CCA Applications

---OOC Information---
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Steam name: mbazid
Steam ID: http: STEAM_0:0:6017925
Age: 15
How long have you been roleplaying?: About 3 years now
How long have you been playing with The Crew?: About 1.5-2 weeks
How long have you played on our server, in total?: 3 days, 7 hours, 7 minutes, 37 seconds http://steamcommunity.com/id/mbazid/screenshots/


20 lines of passive roleplay examples, using /it and /me. (Eg: /it The citizen runs through the checkpoint /me Gives chase)
/me Starts her patrol and heads to checkpoint B
/it A citizen walks up to her and asks her something
Phil Bradley says: “Hello, Ma’am. Do you have any tasks for me at this time?”
/me Looks at the citizen and then around the plaza and says
CCA-C18-CORE-06.97630 says: “I don’t know go pick up some trash around the plaza”
/it The citizen nods and walks away looking for things to pick up and throw away
/it The plaza looks calm as the citizens walk around
/me Continues to the checkpoint
/it A 05 is standing guard at the checkpoint waiting for any citizen to dare walk near the checkpoint
/me Looks at the 05 and nods
/it The 05 nods back and says
CCA-C18-CORE-05.54323 says:”Seen any activity lately?”
/me Shakes her head and says
CCA-C18-CORE-06.97630 says: “No, nothing special just a citizen asking for work. How about you? Have you seen anything strange lately?”
/it The 05 shakes his head saying
CCA-C18-CORE-05.54323 says: “Negative, I haven’t seen anything strange as of today.”
/me Nods and then walks behind the barricade taking guard of checkpoint B
/it The sun starts to go down
/me Looks up and says
CCA-C18-CORE-06.97630 says: “It looks like it’s almost curfew time we should order the start herding the citizens to the CAH.”
/it The 05 nods and says
CCA-C18-CORE-05.54323 says: “Agreed, I will stay here to guard the checkpoint while you go make sure the citizens go inside the CAH.”
/me Nods in agreement and walks away to start herding the citizens to the CAH.
/it The sun descends under the horizon signalling curfew tine.
/me Looks up at the sky and says
CCA-C18-CORE-06.97630 says: “Well it’s curfew time....”
/me Yells at the citizens to enter the CAH or they would be detained
/it The citizens head to the CAH in fear and then enters it without question.
/me Smiles under her mask as the citizens enter the CAH

20 lines of action roleplay examples, using /it and /me. (Eg: /it The citizen runs through the checkpoint /me Gives chase)
/it The plaza is currently dark as it is now night and during curfew.
/it A fast zombie charges at CCA-C18-CORE-06.97630 from almost nowhere
/me points 9mm at the fast zombie and shoots it in the head
/it Another 4 fast zombies charge at her giving her no choice but to retreat back
/me Radios in for backup
CCA-C18-CORE-06.97630 radios: “Need back up I’ve got multiple necrotics in the plaza!”
/it 5 more fast zombies come in through the slums followed by 10 normal zombies
/me Yells at the necrotics to get their attention then fires her 9mm at them.
CCA-C18-CORE-06.60039 yells: “Shit! There’s so many! Where’s that back up?”
CCA-C18-CORE-06.97630 says: “They’ll be here, they’ll be here!”
/it The plaza is now filled with zombies.
/it The 06 aims at one of the fast zombies and shoots at it but misses.
/it The backup get here and opens fire on the zombies.
/me Fires her 9mm hitting more zombies.
/it CCA-C18-CORE-06.97630’s 9mm clicks telling her that her clip has run dry
/me empties her 9mm and puts a new clip in
CCA-C18-CORE-06.97630 Yells: “Why are there so many!?”
CCA-C18-CORE-03.12453 says: “We don’t know. Something must be attracting them.”
/it One of the fast zombies jumps on CCA-C18-CORE-06.60039 and starts to rip him apart
/me runs up and kicks the fast zombie off of him then put four bullets into its head killing it.
/it CCA-C18-CORE-06.60039 doesn’t move and is bleeding badly
/me radios in for a Helix
CCA-C18-CORE-06.97630 radios: “We’ve got a man down! He needs medical attention! Requesting a Helix.
/it A Helix runs out of the nexus and heads for the wounded 06.
/me opens fire on the other zombies but more keep coming
CCA-C18-CORE-06.97630 yells: “They just keep coming we need more men!
/it The Helix looks at the number of zombies and says
CCA-C18-HELIX-01.98762 says: “Agreed. There are too many for us alone to handle even with the backup we still need more units here.
/it Two fast zombies charge at the Helix
/it The Helix uses his shotgun too blow off their heads killing them instantly
/it A fast zombie rushes at the Helix from behind
CCA-C18-CORE-06.97630 Yells: “Sir behind you!”
/me Aims at the fast zombie and opens fire killing it instantly
/it OTA units come in and starts opening fire on the zombies
/it The zombies start to dissipate as they fall down dead
/me Sighs in relief as the last few zombies fall dead
/it The plaza is now littered with dead zombies
CCA-C18-CORE-06.97630 says: “Thank god. I thought we were dead from all of those necrotics.”
/it The Helix laughs at the 06
CCA-C18-Helix-01.98762 says: “You haven’t seen much action have you?”
CCA-C18-CORE-06.97630 says: “Before I was a CCA yes but not really as a CCA. This is probably the biggest thing I’ve ever seen.”
/me looks at the wounded 06
CCA-C18-CORE-06.97630 says: “Hey is he going to be ok?”
/it The Helix nods
CCA-C18-CORE-01.97630 says: “Yes, the necrotic didn’t do too much damage to him but enough to make him lose conciseness.”
/me Smiles under her mask
CCA-C18-CORE-06.97630 says: “Good, it would be bad if we lost another unit to this.”
/me motions to the plaza
/it The Helix nods and carries the 06 back to the nexus to treat his wounds.




Character backstory (10 lines at least detailing you character's background. Events, job, family etc and should reflect your skills):
The Back Story of Lily Style:
Lily Styles was born in Toronto Ontario. Her childhood was filled with sadness due to her parents and sister’s untimely death. They had died after the plane they were on had crashed on their way back from Paris France. Since her parents and sister died she had been deeply depressed and never really talked to many people or had any relationships with anyone. After spending the better part of her life in an orphanage she had finally grew old enough to leave. Luckily for her she had still gone to school during her time in the orphanage. So she had enough knowledge to go to college. After she was accepted to Mohawk College she stayed mainly to herself never really talking to anyone else. After she graduated college she applied for a job at a car mechanics. She got the job but her boss was an ass and always treated her like crap. One day he was drunk he had tripped over a tool on the ground and fell hitting his head off of a car killing him instantly. There was an investigation about his death and they shutdown the garage due to the fact that it didn’t match any of the safety standards. After this she couldn’t get a new job and her life got even worse. She was in her home looking in the newspaper for a new job when she heard strange noises coming from outside. She looked outside to see an utter cataclysm as people were gunned down by combine soldiers. She saw them running into her apartment. So she knew they were looking for anyone else inside. So she decided to lie down outside of her apartment and wait them to either kill her or take her away. She didn’t care what would happen to her then. When they reached her they took her away. After these events she was shipped off to city 18 were she would live for the rest of her life. When she arrived she decided to gain the CCA’s trust. She had decided to gain their trust because she knew they weren’t the kind of people to get in trouble with and they were a lot better than the people she had grown up with. After weeks of backbreaking work and getting taken hostage once she had finally became a level 2 loyalist. She had finally decided that it would be best for her to join the CCA so she had sent an application to join the CCA and now awaits the reply.

---IC Information---
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Name: Lily Style
CID: 97630
Amount of loyalist points: Last I checked it was -41
Age: 34
Country of origin: Canada
Hair colour: Dirty blond
Eye colour: Green

Specific skills and specialist, such as medical knowlege, knowlege of technology etc?:
She was had just became a car mechanic before the 7 hour war and therefore she knows some knowledge on vehicles and other contraptions.

Have you had any previous affiliations with the CCA of the city or the UU as a whole?:
She was a loyalist level 2 after days of work for the CCA of that city. She was also saved by them when she was taken hostage by some man who had somehow got himself a gun.

Have you had any previous infractions from the CCA or the UU as a whole?:
No she was always loyal to the CCA and the UU.

