CCA Applications

All applications MUST be posted in this thread. Any that are not will be DENIED.

By applying for this faction, you agree that you have read the CCA Handbook, and will know what to do in any situation. The longer you hesitate to make a firm decision from this handbook, the closer to a demotion you get. It is recomended you play with the CCA Handbook open in your Steam Overlay so you can take a look at it if you are in a pinch.

To get the application format, go to this thread.

Steam name:TRICKY SCOUT
Steam ID:bobbafetty123
Age:27
How long have you been roleplaying?:3 moths
How long have you been playing with The Crew?:a day





Name:Blake roseberry
CID:007156
Amount of loyalist points:zero
Age:28
Country of origin:united kingdom
Hair colour:brown
Eye colour:blue

Specific skills and specialist, such as medical knowlege, knowlege of technology etc?:
yes,i have a little bit of knowledge wiht techonlogy.

Have you had any previous affiliations with the CCA of the city or the UU as a whole?:
not at all.

Have you had any previous infactions from the CCA or the UU as a whole?:
no,I haven't






Character backstory (10 lines at least detailing you character's background. Events, job, family etc and should reflect your skills): Blake roseberry, a man who was born in liverpool, united kingdom. He was a only child, living with his mother and father in the city. He grew up in the city basically all his life, then when he was 20, He moved to a places called wales. He started to live in a quiet area to be in peace, and not to be bothered. He started to work in a small company there, he had a boring job in a office, but it payed the bills. Then a few years later he started to get interested in technology, Wanting to maybe become a hardwere programer. Then, he started to go to school in technology for awhile. After 3 months into school, the combine started to invade the earth, he had no idea what was going on, or what to do. On that day, he just stayed at his home and watched the news to see what would happen, he was afraid. He heard from country to country was being taken over and they were attack the United kingdom now. He started to panic and just stayed home instead of hiding. He noticed his town was under attack, the town was defenseless, Then he saw soldiers outside his home, then break in, one soldier hits him in his face with the but of his weapon. He woke up in a place called ''City 18'', were everyone says he has been ''located to''. He had no idea what to do, so he just lived there for awhile, then got interested in the civil protection, wanting to join it. He would go to the cp officers and beg to join them but they just beat him with there stun sticks.



20 lines of passive roleplay examples, using /it and /me. (Eg: /it The citizen runs through the checkpoint /me Gives chase)





DvL: Move to Hardpoint!
delta. Rodger That! /me Hurrys to hardpoint
delta. /me stands at hardpoint, guarding it making sure no citizens go trough
delta. /me Looks around the area for citizens anywhere around me.
Roger. *A citizens walks to the hardpoint.
delta. Citizen, move away!
Roger. Alright! *The citizen walks away.
delta. /me Stands guard there for awhile and waits for something.
delta Notices a citizen running around and starts to chase after him.
10 delta. Citizen, face the wall.
Roger. *Faces the wall.
delta. /me Attempts to tie, (Resist?)
Roger. * No Resist
delta. /me Ties up, then pats down and finds nothing on him. Citizen, apply!
Roger. *Roger jarkin
delta. /me Types in his name on his data pad.
delta. /me starts to knock him out with his stunstick, then carrys him to the nexus.
delta. /me Puts in the jail cell for him to serve his time.
delta. /me Starts to move back to hardpoint, then guard it.
delta. /me Stands there for the rest of the day

TRICKY SCOUT: DENIED
-You took the liberty of making your own application format. Dont do that silly.
-Play on our server allitle more please, we would like to get to know you more before you become an important player.
-Your grammar needs fixing.
-Your background story needs work, aswell as the /me and /its

Sgtdoom: Denied

Redo your app with the correct format then I will view it and accept/deny

Steam name:[92ndIF] Floridabum
Steam ID: STEAM_0:0:5521615
Age: 15
How long have you been roleplaying?: 3+ years, not just on HL2RP, but different gamemodes and different games.

How long have you been playing with The Crew?: I have been playing for a day, a couple of minutes yesterday, but got on again. I'm hoping to make a good impression.


20 lines of passive roleplay examples, using /it and /me. (Eg: /it The citizen runs through the checkpoint /me Gives chase)

/event 'Cold wind breezes through the city'
Me, a CCA unit, standing nearby a checkpoint that enters the slums.
/it A citizen quickly darts past me, jumping over the barrier.
/me I jump up quickly, attempting to grab his shirt, but it's too late. I know that I cannot enter the slums, so I alert on the radio.
/radio "A citizen just passed through the checkpoint! I need further orders."
On the radio, a response is heard
"Overwatch units have been dispatched earlier because of high resistance activity. He will most likely be caught. We will send scout units soon after."
/radio "Alright. I'll keep my eyes open next time."
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/event The speakers around the plaza crackle to life. A large booming voice is heard through them. "Rations are now being handed out, please report to the ration terminal."
/me stands firmly in the terminal entrance, standing guard.
/it A man walks into the front of the line.
/me takes out his record tac-pad. "Apply."
/it The man clears his throat. "Grayson Bigner. Citizen ID is 14543." he speaks in a quiet voice.
/me types his information on the Tac-Pad. I see that his record is clear of all crimes. I step aside and let the man through.
/event The speakers fuzz up again. "Ration terminal is being closed for the day. Report to your daily routines."


20 lines of action roleplay examples, using /it and /me. (Eg: /it THe citizen runs through the checkpoint /me Gives chase)

*roleplaying as a resistance*
/me hears bangs on the garage door, cocking my gun, ready for anything.
/it Part of the garage door breaks open, two huge Overwatch units bursting in with AR2 rifles.
/me dives over the couch for cover with the other lady, pulling out my makeshift crossbow and immediately aiming it straight at his head. I pull the bar back and let go.
/it The first OTA's mask busts open from the power of the crossbow bolt, leaving a bloody mess. He drops down onto the floor like a sandbag.
/me attempts to load another bolt into the crossbow as the OTA approaches.
/it The OTA grabs onto my collar. He pulls me up right before I cock the bar back.
/me looks over, staring into the AR2's dark barrel. My life flashes behind my eyes. My dads death, my moms death, when I was just a little boy, everything.
/it A tear rolls down his eye. He knows that it's the end.
/it A gunshot is heard again, this time hitting the OTA. The OTA jumps aside, grunting.



Character backstory (10 lines at least detailing you character's background. Events, job, family etc and should reflect your skills):

Red Harlow was raised on a farm as a child, but never really adapted to the farm-life. He always liked to run out with friends, explore, and walk down the railroads behind his house. Later on, he moved out into the cities. It was soon after he turned 15 when he started hand-to-hand combat lessons. He wasn't the smartest kid in the class, but he sure did pack a punch. After graduating, he became very interested in anything related to illnesses, and began studying them. 2 years later, he got the news that his father passed away. He really never talked to his father much, yet he was extremely depressed for the follow months. After taking counselling and therapy, he was back to studying illness.
It was until 6 years later, a long period of time. He heard 'aliens with gasmasks' were making an attempt to take over Earth. He thought it was a big joke until he met face to face with an Overwatch Soldier, followed along with a group of units. Before he knew it, he was picked up and put in a blank shelter with alot of other people. He was malnourished to the bear minimum, his ribs popping out of his chest. They fed him once in a blue moon.
He then ended up in a grimy city, named City 18. After 3 years of living in his empty apartment, he was moved again to another city. 'City 45'. He lived his life in his blank apartment until he thought it was time to step up and make his life productive. He loved the thought if being in charge. In authority. He liked the fact that he got food more often. He wanted to be part.

