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Post  Near Mon Jun 24, 2013 8:07 pm

Steam name: Near
Steam ID: STEAM_0:0:43706931
Age: 19
How long have you been roleplaying?: About 5 years


20 lines of roleplay examples, using /it and /me. (Eg: /it The windows seem to have stains along the edges and center slowly dripping down. /me takes out a wet towel twisting it and scrubing along the glass in a circular motion.) 
/me picks up the leaves on the sidewalk.
/it CCA-C45-NOVA-01.04284 looks at me.
01 says, "Biotic, come here."
/me looks up at the 01, dragging his feet as he walks.
01 says, "I said move! Faster!"
/me does as the 01 tells him to.
01 says, "The torture room is coated with blood. Go clean it. Now. If you don't do a good job, then I will have to coat it with your blood and make you clean up that."
Nuir'Gian says, "Thisss one will do as you wish, massssster."
/me says under his breath, "Lung gah..."
01 says, "What was that Biotic? Speaking in an unofficial language? I think that deserves a beating for you."
/it The 01 starts hitting Nuir'Gian with his stunstick. The stunstick makes a sizzling sound as the stick hits and burns his skin.
/me tries to take in as much impact as possible until it is too much and he falls.
01 says, "Now get up! I said move!"
/me attempts to get up, but is struggling to do so.
01 says, "I said move! Don't make me hit you harder!
/me gets up onto his feet, swaying a little from side to side.
01 says, "Now, get to the torture room and clean it up!"
Nuir'Gian says, "Yesssss massster."
/me goes to the torture room. As he arrives, he gets a used rag from his tool belt and scrubs the floor and all the filthy blood from it.
01 says, "Haha. Good."

Character backstory (6 lines at least detailing you character's background. Events, job, family etc and should reflect your skills): When Nuir'Gian was small, the combine invaded his homeworld. The vortigaunts had to flee to the planet Xen when the Black Nesa incident occurred. Unfortunately, his mother was killed by the combine. Nuir'Gian used the rift as his chance to escape and it directed the Vortigaunts to Earth during the 7 hour war. He travelled to A near-by canal and found damaged resources to build a shack. 

During the night Nuir'Gian was abducted by combine and was assigned to become a slave, he did not want to do this but he had no choice, if he didn't do it then he would be executed. When he arrived to the Nexus he had to get to work as soon as he got there, he was assigned to an owner, also known as his master. They moved him to a city, this city was city 17. The first couple of months of work was hard for Minur'ian, he eventually got used to it though. But, he never got used to the treatment, the combine treated him like dirt. He never told anyone about how he felt.

One night he was freed by a couple of rebels and they took him to their secret hideout, it wasn't secret for long because he had a micro-chip inside him that could tell the combine his location, they found the hideout and captured the rebels and Nuir'Gian. He had got assigned to a new owner and they moved him to a much more secure city, city 8. He was glad that he had got moved away from city 17, away from the harsh treatment. Here, they treated him with a bit more respect, he felt much more comfortable here at city 8, his new home

---IC Information---
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(Names formats should be as followed, example: "Zek'Tul" having a dash in the center)
Name: Nuir'Gian
Age: 28
Skin tone colour: Tan
Eye colour: Bright red
Scars/Marks: Various scars on chest.

Specific skills and specialist, such as medical knowlege, knowlege of technology, philosophy etc?: 
 Nuir'Gian  has slight experience with working of several machines from being a factory worker during his life on Xen.

Did you ever have a problem with your established government in Xen?:
No.
What do you plan to do with your biotic character in the future?: Work For the CCA, Clean Be Active. But If I Escape or I get Released I will Escape the city and hide, possibly Work with the Resistance and Take down the ones who made my life that much worst.


Last edited by Near on Tue Jun 25, 2013 12:14 am; edited 1 time in total (Reason for editing : Spelling errors)
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Post  Slashraider Mon Jun 24, 2013 11:06 pm

Slashraider wrote:---OOC Information---

Steam name: Slashraider
Steam ID: STEAM_0:1:48125659
Age: 15
How long have you been roleplaying?: For about a year.