Steam name: Jaquecz
Steam ID:STEAM_0:1: 42590752
Age:15
How long have you been roleplaying?: 3 years
How long have you been playing with The Crew?:

20 lines of passive roleplay:
/me Walks into the plaza
/it rations are announced
/me Begins to sprint to the line, hoping to get rations quickly
/it a CCA notices and sprints after Adrian, because he is well fed and not malnourished, he catches up and stops him
CCA-C18-CORE-05.55332 ###:: Citizen
/me Turns to the CCA and says "Yes Officer?"
CCA-C18-CORE-05.55332 ###:: "No running."
Adrian Asem says:"Sorry it won't happen again"
CCA-C18-CORE-05.55332###:: "Good."
/me Continues to the line, because he sprinted, he gets there before a large group of citizens follow
/it The waiting line is dull and boring, someone begins to talk
/me Looks around for the source of talking, hoping to warn him to do such a thing.
/it a CCA walks in, and firmly tells the citizen to shut up
Anonymous Citizen says "Fuck you!"
CCA-C18-CORE-02.23682 ###::"Audio violation"
/it The CCA flicks on his stun stick and tears the citizen a new one, eventually to death, he over did it.
CCA-C18-CORE-02.23682 ###::radios "Get someone to pick up this body"
/me Shakes his head, both in sorrow and in disappointment
Anonymous Citizen whispers "I can't believe he actually did that, monsters..."
/me Turns to face the citizen
Adrian Asem says:"He made his choice, and he paid the price, sadly."
/it The Anonymous Citizen Looks at Adrian with a surprised and replused look.
Anonymous Citizen says "W-What? What kind of person are you? The Combine are monsters and-"
/it The Citizens just simply stutters and looks away from Adrian, disgusted that somebody, like him, a human, could accept the life in which they live in.
/me Sighs and resumes being content at the rations of which he will obtain imminently.
20 lines of action roleplay:

/it An explosion rocks the plaza, a catwalk falls and decapitates an unlucky citizen
/it The plaza is sent into a state of chaos and panic as citizens run around in circles and hide in corners and CCA attempt to calm them down, or simply knocking them out and dragging the bodies in-doors
/me Holds his ears as the slightly familiar ringing sound slowly fades
CCA-C18-04.22323 ###:: Citizen get up!
/me Looks up at the CCA, he is automatically calmer, as a familiar face of order looks down at him, he gets up and is told what to do
CCA-C18-04.22323 ###:: Citizen go to the train statio-
/it a bullet penetrates the CCA's facemask, and exits through the other side, creating a spray of blood as he slumps to the ground
/me Looks to the area of which the bullet came from, and notices a group of rebels fighting off antlions on the bridge, along with a rebel armed with a combine sniper rifle.
/it a combine dropship appears from the nexus and descends to the City plaza, deploying a squad of OWS on the bridge, along with a few BLADE.
OWS-C18 ###:: Amputate!
/it a quick firefight ensues, as the OWS push the Rebels back and the few BLADE quickly dispatch the antlions.
/it An OWS fires at a rebel's head
** OWS-C18 has rolled 53 out of 100 [+30 roll bonus, aug]
** Anonymous Rebel has rolled 60 out of 100
/it The bullet from the OWS's SMG stay on course, and blows a hole in the anti-citizen's head and he slumps to the ground, dead.
/it The other rebels are shocked at the death of one of their comrades, and quickly retreat.
/it The rest of the OWS pursue the rebels into the slums
/me Silently wishes the Overwatch Soldiers luck as he runs to the over-crowded train station.
/it Adrian took too long, as the train station is currently surrounded by antlions, the few CCA are holding them back with support from a single BLADE.
/me Scared runs back to the CWU pharmacy, and takes refuge there and waits out the chaos
/it Bullets, screams and alien screeches are heard echoing through the hallway where Adrian hides in the corner
/it The sounds die down, eventually becoming silent.
/it A Combine drop ship enters the plaza, the roar of its thrusters drowning out most noise, voices are barely audible
/it The OWS squad which pursued the rebels approach the drop ship, a HELIX approaches them
/it The HELIX converses with a member of the squad, and tends to the OWS's injuries
/me Is intrigued by the scene, initially believing that the Combine didn't have those sort of positions open.
/me Makes his mind up on the spot, he is going to join the CCA as a HELIX



Character backstory :Adrian Asem has always been an obedient child, he is loving and caring of his peers, and spiteful and very disappointed whenever he sees someone breaking the rules, or the law. He has always tried his best in school, getting averages of 80% to 100%. He has always had a strong sense of justice, and order. In high-school he learned that that a friend of his died because of non-sufficient medical attention, because of this he decided he would learn and practice medicine to save others from the same fate.

Just days before the nine hour war began he was still in medical school, and was almost finished. But then it happened, portal stormed opened up all over the world, Just as he was on his way home, a gigantic portal appeared over his head, in the sky. Strange vehicles, flying machines that looked like insects and strange animals poured out of the black circle. After he returned home he did what most people did. He flicked on the TV and watched.
Adrian was surprised and scared as the military began to falter against the entity known as the "Universal Union", He watched as the worlds armies were cast aside effortlessly by the seemingly invulnerable Universal Union. Just as he was watching the TV in shock and awe, his door was blown apart, and humanoids burst in, masks on their faces, cold blue emotionless eyes which stared him down. He heard a radio sound come from within the beings mask, all it said was "On the wall" being the obedient person that he was, complied with them and, eventually moved to city 18, where he now spends his life, mostly chatting with those he likes.
As the time passed, he observed the combine and learned to obey them. Naturally, obedience was no problem for him, he watched the CCA alot more than most citizens, some called him crazy or something equally unflattering. He came to admire them, and they even became his rolemodels, he didn't mind that they beat people, as that was the best way for discipline, he was okay with the fact that they were harsh, as it was necessary. Eventually he decided he would join the CCA.




---IC Information---
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Name: Adrian Asem
CID: 74906
Amount of loyalist points: 0
Age: 25
Country of origin: Canada
Hair colour: Black
Eye colour: Black

Specific skills and specialist, such as medical knowledge, knowledge of technology etc?: Adrian has gone through medical school, along with limited experience as a medic during the seven hour war, no combat at all. He also has limited but sufficient experience at technology, as he can repair most things.


Have you had any previous affiliations with the CCA of the city or the UU as a whole?: Nope.


Have you had any previous infactions from the CCA or the UU as a whole?: Nope.

Jaquecz: Accepted

I really enjoyed reading your application and it's full of detail and some great RP examples. I also see you on the server often RPing so you're defiantly worthy of CCA. Ask any SA to whitelist you.

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Steam name:avpralienwarrior
Steam ID: STEAM_0:1:51817040
Age: I will be 14 in May
How long have you been roleplaying?: About a year and a half now
How long have you been playing with The Crew?: I've been on for multiple days, just not that much time on each day.
How long have you played on our server, in total?: You must have played here for at least 6 hours. (Don't know how to do this? Click here!) 6 hours and 2 minutes
http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=124544311


20 lines of passive roleplay examples, using /it and /me. (Eg: /it The citizen runs through the checkpoint /me Gives chase)
/me Get's his uniform on
/it The uniform is fresh and new
/me Get's a drink
/me Sits down and takes off faceplate
/me Takes a sip of the drink
/it It tastes alright
/me Puts down the drink and gets the newspaper
/it It is old and wrinkled
/me Reads it over, while grabbing some supplements
/it The supplements are the Metro-Police supplements
/me Tastes it, being delighted that it tastes better than Citizen supplements
/it It's still a paste, though
/me Puts down the supplements and continues reading the paper
/me Puts down the paper and takes a walk outside
/it It's chilly out
/me Continues walking, a bit chilly
/it His radio comes alive with chatter, He continues to walk
/me Grabs his radio and lowers the volume
/it He notices his name come up on the radio
/me Brings up the volume and brings it to his head, So he can listen
/it Somebody is calling for his assistance by the ration distribution




20 lines of action roleplay examples, using /it and /me. (Eg: /it The citizen runs through the checkpoint /me Gives chase)
/it The officer is patrolling
/it The radio comes alive with chatter
/it A officer is calling for assistance
CP1: Copy that, Moving to your position
/me Grabs hold of his stun-stick to move towards the Officer's 10-20
/it He notices a fight going on between the CP and three other citizens
/me Flicks on his stun-stick, running towards the fight
CP2: Help!
CP1: Citizens! Face the wall NOW!
/it The citizens comply, facing the wall
/me Attempts to tie citizen1 (Resist?)
/it The citizen doesn't resist
/me Attempts to tie citizen2 (Resist?)
/it The citizen doesn't resist
/me Attempts to tie citizen3 (Resist?)
/it The citizen resist's
CP1: /roll
Citizen3:/roll
/it (The Citizen3 wins)
/it The citizen runs towards the slums
/radio We have a malignant trying to evade arrest. He is running towards Slums.
/me Unholsters his USP, Flicking off the safety, And loads a fresh mag in
/it The citizen reveals a USP and starts to fire at the CP
/radio Help! Officer is being fired at near the Slums
/me Starts to shoot at the Citizen, hitting him in the lungs
/it He collapses and he bleeds out
/it He is trying to breathe, but is drowning in his own blood
/me Stands over the dying Citizen
/me Fires a bullet into the citizen's head, killing him instantly
CP1: Sentence delivered