(This was a little shabby to write, sorry if it turned out bad.)

---IC Information---
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Name:Red Harlow
CID:#38887
Amount of loyalist points: Just moved into city, currently not known by most people around, current history of loyal actions.
Age: 35
Country of origin: America
Hair colour: Dark brown
Eye colour: Maple brown

Specific skills and specialist, such as medical knowlege, knowlege of technology etc?: I took hand-to-hand combat classes when I was younger, and I have experience with fighting. I also used to study different types of illness in my past.


Have you had any previous affiliations with the CCA of the city or the UU as a whole?: I have not. (OOC: I've ran my own HL2RP server, I've been SA on a server, and I've been a DVL on another server)


Have you had any previous infactions from the CCA or the UU as a whole?: Nope.

[92ndIF] Floridabum: ACCEPTED

Wow, I am impressed by this application. Very detailed, work was put into it, and all out fun to read.

Welcome to the CCA. And welcome, to The Crew.

---OOC Information---
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Steam name: Larouche
Steam ID: Steam_0:1:14953310
Age: 24
How long have you been roleplaying?: 3 years
How long have you been playing with The Crew?: 2 1/2 weeks


20 lines of passive roleplay examples, using /it and /me. (Eg: /it The citizen runs through the checkpoint /me Gives chase)

/me a CCA unit casually patrols the streets in a quiet time during the morning
/it the Unit hears some one yelling his number
/me turns around to see a fellow 04 walking up behind him
04 221- Hey, have you seen anything yet?
/me waves his right hand at waist level with a slight shrug
Me- No its been very quiet all day.
/it the other 04 places his hand on his mask wiping away some dirt as he speaks.
04 221- Its strange, we have had two major conflicts in the last 3 days but all is quiet.
/me rolls his left shoulder trying to feel less worried
Me- All we can do is continue on. The OTA have been busy in the slums but..
/it the 04 interrupts
04 221- Nothing is happening here I know, I know.
/me shakes his head then looks at his standard issue datapad for the time
Me - looks like rations will be held soon, about an hour. We should be ready to report to the terminal.
/it the 04 shrugs
04 221- its always the same, the Citizens line up, they get food, they leave.
/me chuckles lightly
Me - What did you expect with this job? Everyone is starving, they have little fight in them. Even when they do its over quickly.
/it the 04 nods his agreement
04 221- Yea, its probably for the best, I don't know if I could do what I have seen the 02's do. They just.. Beat them.
/me looks into the units mask for a moment, silence settling in.
Me - I uh.. I.. Yea, I get what you mean, some of those beatings were brutal.


20 lines of action roleplay examples, using /it and /me. (Eg: /it THe citizen runs through the checkpoint /me Gives chase)

/me takes cover behind a low wall.
/it 9mm rounds fly over the units head
/me grips his 9mm Pistol in both hand feeling his knees weaken from fear
Me - Crap, crap, Crap!
/it a unit steps up to the side of the cowering unit with a SMG in hand. The unit fires over the wall while yelling.
Unit- GET UP! FIRE YOUR WEAPON!
/me I notice the Unit is wearing a OfC armband but cannot tell his division
/me nods vigorously and forces himself to a low crouch
/it both units open fire on the enemy pouring rounds on them.
/me watch's as the OfC takes cover to reload 9mm rounds bouncing of the ground around his feet
Me- S-Sir! What do we do?
/it the OfC finish's reloading his weapon pulling back the receiver placing a round in the chamber.
OfC - Unit its important you stay calm, wait for the lull in the shooting when they reload and fire back. Reinforcements are on the way.
/me slightly shaking, nods to the OfC
OfC - Theres your chance! Pour it on them!
/me looks over the low wall placing my pistol on the edge and squeeze the trigger multiple times until I hear a audible "Click" and the slide jams back.
Me- RELOADING!
/it the OfC nods to the unit as he fires bursts at the enemy in cover.
/me ejects the spent mag, then slams in a full mag, pulling back the receiver.
/it both units fire during the lull in the fighting until mags are expended.
Me- SIR! SIR! Im OUT!
/it the OfC ignores the unit firing his last few bursts as his SMG clicks loudly.
/it as silence set over the shoot out as the rebels learn the Units are no longer engaging.
Me- What do we do now sir?
/it the OfC looks over
OfC- Pray.
/it the rebels move out of cover slowly testing the units to see if they fire, slowly they move towards their position.
/me shakes while hiding behind his cover thinking that its over, closes his eyes tightly
/it Rifle fire is heard behind the units position
/me opens his eyes to check the sounds, scared out of his wits.
/it a squad of OTA round the corner smoothly entering a firing line, they begin to fire their AR2's felling the Rebels in the streets
Sql - Cleaned. Move it!
OTA 1- Copy.
/it the OTA move forward down the street and enter the building the rebels were in, more shots can be heard.
/me places his hands on the top of the low wall relieved as he watch's the OTA complete their duties.
/it the OfC already on his feet places a hand on the 04's shoulder
OfC- even though you were scared, you did well for a 04.
/me smiles inside his mask
Me- T-Thank you S-Sir!
OfC- See me at the Nexus later for a debrief
/me stands
Me- Yes sir!


Character backstory (10 lines at least detailing you character's background. Events, job, family etc and should reflect your skills):

Kahlan was a Receptionist at a large multi media news division in the heart of old Askra. She was in charge of the calls coming in for problems around the city and dispatched crews to the locations by radio. She always wore a black mini dress cut below the neck that accentuated her body. Her boyfriend was a news director on the 51st floor of the 60 story building.

She enjoy her job and was happy that she had such a loving mate. About an hour before the Combine attack she was at his house where he made her a breakfast of eggs and ham. Her boyfriend placed the food on the table along with a small black box.

She looked at the box in stunned awe, while reaching for it. Her hands were shaking as she opened the box to expose a engagement ring, she took the ring out of the box while hearing the words in her ear "Marry me". She slipped the ring on her finger with tears in her eyes "Y-Yes! YES!".

She turned around to hug him tightly.

They were on their way to her place to pack up her things when he turned on the radio to his favorite new station "-and all Citizens are asked to leave the city or stay indoors. These so called attackers are brutal in nature and are killing everyone in sight, get out of the city now!" She look at him and said "is this a joke?". Just as he was about to answer they drove through a intersection, where a red car was speeding through the red light and smashed into the driver side of the car flipping them end over end down the opposite street.

Kahlan was unable to tell up from down until she unbuckled her seat belt and hit her head on the roof as she fell. She crawled out of the car's passenger side window which was smashed to her freedom. As she got up she began to shakily walk around the vehicle to the driver side. She leaned down to see that her loves head was crushed in, even after checking for a pulse she knew he was dead. With tears in her eyes and rage in her throat she began to scream at the other vehicle still in the middle of the intersection with the front end smashed in.

She ran full tilt at the vehicle and began kicking the front of it with bare feet. She walked to the driver's side and saw a woman with a white shirt that had red paint smeared on the front in the words "Resist them!". Kahlan was unsure who "They" were, but she was not worried about that for the moment. Kahlan screamed at the woman but received no response in return, she looked closely at the woman and noticed a sick black discoloring around her neck. She had died on impact breaking her neck. The woman had a holstered pistol.

