cartoons most of the time and read a lot of books. When he became a teenager he started to advance into drugs and trying different things, He ended up just staying in his house and dropping off the grid of his social life, Wasting away on the internet where he gamed for hours on end. To keep himself from going insane he dismantled objects in his house and reassembled them to test how fast he could do it each time. Other places to put his time into was his back yard where he shot birds and his neighbor's pets with his sniper rifle that he silenced with a make-shift silencer he made over time, His aim improving each day. During his adulthood he was a big time stoner but still held up a good job working for a software company making a fairly large paycheck. At night time he went to his friend's shooting range and practiced with a series of weapons, His favorite being the SG Commando. The 7 hour war came around when he was 21, He had always thought about a day that aliens would come and oppressed the already oblivious and ignorant human race and never really had any plans to fight back because there would be no point. So Drake submitted to being allocated to an assigned city far from american. His new home state and country name is now "City Eighteen"
(I tried to include the family and what not, I got into writing it and forgot all about the family part. I tried tho )

---IC Information---
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Name: Drake Wolf
CID: 11700
Amount of loyalist points: 2
Age: 22
Country of origin: USA
Hair colour: Brown blonde
Eye colour: Emerald Green

Specific skills and specialist, such as medical knowlege, knowlege of technology etc?: Electronics, Mechanics, Highly accurate with any weapon, Can assemble and disassemble most fire arms. Skilled with electronics and most technology of MAN not COMBINE


Have you had any previous affiliations with the CCA of the city or the UU as a whole?: Nein


Have you had any previous infactions from the CCA or the UU as a whole?: Nein

(P.S.: 1 year of experience as CCA starting in LG. I've never had to reapply anything so by technicalities, This is my second ever CCA app since [LG]... )

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