Character backstory (10 lines at least detailing you character's background. Events, job, family etc and should reflect your skills):
My character was born in 1983 in America. He was a lonely child who was rather picked-on a lot. But he did have one friend, his pet dog named Peanut. Peanut and him played everyday when he got home from school. His parents were rich, but they didn't care much for him. One day, when he turned 15, he learned that his pet will have babies. He was so happy. Unfortunately, his parents weren't, so without his knowledge, the parents got rid of his dog. He was devastated when they told him he ran away. His childhood wasn't the most favorite time of his, as he grew older though, he had a fascination with authority and protection of civilization.
Once he was 18, he left his parents. He moved to City 45 (wasn't known for that name at the time) where he met the love of his life. He met a girl named Jessica. Jessica and him fell in love at first glance. Once he was 19 and she was 18, he married her. She, of course, said yes. Unfortunately he left to train to become a correctional officer. He came back only a half of a year later because he missed his wife too much. She didn't cheat on him whatsoever and he was extremely happy because of it. They planned on having a kid soon, but they weren't ready yet. He decided to just go back to school and get his Doctorate in Criminology. The year was now 2001, but he decided to hold off, just yet, to have a baby.
He got home and the year was 2001. He met his wife and was extremely delighted when she told him she opened up a café shop to support herself. His life was quiet and calm, he found himself a job in the Russian Police force. Soon they decided to start to try to have their baby. Unfortunately they couldn't. That didn't deter them, they tried and tried, but it seemed like it was impossible. The year was now 2004, and they had to evacuated into safe areas because of the portal storms. Even in the time of distress, they still were happy together. Then it happened in 2005.... The seven hour war began with the Combine armada invading earth. He watched on T.V. the greatest alliance in the world, the U.N. being terrified. In just seven hours, all the great armies in the world, America, England, China, and others were toppled over by the Combine. He watched on T.V. soldiers in what appeared to be giant body-armored suits with helmets covering their faces with glowing blue eyes. The "safe area" wasn't safe at all for the citizens. The combine have came and ravaged the place. They murdered innocent people, but showing great authority. He was intrigued by it, he knew he shouldn't have been interested in it, but it still drew him in. Soon when he heard about the suppressive field that stopped child birth and pregnancy, he was aghast with deep sorrow and grief. He decided to do something very drastic and extreme. He told his wife this very sentence," My love, in this dark times of unknowing and grief, there is a responsibility to uphold, to protect and enforce civilization.... goodbye my love, please go into hiding." With that, he left and joined the Civil Protection. They moved him to City 18 after that. He doesn't know where his wife is, but he always hopes every time a train arrives in City 18, his wife would come off of it. Unknowingly to him, she got detained for malcompliance and was amputated. That is where his life is today.

---IC Information---
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Name: James Adams
CID:26788
Amount of loyalist points:0
Age: 30
Country of origin: U.S.A
Hair colour: Black
Eye colour: Green

Specific skills and specialist, such as medical knowlege, knowlege of technology etc?: I have a doctorate in Criminology and I was a Russian Police detective


Have you had any previous affiliations with the CCA of the city or the UU as a whole?: No


Have you had any previous infactions from the CCA or the UU as a whole?: No

Steam name: Jamiefoxx121
Steam ID: 0:1:26761500
Age: 17
How long have you been roleplaying?: I have been roleplaying for 6 year’s now.
How long have you been playing with The Crew?: Picture on page

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=124864644

How long have you played on our server, in total?: You must have played here for at least 6 hours. (Don't know how to do this? Click here!) I have been playing on this server


20 lines of passive roleplay examples, using /it and /me. (Eg: /it The citizen runs through the checkpoint /me Gives chase)

/me Jeff smith runs past CCA.C18.02.Nova.0332
/it CCA.C18.02.Nova.0332 un holsters stunstick and flicks it on
CCA.C18.02.Nova.0332 Says: Citizen, hold it right there
/me Jeff smith stops and turns around
CCA.C18.02.Nova.0332 says: Citizen!, Wall!
/me Jeff smith walks over to the wall and puts hands on it
/it CCA.C18.02.Nova.0332 stands behind the citizen
CCA.C18.02.Nova.0332 Says: Apply!
Jeff smith Smith says : Jeff smith 98999
/it CCA.C18.02.Nova.0332 pulls out Datapad and types in his information, comes up clean
/it CCA.C18.02.Nova.0332 puts 2 points on his record for running.
CCA.C18.02.Nova.0332 Says: Alright you can go.
/me Jeff smith walks away
/it CCA.C18.Nova.02.0332 goes back on patrol
/me jack smith walks back to his apartment block
/it James smark walks up to Jeff smith
James smark says to Jeff smith: what was that all about ?
Jeff smith says: Just some CCA trying to impress there leader.
James smark Says: I know what you mean, one of those assholes put me in jail just for bumping into him.
Jeff smith says: crazy
James smark says: yeah, well I better get going
James smark says: bye
Jeff smith says: bye.







20 lines of action roleplay examples, using /it and /me. (Eg: /it THe citizen runs through the checkpoint /me Gives chase)
/itJack smith walks by Jamie Jacoby
/it Jack smith stops right in front of Jamie Jacoby and pulls out a gun
Jack smith yells: Give me all your money, or they’re going to have scrape your brains off the side walk.
/me Jamie Jacoby steps back a few steps
Jamie Jacoby says: Pleases man I don’t want any trouble.
/itCCA. C18. CORE. 03.991 see’s the confrontation.
CCA.C18.CORE.03.991 Yells: Citizen!, Hold it Right there!
/me Jack smith turns from Jamie Jacoby and looks at the Civil protection unit.
Jack smith says: Oh shit.
/me Jack smith runs
CCA.C18.CORE. 03.991 Radio’s in: In pursuit of Anti Citizen.
Dispatch Says: copy that.
/it CCA.C18.CORE.03.991 Attempts to tackle Jack smith.
/itCCA.C18.CORE.03.991 Rolls 99 out of 100
/me Jack smith Roll’s 87 out of 100
/it CCA.C18.Core.03.991 tackle’s Jack smith to the ground.
/me Jack smith try’s Attempts to get out of the unit’s grip
/me Jack smith Roll’s 94 out of 100
/it CCA.C18.CORE.03.991 Roll’s 99 out of 100.
/it CCA.C18.CORE.03.991 Slams Jacks smith face on the brick wall.
/me Jack smith spits out out a tooth
Jack smith says: you bastared.
CCA.C18.Core.03.991: Resist?
Jack smith says: No
CCA.C18.CORE.03.991 Radios in: Detaining Anti citizen.










Character backstory (10 lines at least detailing you character's background. Events, job, family etc should reflect your skills): Jamison mark smith grew
up in the city of Chicago, in a 2 Bedroom 1 bath apartment. His mother and father broke up when Jamison was just five years old. Jamison mom wasn't
around that much. she had to work 2 jobs just to keep up with the rent.
she worked as a bartender at a local bar just 2 blocks down from his house she also worked as a meter maid for the city of Chicago, so while Jamison's
mother was out working he use to find small jobs around the city to contribute to the rent. Jamison worked as a bus boy at a diner for 5 years and as a mechanic for 2. when Jamison was around 20 years old his mother got diagnosed with terminal cancer, she live 3 long happy years until March 4 ,2011 around 12:30 am when Jamison lifeless body in her bed, she was 59 when she passed.
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Name: Jamison mark smith
CID: 29833
Amount of loyalist points: None
Age: 17
Country of origin: United states
Hair colour: Brown
Eye colour: Brown

Specific skills and specialist, such as medical knowlege, knowlege of technology etc?: I have Knowledge in technology .