The red vehicle was also trailing a sign of cloth stating "RESIST! FIGHT THEM!". She stumbled backwards in full shock from the death of her fiance. She sat down on the corner of the intersection unable to function, sobbing into her palms until finally sleep over came her. She awoke to a light in her face hour later, she looked up to see men in gas masks pointing a strange weapon at her. She attempted to speak but her throat was hoarse from speaking.

She heard the one of the men say "Threat level 0, detain". The last thing she remembers before the butt of the weapon had collided with her head, was the face of her fiancee.

She hates the resistance for everything that had happened that day, and vows revenge.

---IC Information---
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Name: Kahlan Ransom
CID: 28260
Amount of loyalist points: 0
Age: 34
Country of origin: Canada
Hair colour: Aubrun
Eye colour: Green

Specific skills and specialist, such as medical knowlege, knowlege of technology etc?: Management skills, and Low end technology such as computers


Have you had any previous affiliations with the CCA of the city or the UU as a whole?: No.


Have you had any previous infactions from the CCA or the UU as a whole?: No.

antigans: Accepted

Very good application, your IC examples were discriptive and undering with very few errors. The backstory was also great with no spelling errors.

Find me or another superadmin to whitelist you for CCA.

Steam name:Powpowdaddy
Steam ID:
Age:15
How long have you been roleplaying?:A year.
How long have you been playing with The Crew?:Week.


20 lines of passive roleplay examples, using /it and /me. (Eg: /it The citizen runs through the checkpoint /me Gives chase)
/me means fear rp. example:It to the citizen means your going to do something to the citizen for roleplaying./me means like your like giveing your carter something or like doing something with your carter.Its just saying all about what your carter is doing and how you want them to do it and you can do anything because when your useing me its like example: Ronnie Whiting eats pizza. All this means is that your just tell you carter what to do just like Half Life 2 and what you want him to do and everything els to me it feels like real life because I can talk to people and do stuff.
20 lines of action roleplay examples, using /it and /me. (Eg: /it THe citizen runs through the checkpoint /me Gives chase)/me example: Ronnie Whiting looks at Civil Protection.If the citizen runs threw the check point you can kill him because it says on the barrie of warnnigs.When im roleplaying all I do is let me carter walk around and vist places let him eat,let him read books,and just deloping his skills because I want him to be smart.

Character backstory (10 lines at least detailing you character's background. Events, job, family etc and should reflect your skills):
My Carter Ronnie Whiting was a window washer he had 2 kids his wife died from cancer so he was single he was very good at teaching his kids he awalys wanted to be a teacher but he didnt go to collge all his life all he did was just makeing money for his kids so they can go to school and have food.
---IC Information---

Ronnie wrote:Steam name:Powpowdaddy
Steam ID:
Age:15
How long have you been roleplaying?:A year.
How long have you been playing with The Crew?:Week.


20 lines of passive roleplay examples, using /it and /me. (Eg: /it The citizen runs through the checkpoint /me Gives chase)
/me means fear rp. example:It to the citizen means your going to do something to the citizen for roleplaying./me means like your like giveing your carter something or like doing something with your carter.Its just saying all about what your carter is doing and how you want them to do it and you can do anything because when your useing me its like example: Ronnie Whiting eats pizza. All this means is that your just tell you carter what to do just like Half Life 2 and what you want him to do and everything els to me it feels like real life because I can talk to people and do stuff.
20 lines of action roleplay examples, using /it and /me. (Eg: /it THe citizen runs through the checkpoint /me Gives chase)/me example: Ronnie Whiting looks at Civil Protection.If the citizen runs threw the check point you can kill him because it says on the barrie of warnnigs.When im roleplaying all I do is let me carter walk around and vist places let him eat,let him read books,and just deloping his skills because I want him to be smart.

Character backstory (10 lines at least detailing you character's background. Events, job, family etc and should reflect your skills):
My Carter Ronnie Whiting was a window washer he had 2 kids his wife died from cancer so he was single he was very good at teaching his kids he awalys wanted to be a teacher but he didnt go to collge all his life all he did was just makeing money for his kids so they can go to school and have food.
---IC Information---

lol? When it says ''examples'' it means

/me strolls quietly on the sidewalk
/it A citizen is seen being detained for un-civil acts

Not HOW its done.
And your grammar makes your post a total cluster of messed up nonsense.

Denied?

Powpowdaddy: DENIED

You didnt use proper format. Use the example on page one to help you.

Please re-apply in two days.

Steam name:Dimond_miner56
Steam ID:(Cant remember how to get ill redo if I need it)
Age:15
How long have you been roleplaying?:2 years
How long have you been playing with The Crew?:About a week


20 lines of passive roleplay examples, using /it and /me. (Hope this is ok I put in action with passive)
Me:/me Walks into the CWU shop
CWU worker:Hello sir what would you like to buy
Me: A flashlight please
CWU worker: 15 tokens please
Me:/me Hands the tokens and leaves the store
ResistanceGunner:/me Shoots a CP killing him dead
Me:/me Quickly requests CPs into the plaza
RestanceMember: You! come here... NOW!
Me:Y-y-yes?
RestanceMember:Your Coming with us!
OTAs and Combine:/me Come running out of Nexus shooting the rebels
Me:/me Jumps from the resistances hand
ResistanceGunner:/me Shoots the citizen
/it Is shot in the shoulder
Me:/me Falls over and grasps shoulder
ResistanceLeader: Run boys!!
/it ResistanceLeader is shot with a sniper from the rooftops
Me:/me Crawls over to the Combine shooting
Combine01:Dont worry citizen we will handle this
/it The citizen passes out from pain
Me:/me Wakes up in the Nexus with a wrapped up shoulder and medical equipment by him
CombineMedic: Your awake good, I got the bullet out and wraped your shoulder
Me: Thank you...
CombineMedic: Here take this /me Hands the man a health vail
Me: Thanks /me Is taken out of Nexus and taken to the plaza where life continues normally

