CCA Applications

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BTW I know this is a re applicaiton Diablo gave me permission to re write it fixing my RP amount of lines
Steam name:Combine SN1PER (I have some clan tags that change daily so yeah.)
Steam ID:STEAM_0:1:40329715
Age:15
How long have you been roleplaying?:For about 2 years or so.
How long have you been playing with The Crew?:Well I just got on playing with the crew a bit after it was up


20 lines of passive roleplay: /me Says Citizen!
/it Citizen has a look of fear in his eyes
/me Says Wall!
/it Citizen quickly looks around and dashes!
/me Pulls out his radio informs other Civil Protection that he is to be captured
/it Citizens screams
/me Runs over to the citizen only to find him held down by CP
/it Runs over ot the citizen heps them hold down the civvie
/me Citizens almost breaks through all of the CP's holding him down
/it CORE gets out a scanner like device and he had sterioids in him
/me Citizen screams out as if he sounds almost zombie like
/it CP's fall back
/me Citizen charges at the RCT
/it CP's take multiple shots at him
/me The Citizen falls to the ground
/it A pool of blood comes out of Citizens body
/me The CP drag his body into a incinerating chamber
/it The CP press the button
/me The fire is hot even through the glass you can feel the fire its so hot
/it The body burns all thats left is skin and bones
/me The RCT walks away with a scratch mark from the Citizen
/it The fire spreads in the chamber
/me SeC pulls the water wheel
/it The chamber stops burning the body
/me SeC Takes out his radio and says "Anti-Citizen engaged and down."



20 lines of action roleplay examples, using /it and /me. (Eg: /it THe citizen runs through the checkpoint /me Gives chase):
/me Leans on wall with stunstick in right hand
/it Citizen walks over and kicks me and runs
/me I radio in we have a citizen running
/it Citizen climbs a fence
/me Calls back up jumps over the fence
/it Rebels aiming ar2s
/me Aims at rebels says "Get Down!"
/it Rebels get ont ehir knees knowing they have no chance against the elite combine
/me Ties rebels up and throws them in their cell
/it Rebel attempts to ram through the forcefield
/me SeC watches and laughs "Haha!"
/it SeC shoots the Resistance in the leg
/me Rebel screams in pain
/it The shot is so loud the whole Nexus was on alert
/me Combine barge in and see if theres any trouble
/it The combine sit down to see the rebel shot in the leg attempting to crawl
/me Rebel rams so hard into the forcefield that he is knocked back from it
/it You hear the rebel bang into the wall with a big BANG!
/me Rebel lays down and waits till his death
/it A sudden beeping noise is heard
/me THe rebel looks down and sees a grenade and yells "Shit!"
/it The rebel blows up
/me Combine walk away and get back to patrol

Character backstory (10 lines at least detailing you character's background. Events, job, family etc and should reflect your skills):I was fresh off the train in New York as I wandered my Mom and Dad were right next to me I looked around. I thought what could I do first in this big city! suddenly I heard gunshots and marching the military was falling back under the subway people ran screaming and yelling GET DOWN! I took a look up in the city. I saw these paranormal looking creatures human shaped with futuristic suits on.I turned to my side one of those things was taking my dad I tried kicking the thing I knew Mixed Martial Arts I kicked the thing. It definately felt like I was a little flea attempting to kick him.He kicked me in the face I got on my knees they took me inside a dark cell with a force field guarding it and two strange men with one big red eye I was only 15 I had no idea of what was going on now here I am fresh off the train to City 45. I don't know what I will do first but I think I will join those I think they were Combine? I want to join to make people suffer the pain I did when I saw my dad and never saw him again when he was taken away. The only thing that keeps me alive is the thirst for vengeance....