Have you had any previous affiliations with the CCA of the city or the UU as a whole?: No


Have you had any previous infactions from the CCA or the UU as a whole?: No I have not


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Last edited by DIABLO258 on Mon Jan 07, 2013 8:35 pm; edited 6 times in total
DIABLO258
Owner



Posts: 401
Join date: 2012-07-21
Age: 16
Location: Minnesota

mbazid - ACCEPTED

It seems mahunik passed over this one. This was long over due for such a flawless app.

avpralienwarrior - DENIED

The rp examples were a skeleton with no meat. I know what it kinda looked like, but their was no details beyond the actions

The backstory was good up untill you said you joined Russian Police. You can be apart of any armed force when the 7 hour war hit to have survived.

Jamiefoxx121 - DENIED

The rp examples also had no detail and I was on the border with them. What put me over was when you asked something you would do in looc in IC. You wouldn't ask them IC if they are going to resist.

The backstory was fine but was never finished. You never talked about what happened after the death of his mom, leading up to the 7 hour war, or how he got into city 18.

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Steam name:KeviQc2
Steam ID:STEAM_0: 1:43680699
Age:16
How long have you been roleplaying?: 4 days 7 hours in another server, but it closed.
How long have you been playing with The Crew?: Over 9 hours!
How long have you played on our server, in total?: 9 hours 24 minutes 39 secondes.
http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=125755884

20 lines of passive roleplay examples, using /it and /me. (Eg: /it The citizen runs through the checkpoint /me Gives chase)
/me takes out some water , drinking it, and placing it into the trash.
/me holds his phone against his ear as he waits for a civil protection unit to respond to him.
/me taps his stunstick against his combine coat as he waits for the citizens to get their rations and get out.
/me waits for the day to go by, as he guards the slums checkpoint A.
/me loads his clip as he leans against the nexus door to open it.
/me holds a water in his hand, shaking it for no reason.
/me waits until someone gives him direct orders.
/me stands against the tower, standing proud and tall, with his SMG.
/me holds his mask in one hand and his pistol in another.
/me starts to rub bio-gel onto his bullet wound.
/it He walks toward his group unit.
/it He waits for the group unit to say something to do.
/it The Group unit, and him, talk with each other, before getting into training.
/it He starts to stutter as a normal walks by, and then he makes a slight wave pose.
/it He walks against the wall, to turn the can of soda machine to find a hidden crowbar.
/it He waits until the boss calls him into his office.
/it He walks out of the nexus, with a pistol in one hand.
/it He waits until the recruit comes back into the nexus, as he didn't follow orders as told.
/it He starts to speak, with a citizen.
/it He takes out his mask to see a young male face.





20 lines of action roleplay examples, using /it and /me. (Eg: /it The citizen runs through the checkpoint /me Gives chase)

/me stands clear, holding his pistol in a one hand and a stunstick with a normal posture,he looks for criminal or rebels as he passes the in the slums checkpoint B.
/me holds a radio against he quickly yells "What is happening here!?" Putting citizens in the apartment.
/me cough up blood against a wall, then realize it was my blood.
/me take C4 he threw one where the rebel fired at him.
/me make the C4 explodes, then heard a yelling.
/me because of all these explosion and fires the building is going to fall.
/me takes my knife and broke a windows to get outside.
/me as another unit comes from the checkpoint B, taking me.
/me as I am dragged towards the checkpoint B, holding the pistol with one hand.
/me falls asleep the unit drags him pass the gate of the checkpoint B.
/it the unit lays the other unit (it was me) weapon on the ground.
/me wakes up at an hospital.
/me is being operated, but is stable as they remove the bullets.
/me wait to be fully healed, everyone leaves the room.
/me wake up 7 hours later and looking at my feet.
/me said thanks to a nurse and leave the place.
/me opens the door, and walk outside the hospital.
/me look at my stunstick to see if it stills work,I thought to patrols the city.
/me looks around, checking for bad citizens.
/me sees a man running, which I was running to.
/me yells "Wall!"
/it the man followed my instruction to face the wall.
/me tie the man.
/it The man doesn't want to resist against me.
/me ties him, checking for items of violation to the code of the citizen.
/me finds nothing but a new suitcase, and a can of soda.
/me attempts to beat him unconsisous.
.// me ask if the man [resist].
/it The man doesn't resist.
/it The man falls over, then I grabbed him.
/me takes the man, taking him towards the nexus.
/me enters into the nexus and the jail center, he tosses the man in.
/me says "Apply!"
/it The man says "Ostavio Lopichio."
/me Says "CID!"
/it The man says "89427."
/me checks my datapad, applying the points of running against his loyalty to the UU status

Character backstory (10 lines at least detailing you character's background. Events, job, family etc and should reflect your skills):
In his childhood, his parents died because they were in the combine army and it was a war between the
Combines and the Resistance, When they were missing, he knew that is life won't be easy.
At 18 years old he found a job, it was to be mercenairy.
He did killed a lot of people, but he only cares about living.
He did that job for two years, then he stopped, when someone asked him:'' why? ''
He didn't answered. Because he didn't wanted his friend to know.
But he knew that won't be a good idea to say his job
One years later, he was forced to go in a city, which he still live in...
Now Kevin Stevie only goal, is to join the CP not to kill rebels, but to make the city a respectful and peaceful place.
When he just applied to be a Combine, he stills didn't received an answer...

---IC Information---
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Name:Kevin Stevie
CID:74284
Amount of loyalist points:4
Age:21
Country of origin:Canada
Hair colour:Black
Eye colour:Brown

Specific skills and specialist, such as medical knowlege, knowlege of technology etc?:
Kevin Stevie is a great fighter, but he still wait the moment to prove himself as a great fighter...

Have you had any previous affiliations with the CCA of the city or the UU as a whole?:No I never did.


Have you had any previous infactions from the CCA or the UU as a whole?:
Nope

Just to say: I made a story with my 20 lines of action.

Steam name: Mandrak95
Steam ID: Darkpossum95
Age:13
How long have you been roleplaying?: I started Clockwork HL2 about a month ago but I have done other roleplays before for a few years.
How long have you been playing with The Crew?: About a day
How long have you played on our server, in total?: You must have played here for at least 6 hours. (Don't know how to do this? Click here!)
About 6 hours


20 lines of passive roleplay examples, using /it and /me. (Eg: /it The citizen runs through the checkpoint /me Gives chase)
/me sits down in the tattered chair
/me calls for backup
/me looks at the body inquisitively
/me stares blankly through the window
/me looks up at the stars
/me looks down at the blood on the floor
/me looks up at the bright blue sky
20 lines of action roleplay examples, using /it and /me. (Eg: /it The citizen runs through the checkpoint /me Gives chase)
/it The citizen attempts to hit the Combine /me holds his side in pain and then attempts to hit the citizen with a stun stick.
/it citizen steps towards the Combine /me Fires a warning shot
/it the citizen continues to walk towards the combine /me attempts to strike the citizen with his stun stick.
/it The citizen walks toward a checkpoint /me upholsters his stun stick and flicks it on " Stop citizen! " /it citizen continues to walk forward /me raises his stun stick into the air " Citizen final warning " /it citizen starts running /me attempts to pursue.
Character backstory (10 lines at least detailing you character's background. Events, job, family etc and should reflect your skills):
We should start with the year before he moved to this city, that is when most of his life started. When Daniel was back in Ireland he was quite the entrapranour, he did a little bit of everything. His father was a factory worker and his mother was a doctor, therefore he had lots of skills growing up. All his life he had hated the resistance, he was a complete loyalist that owed his whole life to the Combine. He had always hoped that he could one day join the Combine. Until one day his mother had gone to see hos father at work, that day the factory exploded nobody survived the blast. At this point he was more than old enough to take care of himself (41), But he dint see much importunity in Ireland so he thought of moving to America where he could join the Combine, and when he says he is going to do something he does it. So his friend knew somebody that could get him their, but the problem was it would cost him everything he had. He would be completing his largest goal by going to America and joining the Combine, but he would lose everything. It took him a whole year to save up enough funds for this flight, and after this we would be in current time.

---IC Information---
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Name: Danial Conlon
CID:31326
Amount of loyalist points:0
Age:42
Country of origin:Ireland
Hair colour: Blond
Eye colour: Gray

Specific skills and specialist, such as medical knowlege, knowlege of technology etc?:
He knows the basics of operating machinery and Medicine also he has basic knowledge of how to handle small arms weapons.

Have you had any previous affiliations with the CCA of the city or the UU as a whole?: No.


Have you had any previous infactions from the CCA or the UU as a whole?:No.