Character backstory (10 lines at least detailing you character's background. Events, job, family etc and should reflect your skills):Zack was born inside a poor family, as the youngest member. He was living with his parents, his 8 year old big brother and five year old big sister in a small house, sharing rooms with each other.
They lived outside town surrounded by forest, so takes the bus to school daily, always arriving too late.
By the time he was nine, his brother left to the city in an attempt to get a job to earn money for the family. At the age of 14. Zack got kicked out of school, for not coming in some days and refusing to do his homework.
Because of this Zack was forced to be home schooled by his mother, only learning what his mother knew. His father worked as a cloak worker, coming home late, usually around 2am, and his mother worked in a clothes store.
At the age of 19, the 7 hour war began, his big brother was in the military and was forced to fight the combine. his big sister was medically trained, so she left them too to help the injured soldiers from the fights.
Now Zack, and his parents where alone. Hiding in their house, seeing the combine taking more and more of the city. he knew that his sister and brother were down there somewhere, if they weren't dead or captured...
Weeks after the seven hour war started, a canister suddenly smashed into their house knocking out her father. Zack was asleep at the moment, but was instantly awoken by the sound of the canister. he walked outside his room and immediately saw the headcrabs, already beginning to take over his father, burying into his flesh. his mother tried to to fight them with a kitchen knife, but got overrun. Zack ran inside his room again. Closing and locking his doors and windows, trying not to panic.
Two days after the headcrab attack, Zack was starving, thirsty and all alone. Hearing the moans coming from outside his door. he was afraid. What was it?. he just tried to keep it out of his head.
The third day and he was nearly unconscious. he heard what sounded like a car. Just as he was losing consciousness, he heard something running inside, firing a few shots.
When he awoke again, two men were staring nervously at him. Between them they had both food and a glass of water. A small pistol was resting on a table to the right of one of the strangers. Before he could say or ask about anything they gave him the food, demanding that he ate and drank it..
After he had eaten, they took Zack outside.he screamed. he saw the bodies of his parents lying dead on the floor. Their stomach torn apart, guts and blood laying all over the floor. Headcrab bodies were dotted around the room, some lying dead on the furniture.. he fainted at the sight.
he woke up again later inside a small building, one after one, each of the two people who saved their life, and were being processed. A strange person with a strange mask was asking for their name, surname, birthday and other information. Eventually it was Zack's turn. he gave in his information and proceeded to sit with his rescuers. Before they were released they got issued their CID Card. Zack received the CID: #36552(I think..). he was handed a jumpsuit, and was told to put it on. he now lived in city 11.
After days in the city he had learned the rules, what to do and what not to do. he decided he wanted to be loyal to the combine, making sure he didn't have the same fate as his parents . After days in City 11 he got to know Cecilia Henriksen. They started to live together in a small apartment. What Zack didn't know, was that Cecilia was not loyal, but the opposite. Trying to crush the Combine reign. After months in city 11 they were told to move to the train station together with everyone else. At the checkpoint, Zack passed with ease, but Cecilia was forced to stay back and two Civil Protection units took her away.
Zack had to leave her behind, not knowing what would happen to her. he stepped on the train, looking back for Cecilia, who was disappeared. In the train they were told, they were to be relocated to city 45 because of city 11's damage.. At city 45 Zack asked a CP about what happened to Cecilia. The CP just told him to move along. Zack started his life in city 45, all alone, with no friends. Only with one objective. To be successful, to be loyal. And to join the Union. Why? Because he had nowhere else to go...

---IC Information---
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Name: Zack Drue
CID:36552 (I think..)
Amount of loyalist points: -4 (- is good i think)
Age: 20
Country of origin: USA
Hair colour: Black
Eye colour: Red

Specific skills and specialist, such as medical knowlege, knowlege of technology etc?:My sister taught me about everything there is to know about being a docter


Have you had any previous affiliations with the CCA of the city or the UU as a whole?: No


Have you had any previous infactions from the CCA or the UU as a whole?: No

Dimond_miner56 wrote:Steam name:Dimond_miner56
Steam ID:(Cant remember how to get ill redo if I need it)
Age:15
How long have you been roleplaying?:2 years
How long have you been playing with The Crew?:About a week


20 lines of passive roleplay examples, using /it and /me. (Hope this is ok I put in action with passive)
Me:/me Walks into the CWU shop
CWU worker:Hello sir what would you like to buy
Me: A flashlight please
CWU worker: 15 tokens please
Me:/me Hands the tokens and leaves the store
ResistanceGunner:/me Shoots a CP killing him dead
Me:/me Quickly requests CPs into the plaza
RestanceMember: You! come here... NOW!
Me:Y-y-yes?
RestanceMember:Your Coming with us!
OTAs and Combine:/me Come running out of Nexus shooting the rebels
Me:/me Jumps from the resistances hand
ResistanceGunner:/me Shoots the citizen
/it Is shot in the shoulder
Me:/me Falls over and grasps shoulder
ResistanceLeader: Run boys!!
/it ResistanceLeader is shot with a sniper from the rooftops
Me:/me Crawls over to the Combine shooting
Combine01:Dont worry citizen we will handle this
/it The citizen passes out from pain
Me:/me Wakes up in the Nexus with a wrapped up shoulder and medical equipment by him
CombineMedic: Your awake good, I got the bullet out and wraped your shoulder
Me: Thank you...
CombineMedic: Here take this /me Hands the man a health vail
Me: Thanks /me Is taken out of Nexus and taken to the plaza where life continues normally

Character backstory (10 lines at least detailing you character's background. Events, job, family etc and should reflect your skills):Zack was born inside a poor family, as the youngest member. He was living with his parents, his 8 year old big brother and five year old big sister in a small house, sharing rooms with each other.
They lived outside town surrounded by forest, so takes the bus to school daily, always arriving too late.
By the time he was nine, his brother left to the city in an attempt to get a job to earn money for the family. At the age of 14. Zack got kicked out of school, for not coming in some days and refusing to do his homework.
Because of this Zack was forced to be home schooled by his mother, only learning what his mother knew. His father worked as a cloak worker, coming home late, usually around 2am, and his mother worked in a clothes store.
At the age of 19, the 7 hour war began, his big brother was in the military and was forced to fight the combine. his big sister was medically trained, so she left them too to help the injured soldiers from the fights.
Now Zack, and his parents where alone. Hiding in their house, seeing the combine taking more and more of the city. he knew that his sister and brother were down there somewhere, if they weren't dead or captured...
Weeks after the seven hour war started, a canister suddenly smashed into their house knocking out her father. Zack was asleep at the moment, but was instantly awoken by the sound of the canister. he walked outside his room and immediately saw the headcrabs, already beginning to take over his father, burying into his flesh. his mother tried to to fight them with a kitchen knife, but got overrun. Zack ran inside his room again. Closing and locking his doors and windows, trying not to panic.
Two days after the headcrab attack, Zack was starving, thirsty and all alone. Hearing the moans coming from outside his door. he was afraid. What was it?. he just tried to keep it out of his head.
The third day and he was nearly unconscious. he heard what sounded like a car. Just as he was losing consciousness, he heard something running inside, firing a few shots.
When he awoke again, two men were staring nervously at him. Between them they had both food and a glass of water. A small pistol was resting on a table to the right of one of the strangers. Before he could say or ask about anything they gave him the food, demanding that he ate and drank it..
After he had eaten, they took Zack outside.he screamed. he saw the bodies of his parents lying dead on the floor. Their stomach torn apart, guts and blood laying all over the floor. Headcrab bodies were dotted around the room, some lying dead on the furniture.. he fainted at the sight.
he woke up again later inside a small building, one after one, each of the two people who saved their life, and were being processed. A strange person with a strange mask was asking for their name, surname, birthday and other information. Eventually it was Zack's turn. he gave in his information and proceeded to sit with his rescuers. Before they were released they got issued their CID Card. Zack received the CID: #36552(I think..). he was handed a jumpsuit, and was told to put it on. he now lived in city 11.
After days in the city he had learned the rules, what to do and what not to do. he decided he wanted to be loyal to the combine, making sure he didn't have the same fate as his parents . After days in City 11 he got to know Cecilia Henriksen. They started to live together in a small apartment. What Zack didn't know, was that Cecilia was not loyal, but the opposite. Trying to crush the Combine reign. After months in city 11 they were told to move to the train station together with everyone else. At the checkpoint, Zack passed with ease, but Cecilia was forced to stay back and two Civil Protection units took her away.
Zack had to leave her behind, not knowing what would happen to her. he stepped on the train, looking back for Cecilia, who was disappeared. In the train they were told, they were to be relocated to city 45 because of city 11's damage.. At city 45 Zack asked a CP about what happened to Cecilia. The CP just told him to move along. Zack started his life in city 45, all alone, with no friends. Only with one objective. To be successful, to be loyal. And to join the Union. Why? Because he had nowhere else to go...