---IC Information---
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Name:Eddie Smith
CID:40025
Amount of loyalist points:0 I just joined
Age:18
Country of origin:U.S.A
Hair colour:Dark Black
Eye colour:Blue

Specific skills and specialist, such as medical knowlege, knowlege of technology etc?:My character knows mixed martial arts he is good at unarmed combat


Have you had any previous affiliations with the CCA of the city or the UU as a whole?:No sadly not


Have you had any previous infactions from the CCA or the UU as a whole?:Not that I recall

Combine SN1PER: Denied
Passive RP:
RP was SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO unrealistic.
1. RCT never leave Nexus unless with a CmD or up.
2. RCT are never given Pistols unless in breach training.
3. There is no scanner device that can test for steroids.
4. Having steroids in your blood and running is not an AMP-able offense
5. A unit cannot just demand a citizen to go to the wall for having "fear in his eyes"
6. Anything below and 03 WOULD NEVER AMP A CITIZEN. Let alone an RCT.
7. There was nothing passive about that RP.
8. Multiple spelling and grammer errors.

I didn't even bother reading your action RP examples because they are definately the same thing.

Your backstory was fine except for the fact that the combine invaded when you were 15. Anyone 18 or younger was kill by cumbeanz when they invaded.

How i felt when reading your app...


Reapply in 2 days

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Steam name: SwiftSweden

Steam ID: STEAM_0:0:1025997

Age:16, going onto 17 in October.

How long have you been roleplaying?: I have been in serious roleplay for three years.

How long have you been playing with The Crew?: Not long, most of my time was just settling my character into the citizen life on this server and getting the information to the forums.


20 lines of passive roleplay examples, using /it and /me. (Eg: /it The citizen runs through the checkpoint /me Gives chase)

/it The setting sun shines through the tinted windows of the run-down loft. A slim man sits on the edge of a tattered couch.

/me lightly sighs, turning his head to the window, then covering his eyes with his hands to reduce the glare.

/it The squeak of a boot is heard coming from the outside hall, then a small knock echoes from the front door.

/me Turns his head back to the door, gripping the couch arm for support to stand, then slowly shuffiling to the door.

Kordin Raan says "Just a minute."

/me Lets out a sigh as he steps to the door, moving his left hand over the door knob and twisting it slowly.

/it A muffled and dull voice mutters out "Citizen 2216, please open the door and step to the side slowly and calmly."

/me gulps slightly as he pulls the door open and stepping to the left wall, eyeing the large figure in a standard CCA uniform.

CCA.NOVA-03.1436 says "Citizen 2216, on behalf of the SeC, you are being relocated to a smaller room on the second floor of the facility."

Kordin Raan says "I..ma..may I ask why?"

CCA.NOVA-3.1436 says "Strictly confidential citizen, now please gather all rations and CCA approved belongings and vacate the room, you have six minutes.

/me Gives a nod to the unit, turning on his heel to his living room.

/it The unit steps behind him, standing in the door-frame, folding his arms.

/me shuffles to a corner closet, then turns the knob with his right hand, shaking a bit in the upper arm.

/it The closet door slowly swings open, the upper shelves are empty, the rack holds a few citizen uniforms.

/me bends down onto one knee, moving his hand over a suitcase in the center of the closet, grabbing it, then standing back up to unhook the clothing from the hangers.

/it The hangers clatter as the clothing is removed.

/me un-clips the locks on the suitcase, lifting the top open, then folding the clothes one by one, until the suitcase becomes overstuffed, then closing the top and locking it.

CCA.NOVA-3.1436 says "Citizen, two minutes left."

/me gives a slight cough as he grips the suitcase handle with his right hand, then standing up and turning to the counter-top, grabbing an unopened ration pack.

/it The ration pack shuffles a bit in his hand, the tokens jingling inside.

/me turns to the unit, shuffling to infront of the unit and saying "I am ready."

/it The unit gives a nod, then motioning for him to follow as the unit steps out the door.

/me gives a muffled sigh as steps out the door turning on his heel to the hallway.

/it In the hallway three units stand, armed with a SMG each.

/me eyes widen.

CCA.NOVA-3.1436 says "Citizen, prepare to receive amputation."

/it The NOVA unit hangs his head down as the three other units squeeze onto the metallic triggers. The bullets fly out from the short barrels, spraying at the man.

/me stumbles back as bullet after bullet fly's into his upper torso and legs.

/it The units stop firing, smoke lightly floats up from the barrels.

/me falls the ground, motionless.


20 lines of action roleplay examples, using /it and /me. (Eg: /it THe citizen runs through the checkpoint /me Gives chase)

[I will be role-playing in this scenario as a GHOST unit of the CCA.]