Sorry I could not come up with 20 lines of role play examples, I just couldn't think of any I hope that the ones that I put their are good enough.

COPY AND PASTE ^

Steam name: Jamiefoxx121
Steam ID: 0:1:26761500
Age: 17
How long have you been roleplaying?: 6 years
How long have you been playing with The Crew?:http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=124864644
How long have you played on our server, in total?: You must have played here for at least 6 hours. (Don't know how to do this? Click here!)


20 lines of passive roleplay examples, using /it and /me. (Eg: /it The citizen runs through the checkpoint /me Gives chase)
/me CCA.C18.Nova.9090 Walks out of the Nexus and starts his patrol.
/it group of citizen are standing in the middle of the road.
CCA.C18.Nova.9090 says: Citizens isolate.
/it One of the citizens turns to him
Jim smith says: Why?
/me CCA.C18.Nova.9090 unholsters stunstick and flicks it on
CCA.C18.NOVA.9090 says: because you are loitering, Now Move!
/it the citizen’s scatter and go about there business .
/me CCA.C18.Nova.9090 holster stunstick and goes back on patrol.
/it Citizen runs out of the apartments infront of him.
CCA.C18.Nova.9090 Yells: Citizen!,Hold it right there!
/me CCA.C18.Nova.9090 starts to approach the citizen.
/it Citizen points to himself.
jamie jacoby Says: me sir?
CCA.C18.Nova.9090 says yes you, No running.
jamie jacoby says: wouldn’t happen again.
CCA.C18.Nova.9090 Says: Good, Now get out of here!
/it Citizen turns away from him and walks away.
CCA.C18.Nova.9090 Radios in Returning to Hardpoint!
Dispatch says: Copy that Nova.
/me CCA.C18.Nova.9090 Walks to Hardpoint and starts to guards it.
/it A female Citizen approaches the hardpoint
CCA.C18.Nova.9090 Yells: Move back right now!
Sara jones Says: may i pass through this hardpoint
CCA.C18.Nova.9090 Says: Negative now move along.
/it female citizen walks away.




20 lines of action roleplay examples, using /it and /me. (Eg: /it THe citizen runs through the checkpoint /me Gives chase)
/me CCA.C18.Nova.9090 Patrols the streets.
/it Man Screams near the Apartments.
Bill Smith Screams: Somebody help!
/me CCA.C18.Nova.9090 Runs towards the sound of the screams.
/it citizen pointing a gun at bill smith
Sean grant Says: Shut Up!
Bill smith Says Pleases i will do anything.
Sean grant Says: Drop your money now.
/me CCA.C18.Nova.9090 See’s Sean grant.
CCA.C18.C18.Nova.9090 Yells: Citizen!, Hold it right there!
/it Sean grant turns towards the CCA
/me CCA.C18.Nova.9090 unholsters his gun and starts to approaches the Citizen.
CCA.C18.Nova.9090 Says: Drop your weapon .
/it Sean Grant Drops his weapon.
CCA.C18.Nova.9090: Says: Now, Face the wall
/me CCA.C18.Nova.9090 Walks closer to the Citizen
CCA.C18.Nova.9090 Radios in: Ive got a citizen here that tryed to assult Another citizen Bringing him in for questioning.
Dispatch Says: copy that Nova
/me CCA.C18.Nova.9090 Attempts to tie the citizens hand.
looc. Resist?
Sean grant says: No Sir.
/me CCA.C18.Nova.9090 Bring the citizen in for questioning





Character backstory (10 lines at least detailing you character's background. Events, job, family etc and should reflect your skills): 35 years before the 7 hour war james smark grew up in a 2 bedroom apartment in the city of chicago. When james was only 2 years old his parents got a divorce. so now with only one source of income james mother has to work 2 jobs to keep up with the rent. James mother worked as a bartender at a bar just down the block. she also worked as a security guard, when james turned twelve she use to bring him to work with her.
James loved being with his mother they use to do everything together like go to the park and play a game of Frisbee or walk the banks of lake superior for hours. james would do anything for her so when james turned eighteen he got a job as security at the same place his mother. james worked as security there for 3 years until he had to quit to take care of his align mother. 2 years ago James mother got diagnosed with stage 4 lung cancer the doctor gave her 5 months to live. 5 moths later on a warm wednesday afternoon james mother lost the battle with cancer, she was 45 years old. james was devastated when his mother passed away he didn't he could live on without his mother by his side. five months after the death of james mother james started to drink and smoke he started to get in alot of fights. he thought the only way out of this hell was a bullet to the head. until something changed his life forever when james wet the love of his life anna. Anna and james meet at one of james local bar just down the street of james apartment. they talked had a few drinks she gave james her phone number and left. after that one night james and Anna started to meet more frequently going out to a movie and dinner. they have dating for 2 years James was now sober for 3 months now he started working as a police officer for the city of chicago. everything was was looking up for james until one day fateful day that would change james life forever. it was a slow thursday afternoon james was on his usually rout as alway until he got a call from dispatch saying a female was pushed on the tracks and got killed.james rushed over to the scene and when he got there his heart sunk, laying infront of james eyes was the lifeless corps of his girlfriend. james couldn’t believe he didn't want to believe it. he didn’t think anything could get any worse but it did i got much worse when the combine attacked. when the invasion started it only lasted for 7 hours, the humans didn’t have much of a chance winning. james was one of the lucky one’s his life was spared instead of killing him they enslaved him. they took all of his personal belongings and issued him a blue jump suit and a I.D card.

---IC Information---
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Name: James smark
CID: 29833
Amount of loyalist points: 0
Age: 26
Country of origin: unitead states
Hair colour: Brown
Eye colour: Brown

Specific skills and specialist, such as medical knowlege, knowlege of technology etc?: Special skills are good with weapons


Have you had any previous affiliations with the CCA of the city or the UU as a whole?: no


Have you had any previous infactions from the CCA or the UU as a whole?: no

---OOC Information---
_______________________________________________________


Steam name:POTATO JUICE
Steam ID:STEAM_0:1:18971076 1
Age:15
How long have you been roleplaying?:a good 500 hours
How long have you been playing with The Crew?: a few days
How long have you played on our server, in total?: 6 hours


20 lines of passive roleplay examples, using /it and /me.
/me Walks out of the Nexus, going onto her patrol.
/it A group of citizens are talking quietly, and nervously, at the side of the plaza.
/me looks around, noticing the citizens, she puts her hand on her belt, grabbing her stunstick.
/me jogs towards the group.
/y Citizens, Isolate!
/it The group spreads out, looking back at me, ever so often.
/it A few minutes pass, only to regroup around twenty feet away, taking their gaze off of the CP now.
/radios "<::We have possible anti-citizens, they look very nervous, over"
/me jogs towards them, taking out her shock baton, or stun stick, and flicks it on.
/y Citizens!
/y Last warning!
/y Isolate!
/it The citizens disprese, looking at the CP, then turning away.
/radio "<:: Situation under control, resuming patrol."
/me I keep on walking, looking for any more malignants.
/it A citizen turns the corner, and sprints to the apartment building.
/me I notice him, and unholster my stunstick, clicking it on.
/y Citizen!
/y Halt!
John Slatter says, "S-Sorry officer, it wont happen again."
/me puts her stunstick back in her holster, returning on her patrol
/me she mumbles "<:: Why are there so many citizens that don't know the laws..."

20 lines of action roleplay examples, using /it and /me.