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Name: Zack Drue
CID:36552 (I think..)
Amount of loyalist points: -4 (- is good i think)
Age: 20
Country of origin: USA
Hair colour: Black
Eye colour: Red

Specific skills and specialist, such as medical knowlege, knowlege of technology etc?:My sister taught me about everything there is to know about being a docter


Have you had any previous affiliations with the CCA of the city or the UU as a whole?: No


Have you had any previous infactions from the CCA or the UU as a whole?: No

What is your steam profile? I'll get your SteamID for yah. Props to you on the backstory.

All applications MUST be posted in this thread. Any that are not will be DENIED.

EXAMPLE: Copy and paste this into your own post, so you can fill it out easily

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Steam name:TRICKY SCOUT
Steam ID:STEAM_0:1:39261980
Age:27
How long have you been roleplaying?:6 months
How long have you been playing with The Crew?:4 months


20 lines of passive roleplay examples, using /it and /me. (Eg: /it The citizen runs through the checkpoint /me Gives chase)
Citizen/ runs at me with fist's up.
CCA unit/I say stop there.
Citizen/throws punch at me.
CCA unit/Grabs stun stick.
CCA unit/puches to wall.
CCA unit/attepts to put zip tie in man (resist?)
Citizen/no resist
CCA unit/Prepare for civil-judgment
CCA unit/Hits with stunstick
CCA unit/drags him back to the nexus.
CCA unit/puts in jail cell.
Citizen/wakes up.
CCA unit/i will let you out in three cycles.
Citizen/LET ME OUT!
CCA unit/Remeber i will let you out in three cycles and if you dont keep going on it will be five.
Citizen/starts hitting head againts the wall.
CCA unit/dont make me knock you out again.
Citizen/keep hitting hitting head against wall.
CCA unit/prepare for (civil-judgment) hits with stun stick.
Citizen/gets knocked out.



20 lines of action roleplay examples, using /it and /me. (Eg: /it THe citizen runs through the checkpoint /me Gives chase)
Character backstory (10 lines at least detailing you character's background. Events, job, family etc and should reflect your skills):
CCA unit/Radio's in we have two citizens trying to escape and there taking the subway.
CCA commander/Radio's all units to the subway we have 2 citizens trying to escape.
CCA unit/Radio's copy that.
CCA unit/There armed.
Citizen/you will never catch me
CCA commander/Open fire!
Citizen/take cover in the train.
CCA unit/Radio's units in the slums Citizens are armed be aware of that.
CCA unit/Radio's copy that.
Citizen/Ok let get into the slums and try and find a place to hide.
CCA unit/stop right there and drop your weapons.
Citizen/Alright i will put it down.
Citizen/shoots at CCA units and runs away
CCA unit/shoots one of the citizens in the leg.
CCA commander/your going away for a long time.
Citizen/you will never take me alive.
CCA unit/pulls stunstick out and knocks the citizen out.
CCA unit/should we apmutate?
CCA commander/yes.
Combine overwatch/should i take out the other citizen.
CCA commander/take him out.


It was 2016 the combine had taken the earth in 7 hours. At first Tison had been thinking all hope had been lost.he joined the army
Three months after the invasion and he had took some town's back. But
one day they had found a city called city 18 a scout group never came back!They had sent pictures of a city called city 18 it was filled with combine.
Along with lots of people who had been captured by the combine they would have one meal a day with water.
We think that they got captured.Any way back to me i was on a patrol on one night there was no lights all we had to see was
are nightvision about 20 metres down the road was a combine check point.They had two striders and there troops were combine elites with there fancy pulse rifle's.
We carryed on down the road and there was one sniper in a tower and he had spotted one of my men so we were engaged in a fire fight.We tried to call in an airstrike
but they were jamming are radios and com unit so we were stuck in the middle of a road with only are guns and are training.Me and my men moved up to the check
point.Two of my men were shot and all was left was me and there was heavy fire.I had been shot in the leg and fell over the combine had stop firing and they came
over to me and said if i didn't tell them what the army was planning they would kill me i told them that we were trying to hide but.So after that they had put me in
the same city as the scout group and some of my family it was city 18.




---IC Information---

Name:Tison Whitebell
CID:10136
Amount of loyalist points:zero
Age:27
Country of origin:united kingdom
Hair colour:brown
Eye colour:blue

Specific skills and specialist, such as medical knowlege, knowlege of technology etc?:
Im good with technology.

Have you had any previous affiliations with the CCA of the city or the UU as a whole?:
Yes.

Have you had any previous infactions from the CCA or the UU as a whole?:
No.

In love with the backstory, the /Me's could be better but as for overall I like it

Dimond_miner56: ACCEPTED!

Steam name: Gremnkai
Steam ID: STEAM_0:1:19271072
Age: 16
How long have you been roleplaying?: I've been role playing in general for about 1 year.
How long have you been playing with The Crew?: On this server about 5 days

20 lines of passive roleplay examples:
Nexus:
/me Stands at Nexus gate with gun holstered
/me Sees citizen holding spouting lies and contraband
/me yells "Citizen, stop!"
/it Runs toward a alley way
/me Pursues citizen
/it Citizen runs into a dead end
/me Pulls up gun and aims at citizen
/it Yells "You will never stop the resistance." as he puts his hands slowly in the air
/me Pushes the citizen against the wall and I say "Apply"
/it Citizen says "Fascist Bastard"
/me Yells again "Apply"
/it Citizen attempts to pull his arm out of mine
/me Smacks the citizen in the face
/me Pulls out stunstick and say "Get on the floor"
/it Gets on the floor
/me Zip ties man on floor
/me Picks up the man by the arm and drags him
/me Tosses him into a cell and I say "Have fun in there"
/it Spits in my face
/me Pulls out stunstick and smacks him across the face
/me Closes door, locks it ,and walks away

20 lines of action roleplay:
Patrolling around city:
/me Pulls out radio and hears other CCA reporting 4 armed citizens in the slums
/me Pulls out handgun and runs toward the slums
/me Sees 3 CCA standing behind cover
/me Hides behind their cover and says "Whats the situation"
/it One CCA replies " 4 armed citizens taking cover in the building over there armed with shotguns and sub machine guns"
/me grunts in disgusts "These people disgust me"
/me says "On 3 You cover me and the other 2 CCA while we rush to the cover ahead of us"
/me Counts " 1.....2......3!"
/me Me and 2 CCA run towards the cover under the covering fire of the other CCA.
/me Hears a CCA officer behind get shot by a shotgun and a big smack
/me Runs back and picks up the CCA officer carrying him to the cover.
/it The CCA officer that was shot says "Thanks" while he nurses the shot in his leg.
/me Pops up and shoots toward a citizen that popped up to shoot.
/me Hears him fall back and moan in agony.
/me Tells the uninjured CCA officer "Throw a stun grenade into the building and we will rush in."
/it CCA officer nods and tosses a stun grenade into the building.
/me Me and the CCA officer rush in shooting at all the rebels blinded on the floor.
/me Sees a uninjured Rebel and then I rush toward him Stunstick in hand.
/me Picks up Rebel pushing him against the wall and then hits him with stunstick until Rebel is knocked out
/me Takes out radio and says "Citizens neutralized we will need a medic we have a injured CCA"
/me Goes back to his normal duties