/it On top of a high-rise roof,two CCA units lay prone on the cool concrete.

/me shuffles prone over to the edge of the concrete, proping up his large rifle onto the unfinished stone wall.

/it The other unit does the same, then turns his head to his partner.

CCA.GHOST-1.3215 says "5531, scan from left windows, top down."

/me turns his head to the other unit, giving a nod, then turning back to his rifle, pulling the scope to his lenses.

/it The building across from the high-rise is surrounded at the walls with other CCA units, stacked at the doors and lower windows.

/me lowers his rifle as he scans the left windows, pausing as he stops at the second story, eyeing a masked figure sitting in a chair.

CCA.GHOST-3.5531 says "I have contact, second story, farthest left window, I would say zero for about three hundred meters ."

/it The other unit shakes his head, then saying "5531, I'd like for you to take the shot, I'll keep watch on the center windows.

/me nods, then adjusting the rifles zeroing, then gripping a round from a wrist bandoleer, loading it into the chamber and pulling the bolt back.

/it The figure in the window adjusts his seat, then turning back to face the window.

/me takes a deep breath, then peers down the scope, moving his aim to the mans center mass and slowly squeezing the trigger.

/it The shot rings out, slamming through the glass of the window and into the figures head, knocking him out of the seat and onto the floor. Blood splatters onto the side wall.

CCA.GHOST-3.5531 says "Target is down on second floor."

CCA.GHOST-1.3215 says "Copy, two targets in the center windows moving the left windows."

/it Two figures dressed in the same garb are seen moving in the windows to the first figures body, one of the figures steps near the motionless first figure, fumbling for the ammo in the figures backpack.

/me lets out a cough as he takes a breath, then pulls the bolt back, loading another round into the chamber and aiming for the targets center mass.

/it The second figure is still confused as he is rummaging through the backpack.

/me squeezes the metallic trigger.

/it Another shot rings out, echoing through the streets as it penetrates through the glass and into the second figures upper torso spraying blood to the wall and knocking the figure to the floor.

CCA-GHOST-3.5531 says "Second target is down."

/it The other unit fires off a round, penetrating the glass once more and passing into the third figures left leg, dropping him to the floor.

CCA-GHOST-1.3215 says "Target three is down. 5531, radio in for the green-light."

/me nods, gripping his shoulder radio, taking his right hand off his rifle, then pressing down on a small button on the radio.

CCA-GHOST-3.5531 radios "Three tangos are down, green-light is a go."

/it The radio plays back "Copy that 5531, moving in now."

CCA-GHOST-1.3215 says "Unit, lets move up for a closer overwatch."

/me nods, then slinging his rifle and standing up, turning on his heel to the ladder at the end of the roof.

/it The two slowly descend the ladder.

Character backstory (10 lines at least detailing you character's background. Events, job, family etc and should reflect your skills):

Kordin Raan was born on May the 2nd in 1991, in Stockholm, Sweden. His parents, Lorisha & Tevais Raan lived a lower class lifestyle in the suburbs off Stockholm. His father worked in a local car-factory & his mother as a dental assistant. Most of his childhood was in grade school or around his father after the day shift was over. Kordin had kept an open ear while his father was talking about work with his fathers friends. A lot of the information Kordin attained really inspired him, and around the age of 15, he started a part-time project on restoring a small convertible car found in a run-down junkyard.

Two years later after and three hobbies later, Kordin had finally completed the car, with support from his father. Most of the parts, pieces, and tools were gathered and put together by Kordin himself, after long study sessions with Auto-Mechanical magazines. The rest of his high school career was mild and got him through most of the repetitive content he learned and at age eighteen, he graduated at fifty-second in his class. The ranked didn't matter to Kordin at much, since his lifestyle was consistently within working on machines and automobiles. Five years after senior year, Kordin found himself in northern Sweden with his fiancee. Sadly before they were both able to become wedded, the skies were filled of fire and war, spitting the two apart. Kordin had made his way in the ranks of the citizens, moving from city to city until the CCA settled him in a small apartment, countries away from Stockholm.