/me Walks out of the Nexus, noticing a citizen brandishing a knife.
/me Unholsters her stunstick, flicking it on, sprinting towards the citizen.
/it unpon seeing the officer running towards him, he sprints in the opposite direction.
/radios "<:: Anti-citizen wielding a knife running towards the train station, requesting back-up."
/it A voice responds on the radio, "Affirmative, going to cut him off near the train station."
/me Continues to sprint towards him, gaining on him.
/it Two more CPs turn the corner in front of him, wielding pistols.
/me I keep on chasing him, and when she reaches him she attempts to smash him in the side of the head with her stunstick.
/it He tries to duck, but takes the blow, falling to the ground, holding his head.
/me I continue to hit him into unconsciousness.
/radio "<:: Citizen apprehended, bringing him to the Nexus."
/it Her officer responds, "<:: Roger that, bring him to cell one, we'll judge his punishment at the Nexus."
/me Picks up the man with a grunt, throwing him over her shoulder.
/me then picks up his knife with a free hand.
/me She starts towards the Nexus.
/it Many citizen look at her, then quickly look away.
/me upon arrival, she puts the knife on a table, and throws the man in a cell.
/radio "<:: Citizen is in a cell, awaiting further orders."
/it the radio comes to life, "<:: Integrate him, find out where he obtained the knife."
/radio "<:: Roger that." She waits for him to wake up, and does what her officer told her to do.
Character backstory (10 lines at least detailing you character's background. Events, job, family etc and should reflect your skills): She was born in 1979, and lived in downtown Chicago. Both of her parents worked high-paying jobs. She was also an only child. She lived her life fascinated with being a doctor. She took small courses that were available in her high school and such. When she turned 18, in 1997, she went to the college of Madison in Wisconsin. She took 4 years for her bachelor. And on her fourth year of medical school, the combine invaded. In the first hour it was a blur. When she first saw the combine, she immediately fled to Chicago. She heard explosions and gunshots all night When she arrived there a few hours later, she saw the 'Combine' setting up a full blown city. She wondered in, confused, they didn't attack her. When she went to her apartment, she couldn't believe what happened. She didn't know the whereabouts of her parents from that day forward. Then a month has passed, and she has accepted the Combine occupation, in fact, she welcomed it. Then another month has passed, and she moved to city 18 looking for work. The Combine had offered people work for food, and that's all that mattered, and there was quite a bit of work. She looked at becoming a CP, a medic even. She heard of the terrible stories of memory wipes, replacing memories, painful augmentations, she didn't believe them, and continued.
(I know it's a little shitty, but I'm not that good at back stories...)

---IC Information---
____________________________________________

Name:Eve Goodman
CID:86045
Amount of loyalist points:0
Age:
Country of origin:New England
Hair colour:Dark Brown
Eye colour:Green

Specific skills and specialist, such as medical knowlege, knowlege of technology etc?:She had some of a college education with being a doctor.

Have you had any previous affiliations with the CCA of the city or the UU as a whole?: no


Have you had any previous infactions from the CCA or the UU as a whole?:no

Steam name: darkpossum95
Steam ID: Steam_0:1:60074171
Age: 13
How long have you been roleplaying?: I have role-played for a few years now.
How long have you been playing with The Crew?: About a week
How long have you played on our server, in total?: You must have played here for at least 6 hours. (Don't know how to do this? Click here!)
15 Hours


20 lines of passive role-play examples, using /it and /me. (Eg: /it The citizen runs through the checkpoint /me Gives chase)
/it A citizen buys a can of water as I walk by him.
/me continues walking.
/it The citizen throws the can of water at me, and runs off.
/me I turn around and give chase radioing in to tell a unit to block the slums entrance so the citizen cannot escape.
/it The citizen runs into C.A.H. apartments.
/me I run in behind him, and activate the lock on the door so he is trapped.
/it The citizen hides in the first room on the third floor.
/me I check all the open rooms and knock on the owned doors to check the rooms.
/it The citizen hides in the bathroom of the room.
/me I get to the first room on the third floor and check the room since the door is open.
/it The citizen continues to hide in the bathroom.
/me I open the door and find him. I tell him to get on the wall.
/it The citizen gets on the wall.
/me I attempt to tie his hands.
/it He does not resist.
/me I tell him to apply.
/it He says his name is John Stover, CID 67395
/me I pull out my stun stick, turn it on ( A few sparks fly off of it as I turn it on) and set it to high.
/it The citizen clutches his teeth.
/me I beat him till he is unconscious, and put him in detainment for one cycle.
/me I then write a report on the citizen and turn it in.
20 lines of action role-play examples, using /it and /me. (E.g.: /it the citizen runs through the checkpoint /me Gives chase)
/it A notorious anti citizen run out in front of me, but is unarmed.
/me I radio in to the other units of the spotting.
/radio The other units radio back and tell me they are setting up a trap, try to flush the anti-citizen this way.
/me Runs after the anti-citizen.
/it The citizen runs to the catwalks and climbs down the ladder.
/me I quickly climb down the ladder, I then pull out my pistol and fire a couple of shots at the ground near the anti-citizen to keep them running.
/it the anti-citizen runs into an alleyway and turns the corner.
/me I turn the corner realizing we are getting close to the ambush point.
/it The citizen continues to make a run for the warehouse in the distance.
/me I radio in and tell them the citizen is getting close to the warehouse.
/radios they radio back and tell me they are ready.
/it the anti-citizen pushes the button for the garage door to the warehouse to open.
/me I get behind cover to avoid any stray bullets.
/it the garage door opens only for three OTA soldiers to be standing there waiting.
/me I duck my head down.
/it The OTA soldier's AR2s open fire on the citizen in a barrage of bullets.
/me when the shooting is over I get up and walk towards the dead anti citizen.
/it the dead anti citizen lies there with multiple bullet holes in the chest and head.
/me We then head back to the Nexus.
Character backstory (10 lines at least detailing you character's background. Events, job, family etc. and should reflect your skills)
Josh Screaton used to live in Africa as a pharmacist but he never got very much business, he always thought things would be better in a different city because here the rebels where always fighting with the civil protection, and whenever he could he would try and help the civil protection and the Combine, because he was very loyal. But usually they would just shove him aside because he was just a civilian and there was nothing he could do. So he started going to the gym doing acrobatic and cardio workouts so that maybe he could be noticed by the Combine for once. But then he thought that maybe instead of just being a loyalist he could become one of the Civil Protection and then his life would have purpose. But then one day he got transferred to city 18 and he noticed that they might need more Civil Protection and for him this was like a dream come true.
Sorry I’m not a very good at writing stories.

---IC Information---
____________________________________________

Name: Josh Screaton
CID: 57016
Amount of loyalist points: 0
Age: 35
Country of origin: Africa
Hair colour: Black
Eye colour: Brown

Specific skills and specialist, such as medical knowlege, knowlege of technology etc?: He has basic knowledge of medicine and technology but nothing special

Have you had any previous affiliations with the CCA of the city or the UU as a whole?:
No


Have you had any previous infractions from the CCA or the UU as a whole?
No


COPY AND PASTE ^

Don't expect a lot of comments because of number of apps...

KeviQc2 - DENIED

God rp examples, very little knowledge on HL2 Canon. Redo your whole backstory.

Mandrak95 - DENIED

Read the instructions, you didn't follow pretty much any of them.

Jamiefoxx121 - DENIED

You still didn't remove the part in your action rp where Sean responds IC to OOC dialogue. Normally I let one thing slide, but not if its the same mistake as before.

POTATO JUICE - DENIED

Your rp was great but you butchered the backstory. The combine invasion happened in 200X, and they killed anyone under 18, meaning at maximum your character was born in 1991. Read up on HL2 Canon and reapply.

darkpossum95 - DENIED

Your action RP was a line to short (a line of rp is a /me if it takes up two lines, its still one line of rp). Also your backstory was bad. It only included everything after the invasion happen. In fact that's the only part that is optional. Your backstory has to include your childhood through the invasion at least.

If DENIED reapply in two days...
If accepted ask a- wow, no one was accepted, bummer...

POTATO JUICE - DENIED

You didn't wait two days. As punishment you cannot reapply for four days

Steam name: Jamiefoxx121
Steam ID: 0:1:26761500
Age: 17
How long have you been roleplaying?: 6 years
How long have you been playing with The Crew?:http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=124864644
How long have you played on our server, in total?: You must have played here for at least 6 hours. (Don't know how to do this? Click here!)


20 lines of passive roleplay examples, using /it and /me. (Eg: /it The citizen runs through the checkpoint /me Gives chase)
/me CCA.C18.Nova.9090 Walks out of the Nexus and starts his patrol.
/it group of citizen are standing in the middle of the road.
CCA.C18.Nova.9090 says: Citizens isolate.
/it One of the citizens turns to him
Jim smith says: Why?
/me CCA.C18.Nova.9090 unholsters stunstick and flicks it on
CCA.C18.NOVA.9090 says: because you are loitering, Now Move!
/it the citizen’s scatter and go about there business .
/me CCA.C18.Nova.9090 holster stunstick and goes back on patrol.
/it Citizen runs out of the apartments infront of him.
CCA.C18.Nova.9090 Yells: Citizen!,Hold it right there!
/me CCA.C18.Nova.9090 starts to approach the citizen.
/it Citizen points to himself.
jamie jacoby Says: me sir?
CCA.C18.Nova.9090 says yes you, No running.
jamie jacoby says: wouldn’t happen again.
CCA.C18.Nova.9090 Says: Good, Now get out of here!
/it Citizen turns away from him and walks away.
CCA.C18.Nova.9090 Radios in Returning to Hardpoint!
Dispatch says: Copy that Nova.
/me CCA.C18.Nova.9090 Walks to Hardpoint and starts to guards it.
/it A female Citizen approaches the hardpoint
CCA.C18.Nova.9090 Yells: Move back right now!
Sara jones Says: may i pass through this hardpoint
CCA.C18.Nova.9090 Says: Negative now move along.
/it female citizen walks away.