Character backstory: He lived in Russia for 16 years of his life as a computer technician then.... the combine came. They forced him too move out of his rural community in Russia to a big "super city" in Germany. They forced him to learn a all new language that was new and barbaric to him. He lived in a crowded apartment with 3 or 4 other families. Soon they forced him out of this city and forced him to live in another city and another, never allowing him to be too comfortable in his life. One day when he was 17 he noticed his parents being secretive and reluctant to share anything with him. Then a week afterwards Combine burst into him and his parents apartment taking the whole family with them. Alex (Main person) was detained in a cell for several days before being released. He never saw his parents again. He was moved to a new city where he currently resides.
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Name: Alex Ivanov
CID: 93618
Amount of loyalist points: 27
Age: 22
Country of origin: Russia
Hair colour: Dark black
Eye colour: Blue

Specific skills and specialist, such as medical knowlege, knowlege of technology etc?: I have skill in fixing and using computers


Have you had any previous affiliations with the CCA of the city or the UU as a whole?: No

Have you had any previous infactions from the CCA or the UU as a whole?:
I did when I was around 17 and another when I was exploring the new surroundings I was apparently trespassing

Steam name: Wolfe
Steam ID:STEAM_0:1:26460102
Age:14
How long have you been roleplaying?: 4 years
How long have you been playing with The Crew?: about 3 to 2 weeks or so.


20 lines of passive roleplay examples, using /it and /me. (Eg: /it The citizen runs through the checkpoint /me Gives chase)
/me stands quiet, drinking a can of smooth breen's water, forgetting something...
/me looks around to see anyone to talk too.
/me sees a man going around the corner, expecting him to say something first.
/it The man doesn't see him, passing him without saying anything.
/me is being quite lazy to follow and to speak to.
/me looks as a another women comes, looking at him.
Charles (Me): Hi.
Her: Hello.
/it The consversation stays relatively quiet.
Her: Um... I'n a bit new here... What is there to do...
Charles (Me): Um. Not much, There's apartments, and a well over there... Not much besides that... Just corridors and walkways... and the slums is blocked off.
Her: Oh. Ok. Thanks.
Her: What is your name by the way?
Charles (Me): It's Charles.
Her: Im Eva.
/me nods as she says her name.
Her: Where are you from?
Charles (Me): Im from the UK.
Her: Im from Austria.
Charles (Me): Isn't that a bit close to the UK?
Her: Somewhat.. I guess. I haven't looked at a map in quite a while.
Charles (Me): Oh Ok.
Her: So... Like... I'll go if you want, you don't look l-like..
Charles (Me): Nah, It's fine... No worries.
Her: Ok.
Her: Do you want to come with me to get an a apartment?
Charles (Me): Sure. I don't mind.
Her: Alright.
/me walks with her as he passes through the door.
Her: This one! Wait... This one. No...
/me thinks her of a shopping diva.
Her: Alright... This one. Yes.
/me sighs, and says "Alright, It's nice."



20 lines of action roleplay examples, using /it and /me. (Eg: /it THe citizen runs through the checkpoint /me Gives chase)

/me stands clear, holding his SMG in a two-handed position with a straight posture, motion his head to look for any signs of rebels as he passes the corridor in the slums district.
/me holds a radio against his cheek quickly yelling "What's your 10-20!" Rushing and pulling aside citizens.
/me coughs up blood against a wall as he was shot at, and radios in "10-20 is, D6, Go down the corridor and make a swift turn right!".
/me removes a grenade utility belt, pulling the ring and attempting to toss it down the lane where the rebel fired at him.
/me fires shots down the lane as the grenade explodes, yelling is heard behind the smoke of the grenade.
/me struggles to move back as the building above him is going to collaspe.
/me takes his sheath knife, stabbing it into the ground dragging himself out of the rubble, horribly injured.
/me fires more shots into the lane as another fellow CCA Unit comes in from the D6 Gate, dragging him.
/me holds his chest as he is dragged towards the gate, holding the SMG1 with one hand.
/me falls unconcisous as the CCA Unit drags him slowly pass the gate.
/it The unit lays the CCA (me) weapon onto his stomach as he drags the man.
/me wakes up at a nearby medivac.
/me is being operated on, but is still stable as they remove the bullets, and apply gel.
/me waits as it is healed, and the HELIX leaves the medivac room.
/me gets up, first in a sitting postion looking at his feet, and his eyes try to focus as they are blur-like.
/me opens the lock, and walks out, enabling the lock.
/me stands, then walks slowly down the steps, going out of the Nexus.
/me taps his stunstick, when disabled, against his hip as he patrols the city.
/me looks around as he patrols, checking corners.
/me sees a man running, which I respond, running towards him.
/me yells "Wall!"
/it The man goes onto the wall.
/me attempts to tie the man.
/it The man doesn't resist.
/me ties him, checking for Items of voilation to the code.
/me finds nothing but a new suitcase, and a can of breens water.
/me attempts to beat him unconsisous.
/it The man doesn't resist.
/it The man falls over.
/me takes the man, dragging him towards the nexus.
/me enters into the nexus and the jail center, he tosses the man in.
/me says "Apply!"
/it The man says "John Marc."
/me Says "CID!"
/it The man says "17691."
/me checks his datapad, applying the points of running against his loyalty to the UU status.



Character backstory (10 lines at least detailing you character's background. Events, job, family etc and should reflect your skills):

I was born during the close period of Germany, when economy started to fall and birth rate started to lower, I used to be a cash register worker, at a local shop until the 7 hour war broke out. I became a C.W.U. worker, with my loyalist situation points accounted for. I came to be part-time, but ended full time. So I came to become a C.C.A. I work very hard, and I have full-able ability to comply with any reeducation or work I will be commuting with during when I get civil protection status.


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Name: Anthony Riley
CID: 17691
Amount of loyalist points: -42 (Right, That is um.. Right? Or is it the opposite?)
Age: 21
Country of origin: Germany
Hair color: Short Dark Brown Hair
Eye color: Light Blue, Not sky, but normal color blue, not dark either. In the middle.

Specific skills and specialist, such as medical knowlege, knowlege of technology etc?: I am a worker from City 18, C.W.U. credited for.


Have you had any previous affiliations with the CCA of the city or the UU as a whole?:
C.W.U. Part-time, Helper.


Have you had any previous infactions from the CCA or the UU as a whole?:
None, only one to be running.

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Steam name: ???Rose
Steam ID: STEAM_0:0:43013444
Age: 14
How long have you been roleplaying?: Almost a year
How long have you been playing with The Crew?: Only just joined The Crew, but I have been with LG all the way through to DA.