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Name: Kordin Raan
CID:23374
Amount of loyalist points: Cutterntly zero, I have recently been transferred to this city.
Age: 26
Country of origin: Sweden
Hair colour: Black
Eye colour: Emerald

Specific skills and specialist, such as medical knowlege, knowlege of technology etc?: I currently have a small background of mechanics and Auto-mechanics, learned from my birth father. Other then that I do not have any medical training or specializations in anything else.


Have you had any previous affiliations with the CCA of the city or the UU as a whole?: None at all besides transfers between city districts.


Have you had any previous infactions from the CCA or the UU as a whole?: None at all.

SwiftSweden: Accepted

Scarred you there with the red text ehh. But yea you remind me a lot of myself. You are the only other person I know who goes into such great detail in their apps.

/me applaudes.

Using red text to scare people? Sound familiar, Noobstrike?

I was hoping you'd see it and enjoy the nostalgia.

Oh I did. Lots O' memories. I remember that day actualy. I was at my buddy Frank's house. I went on his computer after [REDACTED] allitle bit and then went onto the forums. Saw it, and instantly was like "Frank, keep the stuff, gotta go home." Left, and got my whitelist.

EDIT: and if any of you assholes replaces my REDACTED sign with "Fucking, shitting, kissing, farting" or anything stupid, ill [REDACTED] all over you.

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1. RCT never leave Nexus unless with a CmD or up.

Um, *Cough* OfC+**

Actually i think its CORE DvL+

unless this server likes it's own rules ftw

That removes the importance of an officer, the officer is a feild leadership rank in charge of operating units in the feld while being one of them, a ground combat unit. He would teach dem RCT's how to patroll

It's OfC plus since OfC is the first officer rank that you can train recruits. We seriously need a OfC or ill be training people all day today and tomorrow (Not a ton of fun)

There can be mutliple OfC's dawg. Promote an 01.

Well we don't have any core 01s and nearly 75% of do anything that proves them worthy.

ahem *cough* Im a core 01 *cough*

*cough*cough* /me clears his throat *cough* /me goes into a coughing fit, keels over and dies.

/me is ressurected

And besides I do a majority of the rp schooling because everyone else is always busy in teh slumz

Archimedes wrote:Actually i think its CORE DvL+

/CORE/ DvL+?

All the divisionals are the same rank.
Core just has the most units.
learn yo cca mang.

Noobstrike wrote:

Archimedes wrote:Actually i think its CORE DvL+

/CORE/ DvL+?

All the divisionals are the same rank.
Core just has the most units.
learn yo cca mang.

I thought we made core DvL above other DvL's for mahunik, ah well my bad.

Noobstrike wrote:

Archimedes wrote:Actually i think its CORE DvL+

/CORE/ DvL+?

All the divisionals are the same rank.
Core just has the most units.
learn yo cca mang.

THANK YOU NOOBSTRIKE. lol

Noobstrike it was made offical on SoTA that Core DvL is a higher rank. I was PROMOTED from Ghost DvL to Core DvL by D-lop and Diablo. And last time I talked to diablo Core DvL is a higher postion. But anyones... Stop making these posts on the applications page, they are made for applications not arguments.

CORE DvL Is a higher rank than other DvL's in different divisions. Due to the amount of Core's and the OfC falls under that division, the CORE DvL asumes more responcibility than any other. They deal with 06-04 automaticly aswell, unlike other divisons dealing with 03-01+

Steam name: Vivik
Steam ID: STEAM_0:0:46938257
Age: 15
How long have you been roleplaying?: 3 years, A half a year on steam/Garry's Mod and 2 and a half years on various other games
How long have you been playing with The Crew?: About a week now


20 lines of passive roleplay examples, using /it and /me. (Eg: /it The citizen runs through the checkpoint /me Gives chase)
/me smacks a citizen across the cheek with his stunstick
/me flips on his translator "Where did you receive the contraband"
/it the citizen spits blood out of his mouth and starts mumbling words "I..... I don't know"
/me flicks his stunstick to high voltage and smacks him again, a tooth comes out and hits against the wall
/me clears his throat "Where did you receive the contraband"
/it the citizen screeches in pain "I... I don't know!"
/it two CCA's open the door to the interrogation room and motion me
/me unties the citizen from the chair and drags him to the amputation room
/me sets the citizen down
/me pulls out his 9mm and cocks back the slide "Ready to amputate!"
/it one of the CCA's nods and says "Amputate."
/it The citizen, unable to do anything starts mumbling "P-please... wait.."
/me Fires into the citizen's head, killing him instantly
/it blood and a little bit of brain matter splatters onto the floor
/me puts away his 9mm and grabs the head
/it one of the units grab the dead body by the feet and we start dragging him