20 lines of action roleplay examples, using /it and /me. (Eg: /it THe citizen runs through the checkpoint /me Gives chase)
/me CCA.C18.Nova.9090 Patrols the streets.
/it Man Screams near the Apartments.
Bill Smith Screams: Somebody help!
/me CCA.C18.Nova.9090 Runs towards the sound of the screams.
/it citizen pointing a gun at bill smith
Sean grant Says: Shut Up!
Bill smith Says Pleases i will do anything.
Sean grant Says: Drop your money now.
/me CCA.C18.Nova.9090 See’s Sean grant.
CCA.C18.C18.Nova.9090 Yells: Citizen!, Hold it right there!
/it Sean grant turns towards the CCA
/me CCA.C18.Nova.9090 unholsters his gun and starts o: copy that Nova
/me CCA.C18.Nova.9090 Ties citizens hands.
CCA.C18.Nova.9090 Says: Citizen step back from the wall!
it/ citizen takes to steps back from the wall
/me CCA.C18.Nova.9090 Bring the citizen in for questioning
/It Sean grant starts to walk twords the nexus
/Me unholsters stunstick
CCA.C18.Nova.9090 Says: Move it!





Character backstory (10 lines at least detailing you character's background. Events, job, family etc and should reflect your skills): 35 years before the 7 hour war james smark grew up in a 2 bedroom apartment in the city of chicago. When james was only 2 years old his parents got a divorce. so now with only one source of income james mother has to work 2 jobs to keep up with the rent. James mother worked as a bartender at a bar just down the block. she also worked as a security guard, when james turned twelve she use to bring him to work with her.
James loved being with his mother they use to do everything together like go to the park and play a game of Frisbee or walk the banks of lake superior for hours. james would do anything for her so when james turned eighteen he got a job as security at the same place his mother. james worked as security there for 3 years until he had to quit to take care of his align mother. 2 years ago James mother got diagnosed with stage 4 lung cancer the doctor gave her 5 months to live. 5 moths later on a warm wednesday afternoon james mother lost the battle with cancer, she was 45 years old. james was devastated when his mother passed away he didn't he could live on without his mother by his side. five months after the death of james mother james started to drink and smoke he started to get in alot of fights. he thought the only way out of this hell was a bullet to the head. until something changed his life forever when james wet the love of his life anna. Anna and james meet at one of james local bar just down the street of james apartment. they talked had a few drinks she gave james her phone number and left. after that one night james and Anna started to meet more frequently going out to a movie and dinner. they have dating for 2 years James was now sober for 3 months now he started working as a police officer for the city of chicago. everything was was looking up for james until one day fateful day that would change james life forever. it was a slow thursday afternoon james was on his usually rout as alway until he got a call from dispatch saying a female was pushed on the tracks and got killed.james rushed over to the scene and when he got there his heart sunk, laying infront of james eyes was the lifeless corps of his girlfriend. james couldn’t believe he didn't want to believe it. he didn’t think anything could get any worse but it did i got much worse when the combine attacked. when the invasion started it only lasted for 7 hours, the humans didn’t have much of a chance winning. james was one of the lucky one’s his life was spared instead of killing him they enslaved him. they took all of his personal belongings and issued him a blue jump suit and a I.D card.

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Name: James smark
CID: 29833
Amount of loyalist points: 0
Age: 26
Country of origin: unitead states
Hair colour: Brown
Eye colour: Brown

Specific skills and specialist, such as medical knowlege, knowlege of technology etc?: Special skills are good with weapons


Have you had any previous affiliations with the CCA of the city or the UU as a whole?: no


Have you had any previous infactions from the CCA or the UU as a whole?: no

I thought my action and my backstory was pretty vivied and in detail

Thegatekeeper wrote:I thought my action and my backstory was pretty vivied and in detail

and in the last post you denied me you said I only had one mistake in my application witch I corrected but. In The last post you you wrote for my older application you never informed me of all theses grammer mistakes.

Thegatekeeper wrote:

Thegatekeeper wrote:I thought my action and my backstory was pretty vivied and in detail

and in the last post you denied me you said I only had one mistake in my application witch I corrected but. In The last post you you wrote for my older application you never informed me of all theses grammer mistakes.

Fixed =

Thegatekeeper wrote:

Thegatekeeper wrote:I thought my action and my backstory was pretty vivid* in detail

,in the last post you denied me. You* said I only had one mistake in my application which* I corrected.* In the last post *you wrote for my older application you never informed me of all these* grammar* mistakes.

Thegatekeeper wrote:

Thegatekeeper wrote:I thought my action and my backstory was pretty vivied and in detail

and in the last post you denied me you said I only had one mistake in my application witch I corrected but. In The last post you you wrote for my older application you never informed me of all theses grammer mistakes.

Yes but your action rp was different then your application before and still one line too short.

This Application is supposed to showcase your rping skills as a potential unit. I don't ask for accuracy as how your unit would act, but in-depth actions that show you can be a very strong rper. If your not even putting in the time to make it something that your proud of then don't bother applying. What I see when i read your app is someone who just wants to be CCA to have power and a gun, not to rp.

However, if that is honestly your best rp attempt, then go and practice. Not everyone is at a level to CCA rp. But practice makes perfect.

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Steam name:POTATO JUICE
Steam ID:STEAM_0:1:18971076 1
Age:15
How long have you been roleplaying?:a good 550 hours
How long have you been playing with The Crew?: a week
How long have you played on our server, in total?: 19 hours


20 lines of passive roleplay examples, using /it and /me.
/me Walks out of the Nexus, going onto her patrol.
/it A group of citizens are talking quietly, and nervously, at the side of the plaza.
/me looks around, noticing the citizens, she puts her hand on her belt, grabbing her stunstick.
/me jogs towards the group.
/y Citizens, Isolate!
/it The group spreads out, looking back at me, ever so often.
/it A few minutes pass, only to regroup around twenty feet away, taking their gaze off of the CP now.
/radios "<::We have possible anti-citizens, they look very nervous, over"
/me jogs towards them, taking out her shock baton, or stun stick, and flicks it on.
/y Citizens!
/y Last warning!
/y Isolate!
/it The citizens disprese, looking at the CP, then turning away.
/radio "<:: Situation under control, resuming patrol."
/me I keep on walking, looking for any more malignants.
/it A citizen turns the corner, and sprints to the apartment building.
/me I notice him, and unholster my stunstick, clicking it on.
/y Citizen!
/y Halt!
John Slatter says, "S-Sorry officer, it wont happen again."
/me puts her stunstick back in her holster, returning on her patrol
/me she mumbles "<:: Why are there so many citizens that don't know the laws..."

20 lines of action roleplay examples, using /it and /me.

/me Walks out of the Nexus, noticing a citizen brandishing a knife.
/me Unholsters her stunstick, flicking it on, sprinting towards the citizen.
/it unpon seeing the officer running towards him, he sprints in the opposite direction.
/radios "<:: Anti-citizen wielding a knife running towards the train station, requesting back-up."
/it A voice responds on the radio, "Affirmative, going to cut him off near the train station."
/me Continues to sprint towards him, gaining on him.
/it Two more CPs turn the corner in front of him, wielding pistols.
/me I keep on chasing him, and when she reaches him she attempts to smash him in the side of the head with her stunstick.
/it He tries to duck, but takes the blow, falling to the ground, holding his head.
/me I continue to hit him into unconsciousness.
/radio "<:: Citizen apprehended, bringing him to the Nexus."
/it Her officer responds, "<:: Roger that, bring him to cell one, we'll judge his punishment at the Nexus."
/me Picks up the man with a grunt, throwing him over her shoulder.
/me then picks up his knife with a free hand.
/me She starts towards the Nexus.
/it Many citizen look at her, then quickly look away.
/me upon arrival, she puts the knife on a table, and throws the man in a cell.
/radio "<:: Citizen is in a cell, awaiting further orders."
/it the radio comes to life, "<:: Integrate him, find out where he obtained the knife."
/radio "<:: Roger that." She waits for him to wake up, and does what her officer told her to do.
Character backstory (10 lines at least detailing you character's background. Events, job, family etc and should reflect your skills): She was born in 1979, and lived in downtown Chicago. Both of her parents worked high-paying jobs. She was also an only child. She lived her life fascinated with being a doctor. She took small courses that were available in her high school and such. When she turned 18, in 1997, she went to the college of Madison in Wisconsin. She took 4 years for her bachelor. And on her fourth year of medical school, the combine invaded. In the first hour it was a blur. When she first saw the combine, she immediately fled to Chicago. She heard explosions and gunshots all night When she arrived there a few hours later, she saw the 'Combine' setting up a full blown city. She wondered in, confused, they didn't attack her. When she went to her apartment, she couldn't believe what happened. She didn't know the whereabouts of her parents from that day forward. Then a month has passed, and she has accepted the Combine occupation, in fact, she welcomed it. Then another month has passed, and she moved to city 18 looking for work. The Combine had offered people work for food, and that's all that mattered, and there was quite a bit of work. She looked at becoming a CP, a medic even. She heard of the terrible stories of memory wipes, replacing memories, painful augmentations, she didn't believe them, and continued.
(I know it's a little shitty, but I'm not that good at back stories...)