20 lines of passive roleplay examples, using /it and /me. (Eg: /it The citizen runs through the checkpoint /me Gives chase)
/me sighs as he walks along the footpath, patrolling the Plaza
/me radios in "Control is one hundred percent on this location, no sign of a 647E.
CCA-CORE-05.12345 "Copy that."
/me looks at the gloomy Citizens as they shuffle around, occasionally glancing worriedly in his direction
/it A balding man stands in an alleyway, looking suspicious
/me radios in "Dispatch I have a 10-107 at my 10-20, preparing to 10-29."
/it The man looks worriedly at the CP "I didn't do anything, I swear!"
/me says "Citizen, wall it."
/it The man obeys and walks up to the wall
/me attempts to tie the Citizen (Do you resist?)
/it The Citizen does not resist
/me ties his hands up with a ziptie before patting him down
/me finds nothing and pulls out his datapad "Citizen, Apply."
/it The man replies in a shaky voice "John Smith, Citizen Identification 12345...What did I do? I don't understand!"
/me warns the man as he taps in the information "Keep quite."
/it Everything appears as normal on the screen
/me unties the man and nods to him "Alright, you can go."
/it The Citizen rubs his hands as he says "Thank you, Officer."
/it He walks off in a hurry
/me steps back out on the street and continues his Patrol



20 lines of action roleplay examples, using /it and /me. (Eg: /it THe citizen runs through the checkpoint /me Gives chase)/it The two Citizens are running away from the CP firing his pistol. One of them is limping
Dave says "Ahh Shit! This hurts."
/me is out of breath but manages a short sentence "Got med supplies...get away first!"
CCA-CORE-05.12345 radios in "Dispatch I need 10-12, suspect is getting away!"
/it The two Citizens arrive at a rusty old gate and a staircase that leads to the roof with a few heavy barrels on it.
/me pushes Dave through before shutting the gate and pushing the barrels down on the way up
**Dave jumps from one rooftop to the other before ducking behind a ventilation duct
/me catches up and collapses next to him, gasping for breath "Wont he follow?"
**Dave shakes his head as his face grows paler from the wound in his leg "Too dangerous, could be an ambush."
/me nods as he sits up and opens the backpack on his shoulders, taking out some water, triceps, suture and a needle.
/me says "I don't have any morphine or painkillers, so this might be a little painful."
/me looks for the glinting of the bullet in Daves' leg before pulling it out with the triceps and washing around the wound with water
**Dave moans in pain
/me discards the bullet and pulls out his Suture and needle
**Dave looks at the needle and thread "Fuck, do I have to?"
/me nods and begins to cross back and forth with the needle
**Dave grits his teeth and tries not to think about the metal moving under his skin.
/me ties off the remaining thread before applying some bandages
/me says "That should do it."
**Dave nods "Thanks, you saved my life."

Character backstory (10 lines at least detailing you character's background. Events, job, family etc and should reflect your skills): Dimitri Pouldanski grew up in a middle class Russian family. In his childhood, he had become fascinated by the prospect of surgery and medicine. He had been taught English by his mother from a young age. By the time he was in High School, Dimitri wanted to be a Doctor. Shortly after this, his father died of lung cancer. He was scared, but his mother comforted him, cared for him and told him to keep trying his best. And so fueled by his mother, he studied as hard as he could, doing the best he could until he got to Uni. He did Medical courses involving surgery and medicine. He passed all his tests and got a job as an apprentice doctor at the local hospital. One day at work, he got news that his mother had gotten a severe case pneumonia and was close to death. He rushed home to her, but the paramedics greeted him with sympathetic and grim faces. She had died minutes before he got him. 'Never again.' he though, and tried to save as many people as possible. But then The Combine came. The world was Chaos, the hospitals were half abandoned and overflowing. Dimitri stayed and treated as many people as possible before they took over his home City. After a depressing time as a Citizen, getting used to the world as we know it, he took interest at the fact he could still help people...and the Combine had all sorts of fancy technology. He knew it was the right time and put in his application, hoping to join HELIX as soon as he's ready.

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Name: Dimitri Pouldanski
CID: 12543
Amount of loyalist points:0
Age: 29
Country of origin: Russia
Hair colour: Black
Eye colour: Blue

Specific skills and specialist, such as medical knowlege, knowlege of technology etc?:
Trained Surgeon and Doctor.


Have you had any previous affiliations with the CCA of the city or the UU as a whole?:
No. ((Have had experience as a Dvl, 05-01, EpU, OfC as well as OTA and also, I have been a Super Admin, Admin and an Operator before.))


Have you had any previous infactions from the CCA or the UU as a whole?:
No.

TRICKY SCOUT: Denied
Passive roleplay:
Format was wierd. You didn't use the /me's or /it's and it was a little confusing. The dialog didn't feel real.

sgtdoom12345 wrote:
CCA unit/i will let you out in three cycles.
Citizen/LET ME OUT!
CCA unit/Remeber i will let you out in three cycles and if you dont keep going on it will be five.

Also passive roleplay does not just consist of detaining citizens, it can be talking to other Units or even thinking to yourself and observing your surroundings while guarding the hardpoints. The bottom line is that it wasn't detailed. You could have at least given the CCA unit a name like CCA-C45-CORE.04.23356.

Active Roleplay:
Same deal. Wierd format. Meh RP. Some grammer errors...

sgtdoom12345 wrote:
CCA unit/There armed.

I liked the idea, you just need to refine it and take away some of the awkwardness.

Backstory:
I stopped reading once you said the Combine took over in 2016
/me facepalms.
They took over in the year 200X, aka somewhere between 2000 and 2009.
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Gremnkai: Approved barely...
Passive roleplay:
Good RP examples. Proper format. Acceptable amount of detail. Realistic RP.

Active roleplay:
Same thing.

Backstory:
Less detail then I would want and an inconsistency. Anyone under 18 when the combine invaded was killed. This was the only mistake in your app which is why you were still accepted.
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Wolfe: Denied
Passive roleplay:
Your passive rp should involve you as a CCA unit. This is a CCA APP.

Active roleplay:
Don't change anything. IT'S BEAUTIFUL.

Backstory:
There is a 10 line minimum, you gave only 7. Also it is not detailed enough.
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???Rose: Accepted
I'm not even gonna break it down.
>MFW I read your app.

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FOR ALL THOSE WHO WERE DENIED REAPPLY IN 2 DAYS.
FOR ALL THOSE WHO WERE ACCEPTED ASK AN SA TO WHITE LIST YOU.

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Steam name:Combine SN1PER (I have some clan tags that change daily so yeah.)
Steam ID:STEAM_0:1:40329715
Age:15
How long have you been roleplaying?:For about 2 years or so.
How long have you been playing with The Crew?:Well I just got on playing with the crew a bit after it was up


20 lines of passive roleplay: /me Says Citizen!
/it Citizen has a look of fear in his eyes
/me Says Wall!
/it Citizen quickly looks around and dashes!
/me Pulls out his radio informs other Civil Protection that he is to be captured
/it Citizens screams
/me Runs over to the citizen only to find him held down by CP
/it A CmD comes over and judges his punishment
/me Goes to amputation room and say's "Amptutate!"
/it The ctizen screams even louder as a bullet penetrated through his head

20 lines of action roleplay examples, using /it and /me. (Eg: /it THe citizen runs through the checkpoint /me Gives chase):
/me Leans on wall with stunstick in right hand
/it Citizen walks over and kicks me and runs
/me I radio in we have a citizen running
/it Citizen climbs a fence
/me Calls back up jumps over the fence
/it Rebels aiming ar2s
/me Aims at rebels says "Get Down!"
/it Rebels get ont ehir knees knowing they have no chance against the elite combine
/me Ties rebels up and throws them in their cell
/it Rebel attempts to ram through the forcefield
/me SeC watches and laughs "Haha!"