20 lines of roleplay examples, using /it and /me. (Eg: /it The windows seem to have stains along the edges and center slowly dripping down. /me takes out a wet towel twisting it and scrubbing along the glass in a circular motion.)

/me picks up the leaves on the sidewalk.
/it CCA-C45-NOVA-01.04284 looks at me.
01 says, "Biotic, come here."
/me looks up at the 01, dragging his feet as he walks.
01 says, "I said move! Faster!"
/me does as the 01 tells him to.
01 says, "The torture room is coated with blood. Go clean it. Now. If you don't do a good job, then I will have to coat it with your blood and make you clean up that."
Zek'Leal says, "Thisss one will do as you wish, massssster."
/me says under his breath, "Lung gah..."
01 says, "What was that Biotic? Speaking in an unofficial language? I think that deserves a beating for you."
/it The 01 starts hitting Zek'Leal with his stunstick. The stunstick makes a sizzling sound as the stick hits and burns his skin.
/me tries to take in as much impact as possible until it is too much and he falls.
01 says, "Now get up! I said move!"
/me attempts to get up, but is struggling to do so.
01 says, "I said move! Don't make me hit you harder!
/me gets up onto his feet, swaying a little from side to side.
01 says, "Now, get to the torture room and clean it up!"
Zek'Leal says, "Yesssss massster."
/me goes to the torture room. As he arrives, he gets a used rag from his tool belt and scrubs the floor and all the filthy blood from it.
01 says, "Haha. Good."






Character backstory (6 lines at least detailing you character's background. Events, job, family etc and should reflect your skills):

As an Infant, my parents left me. I never knew what they looked like or how they were like. I was took in by another family. Their son, Tuk'Neki was my greatest friend. We did everything together. When the Combine took over, we were placed in the same city together. After time, we grew to hate the
Combine because he found out that they killed our family. We decided to plot our escape. We spent months figuring out where and when we could run to the slums. When we were so close to figuring out our plan, a rebel saw us and decided to help us. He said that he could use our "talents". As we followed the rebel into the slums, we heard Combine chatter on a radio far away. They were saying that they were going to do a sweep. As the rebels told us to hide, Tuk'Neki was trying to cover the sounds he was making because he was scared. Because of his noise, the Combine found us and a few rebels. They killed the rebels and beat Tuk'Neki to death. As tears filled my eye, I blacked out. As I woke up, I was in a dark room. The walls were covered in blood, and there was robotic voices on the outside. As the door opened, a Combine high ranking authority stepped in. He kept asking me about the rebels and beating me until I spoke. I said I didn't know anything about them because I was only there for a short time. After several beating, they said they wouldn't kill me, instead they said that they would put me on a train to City 45, to become a slave. As I arrived to City 45, I made sure not to befriend anyone, knowing that if I did, I would get them killed as well.

---IC Information---
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(Names formats should be as followed, example: "Zek'Tul" having a dash in the center)
Name: Zek'Leal
Age: 56
Skin tone colour: Green
Eye colour: Blue
Scars/Marks: Stun-stick marks from previous Combine beatings.

Specific skills and specialist, such as medical knowledge, knowledge of technology, philosophy etc?:
I am great at healing and other medical needs.


Did you ever have a problem with your established government in Xen?:
I have not.
What do you plan to do with your biotic character in the future?:
I plan to be a slave to the Combine, doing as they tell me no with no hesitation. I will try not to make friends with anyone, because my character thinks they will get them killed if he makes friends.


You just copied what I did for my application. You should redo your RP lines because you just changed up some words that I have wrote.
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Post  Gremnkai Mon Jun 24, 2013 11:08 pm

NEAR: DENIED
Copied Slashraiders app. Don't do this.
For now you are banned from making apps for anything for one week (Next monday at 11:08 PM EST)
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