20 lines of action roleplay examples, using /it and /me. (Eg: /it The citizen runs through the checkpoint /me Gives chase)
/me starts his daily patrols
/it A citizen comes along and throws a can at my head
/it The citizen runs into an alley
/me Follows him into the alley, with his stunstick out
/me I find him hiding behind a dumpster
/it The citizen suddenly pulls out a lead pipe and hits me across the head, it makes a clang and puts a dent in my mask
/me Pulls out his 9mm and cocks the slide back, aiming
/it the citizen charges me again
/me Aims and shoots him in the shoulder blade
/it blood spats onto the dumpster and the citizen falls down screeching in pain
/me goes up to the citizen
/me aims at the citizen and fires into his chest twice
/it the citizen screeches before dying slowly
/me grabs his radio
/radio "I need backup in D7, priority two anti-citizen. Final verdict has been administered"
/it dispatch replies "Affirmative, two units have been dispatched to your location to investigate"
/it Two units arrive and close off the area
/it One of the units asks "What happened here?"
/me flips on his translator and clears his throat "The anti-citizen threw a can at me, I gave chase and tracked him here, he then attacked me with a pipe and I was forced to amputate"
/it the unit nods and looks into his datapad
/it the unit puts away his datapad and says "Alright, you can go"
/me continues daily patrols

(These examples were a little annoying to think up, sorry if they turned out bad)


Character backstory (10 lines at least detailing you character's background. Events, job, family etc and should reflect your skills):
Klaus Wolfgang was born in Tyrol Austria on July 19th, 1978. His mother and father moved to America in hopes of finding a better job and a better life after the birth of their two children Bettina and Klaus. They moved to Chicago Illinois and bought an apartment. Klaus was a troublemaker, got in to lots of fights and ran with a bad group of kid's. Klaus grew up in an apartment complex consisting of 4 rooms, he was taught how to speak English and German at the same time, Klaus and his sister grew up in an extremely strict household, being grounded for a week for spilling water on the carpet, and being backhanded for talking back to their mother or father. When Klaus turned 18 him and his twin sister Bettina, went their separate ways and moved out, He then bought out an apartment and lived out his days there until one day there was rumors of "Towering men carrying unknown technology". He didn't believe one word of it until Overwatch soldiers broke into his apartment, knocking him out and bringing him to a blank room in an unknown location filled with other citizens. After about a month he ended up in "City 17" where he lived in a blank apartment with just a fridge, a couch and nothing else. He was then transferred to City 18 where he moved into another apartment that looked exactly like the one he was in before. On the coming of the year 2016 he was bored, he liked the idea of being in charge. He liked the thought of being given orders. He wanted to be a part of something.

(This backstory is a little run-on and bland, sorry. I went through atleast 3 different ones just to settle on this one.)


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Name: Klaus Wolfgang
CID: 75725
Amount of loyalist points: None
Age: 38
Country of origin: Austria
Hair colour: Jet black
Eye colour: Hazel

Specific skills and specialist, such as medical knowlege, knowlege of technology etc?: Knows how to handle a gun well, and knows how to handle himself in hand to hand combat.


Have you had any previous affiliations with the CCA of the city or the UU as a whole?: No. (OOC: I've had experience with being a Civil Protection and an OTA unit on a server before, and are familiar with the commands and how the system works)


Have you had any previous infactions from the CCA or the UU as a whole?: No.

Vivik: Denied

Didn't meet line requirement, also several inconsistencies with hl2 vocabulary and server specific material. Play here longer and understand the server better before you apply.

Re-apply in 2 days

If I was denied on the CCA app, can I apply on a different app? Or do I have to wait?