Character backstory (10 lines at least detailing you character's background. Events, job, family etc and should reflect your skills):I was fresh off the train in New York as I wandered my Mom and Dad were right next to me I looked around. I thought what could I do first in this big city! suddenly I heard gunshots and marching the military was falling back under the subway people ran screaming and yelling GET DOWN! I took a look up in the city. I saw these paranormal looking creatures human shaped with futuristic suits on.I turned to my side one of those things was taking my dad I tried kicking the thing I knew Mixed Martial Arts I kicked the thing. It definately felt like I was a little flea attempting to kick him.He kicked me in the face I got on my knees they took me inside a dark cell with a force field guarding it and two strange men with one big red eye I was only 15 I had no idea of what was going on now here I am fresh off the train to City 45. I don't know what I will do first but I think I will join those I think they were Combine? I want to join to make people suffer the pain I did when I saw my dad and never saw him again when he was taken away. The only thing that keeps me alive is the thirst for vengeance....


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Name:Eddie Smith
CID:40025
Amount of loyalist points:0 I just joined
Age:18
Country of origin:U.S.A
Hair colour:Dark Black
Eye colour:Blue

Specific skills and specialist, such as medical knowlege, knowlege of technology etc?:My character knows mixed martial arts he is good at unarmed combat


Have you had any previous affiliations with the CCA of the city or the UU as a whole?:No sadly not


Have you had any previous infactions from the CCA or the UU as a whole?:Not that I recall

Yes. I agree with you archimedes.

Sniper's whitelist app is revoked. Application was accepted falsely.

Steam name: Wolfe
Steam ID:STEAM_0:1:26460102
Age:14
How long have you been roleplaying?: 4 years
How long have you been playing with The Crew?: about 3 to 2 weeks or so.


20 lines of passive roleplay examples, using /it and /me. (Eg: /it The citizen runs through the checkpoint /me Gives chase)
/me takes out some special breens water, drinking it, and tossing it into the trash.
/me holds his radio against his ear as he waits for a civil protection unit to respond.
/me taps his stunstick against his coat as he waits for the citzens to get their rations.
/me waits for the day to go by, as he gaurds the slums hardpoint.
/me slowly loads his clip as he leans against the nexus door.
/me holds a special breen water in his hand, popping the lid, and sipping.
/me waits until the sectorial gives him direct orders.
/me stands against the tower, standing proud and tall, with his smg on his side, and a pistol in one hand.
/me holds his mask in one hand, waking up.
/me starts to rub bio-gel onto his bullet wound.
/it He slowly walks toward his group unit.
/it He is waited for the group unit to say something.
/it The Group unit, and him, chat with each other, before being called into training.
/it He starts to stutter as a sectioral walks by, and then he makes a slight wave pose, going into acknowledgement stature.
/it He walks against the wall, to turn the breens machine to find a hidden steath knife.
/it He waits until the sectorial calls him into his office.
/it He lets the breeze blow against him as he walks out of the nexus, with a pistol in one hand.
/it He waits until the recruit comes back into the nexus, as he didn't follow orders as told.
/it He starts to speak, mumbling, with a deep vo-coder.
/it He withdraws his mask, leaving a young face physically, but mentally a torn child.





20 lines of action roleplay examples, using /it and /me. (Eg: /it THe citizen runs through the checkpoint /me Gives chase)

/me stands clear, holding his SMG in a two-handed position with a straight posture, motion his head to look for any signs of rebels as he passes the corridor in the slums district.
/me holds a radio against his cheek quickly yelling "What's your 10-20!" Rushing and pulling aside citizens.
/me coughs up blood against a wall as he was shot at, and radios in "10-20 is, D6, Go down the corridor and make a swift turn right!".
/me removes a grenade utility belt, pulling the ring and attempting to toss it down the lane where the rebel fired at him.
/me fires shots down the lane as the grenade explodes, yelling is heard behind the smoke of the grenade.
/me struggles to move back as the building above him is going to collaspe.
/me takes his sheath knife, stabbing it into the ground dragging himself out of the rubble, horribly injured.
/me fires more shots into the lane as another fellow CCA Unit comes in from the D6 Gate, dragging him.
/me holds his chest as he is dragged towards the gate, holding the SMG1 with one hand.
/me falls unconcisous as the CCA Unit drags him slowly pass the gate.
/it The unit lays the CCA (me) weapon onto his stomach as he drags the man.
/me wakes up at a nearby medivac.
/me is being operated on, but is still stable as they remove the bullets, and apply gel.
/me waits as it is healed, and the HELIX leaves the medivac room.
/me gets up, first in a sitting postion looking at his feet, and his eyes try to focus as they are blur-like.
/me opens the lock, and walks out, enabling the lock.
/me stands, then walks slowly down the steps, going out of the Nexus.
/me taps his stunstick, when disabled, against his hip as he patrols the city.
/me looks around as he patrols, checking corners.
/me sees a man running, which I respond, running towards him.
/me yells "Wall!"
/it The man goes onto the wall.
/me attempts to tie the man.
/it The man doesn't resist.
/me ties him, checking for Items of voilation to the code.
/me finds nothing but a new suitcase, and a can of breens water.
/me attempts to beat him unconsisous.
/it The man doesn't resist.
/it The man falls over.
/me takes the man, dragging him towards the nexus.
/me enters into the nexus and the jail center, he tosses the man in.
/me says "Apply!"
/it The man says "John Marc."
/me Says "CID!"
/it The man says "17691."
/me checks his datapad, applying the points of running against his loyalty to the UU status.



Character backstory (10 lines at least detailing you character's background. Events, job, family etc and should reflect your skills):

He was born in America, July 1995. During that period, When in his youngling years (Toddler), he experienced multiple beatings from his father, as an excuse to calm down his anger on others, he took it on his child. This child, Anthony Riley, developed a snear sense of becoming very, cold. Cold as in, His heart was very hardened, and could be lashed at multiple times before actaully breaking into peices. Following his dad's beatings, His ignorant mom caught notice, finally arresting his dad. He live a very lonely life, for his mom being strict towards him, leaving and entering the house. He developed a anti social bond between humans, for how they treated him. Now, It was primarily focused on his parents, on his hatred. But, at the time of suffereing more than a toddler should suffer as he grew to be a teen, He changed. He became one of the many ignored outsiders for his social problems that he wasn't able to developed correctly due to his parents. As he stepped into his teen years, He ended up as an orphan, not being able to comply with the nuns, for his social behaivor, and self-minded lifestyle. He was very quiet, and was never approved of, or spoke of. He was there, to be there.
After his teen years passing, and combine took over earth. He felt that it was time to take back his life. He became a signature loyalist in city 8, first having to learn much japanese because the citizens in city 8, composed of japanese, asians, and others alike. He signed up to be a combine earlier in city 8, being deported to city 45, where to this day, he waits to become accepted.


---IC Information---
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Name: Anthony Riley
CID: 17691
Amount of loyalist points: -42 (Right, That is um.. Right? Or is it the opposite?)
Age: 21
Country of origin: Germany
Hair color: Short Dark Brown Hair
Eye color: Light Blue, Not sky, but normal color blue, not dark either. In the middle.

Specific skills and specialist, such as medical knowlege, knowlege of technology etc?: I am a worker from City 18, C.W.U. credited for.


Have you had any previous affiliations with the CCA of the city or the UU as a whole?:
C.W.U. Part-time, Helper.


Have you had any previous infactions from the CCA or the UU as a whole?:
None, only one to be running.

I had some free time to spend on this revision, If you want to review it. YOu can. I hope. Thanks.

Change the Country of origin to: America.