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Name:Eve Goodman
CID:86045
Amount of loyalist points:0
Age:
Country of origin:New England
Hair colour:Dark Brown
Eye colour:Green

Specific skills and specialist, such as medical knowlege, knowlege of technology etc?:She had some of a college education with being a doctor.

Have you had any previous affiliations with the CCA of the city or the UU as a whole?: no


Have you had any previous infactions from the CCA or the UU as a whole?:no

-----FIXED----- (Posted four days after, as said, it's 12:02, Thursday, my time.)

Team name: Jamiefoxx121
Steam ID: 0:1:26761500
Age: 17
How long have you been roleplaying?: 6 years
How long have you been playing with The Crew?:http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=124864644
How long have you played on our server, in total?: You must have played here for at least 6 hours. (Don't know how to do this? Click here!)


20 lines of passive roleplay examples, using /it and /me. (Eg: /it The citizen runs through the checkpoint /me Gives chase)
/Me CCA.C18.Nova.9090 Walks out of the Nexus and starts his patrol.
/it group of citizen are standing in the middle of the road.
CCA.C18.Nova.9090 says: Citizens isolate.
/It One of the citizens turns to him
Jim smith says: Why?
/Me CCA.C18.Nova.9090 unholsters stunstick and flicks it on
CCA.C18.NOVA.9090 says: because you are loitering, Now Move!
/It the citizen’s scatter and go about there business.
/Me CCA.C18.Nova.9090 holster stunstick and goes back on patrol.
/It Citizen runs out of the apartments in front of him.
CCA.C18.Nova.9090 Yells: Citizen!,Hold it right there!
/Me CCA.C18.Nova.9090 starts to approach the citizen.
/It Citizen points to himself.
Jamie Jacoby Says: me sir?
CCA.C18.Nova.9090 says yes you, No running.
Jamie Jacoby says: wouldn’t happen again.
CCA.C18.Nova.9090 Says: Good, Now get out of here!
/It Citizen turns away from him and walks away.
CCA.C18.Nova.9090 Radios in Returning to Hard-point!
Dispatch says: Copy that Nova.
/Me CCA.C18.Nova.9090 Walks to Hard-point and starts to guards it.
/It A female Citizen approaches the hard-point
CCA.C18.Nova.9090 Yells: Move back right now!
Sara Jones Says: may I pass through this hard-point
CCA.C18.Nova.9090 Says: Negative now move along.
/It female citizen walks away.




20 lines of action Roleplay examples, using /it and /me. (Eg: /it THe citizen runs through the checkpoint /me Gives chase)
/Me CCA.C18.Nova.9999 Checks gun belt and proceeds out of the nexus to start his patrol.
/ItCitizen stands suspiciously Near the nexus Hardpoint
/Me CCA.C18.Nova.9999 Stops in his tracks.
CCA.C18.Nova.9999 Yells: Citizen!, Move back Right now!
/It Looks at CCA.C18.Nova.9999 and moves a little bit closer to the Hard point.
CCA.C18.Nova.9999 Says: Alright if you want it that way, Fine.
/Me CCA.C18.Nova.9999 Unholster Stunstick and flicks it on then start to proceed towards the citizen
/It Citizen turns away from CCA.C18.Nova.9999 And starts to run.
CCA.C18.Nova.9999 Radios in: Citizen is Running, Starting Foot pursuit.
/Me CCA.C18.Nova.9999 Holsters Stunstick Starts to pursue The Citizen.
CCA.C18.Nova.9999 Yells: Citizen!, Stop!
/it Citizen Runs into Apartment complex.
CCA.C18.Nova.9999 Radios in: Citizen went into the Apartments, Going in there after Him, Requesting backup.
Dispatch Says; Copy That Nova, Backup is on its way.
CCA.C18.Nova.9999 Radios in : Copy that Dispatch.
/Me CCA.C18.Nova.9999 Enters The apartments with gun drown
/it Citizen Runs up the stares undetected by the Nova unit.
/Me CCA.C18.Nova.9999 Searches the lobby of the apartments complex Finds nothing there Then CCA.C18.Nova.9999 Hears footsteps on the second floor.
/it Other CCA units arrive on Scene.
CCA.C18.Nova.12121 Says: CCA.C18.Nova.12121 Reporting for duty.
/me CCA.C18.Nova.9999 Turns to the other unit.
CCA.C18.Nova.9999 says: Guard the door!
CCA.C18.Nova.12121 Says: Copy that!.
/it Citizen Starts to franticly bang on the doors
Jeff smith says: Pleases let me in.
/me CCA.C18.Nova.9999 Hears The frantic Yelling
CCA.C18.Nova.9999 Says: Suspect is on the second floor.
/it Citizen Runs to the back of the hall way.
/me CCA.C18.Nova.9999 Flicks off the safety on his pistol and start to ascend up the stairs to the second floor.
/it Citizen hears the CCA unit radio going off.
/me CCA.C18.Nova.9999 Walks in to the second floor hallway and sees the citizen.
/it The citizens heart starts to pound sweat pouring down his face.
CCA.C18.Nova.9999 Says: Citizen Face the wall Now!
Jeff smith Screams: your not taking me back to that goddame place again,You hear me
Never.
/Me CCA.C18.Nova.9999 starts to approach the Citizen.
CCA.C18.Nova.9999 Says: Citizen face the wall or i will you deadly force.
/It Citizen lunges for CCA.C18.Nova.9999 Gun.
/me CCA.C18.Nova.9999 squeeze the trigger and shoots the citizen.
/It Citizen Drops to the floor.
CCA.C18.Nova.9999 Radios in: Fatality on the second floor citizen was dangerous so i had to use lethal force.
Dispatch says: Copy that Nova.












Character backstory (10 lines at least detailing you character's background. Events, job, family etc and should reflect your skills): 35 years before the 7 hour war James smark grew up in a 2 bedroom apartment in the city of Chicago. When James was only 2 years old his parents got a divorce. So now with only one source of income James mother has to work 2 jobs to keep up with the rent. James mother worked as a bartender at a bar just down the block. She also worked as a security guard, when James turned twelve she use to bring him to work with her.
James loved being with his mother they use to do everything together like go to the park and play a game of Frisbee or walk the banks of lake superior for hours. James would do anything for her so when James turned eighteen he got a job as security at the same place his mother. James worked as security there for 3 years until he had to quit to take care of his align mother. 2 years ago James mother got diagnosed with stage 4 lung cancer the doctor gave her 5 months to live. 5 moths later on a warm Wednesday afternoon James mother lost the battle with cancer, she was 45 years old. James was devastated when his mother passed away he didn't he could live on without his mother by his side. five months after the death of James mother James started to drink and smoke he started to get in a lot of fights. he thought the only way out of this hell was a bullet to the head. until something changed his life forever when James wet the love of his life Anna. Anna and James meet at one of James local bar just down the street of James apartment. they talked had a few drinks she gave James her phone number and left. after that one night James and Anna started to meet more frequently going out to a movie and dinner. they have dating for 2 years James was now sober for 3 months now he started working as a police officer for the city of Chicago. everything was was looking up for James until one day fateful day that would change James life forever. it was a slow Thursday afternoon james was on his usually rout as alway until he got a call from dispatch saying a female was pushed on the tracks and got killed.james rushed over to the scene and when he got there his heart sunk, laying in front of james eyes was the lifeless corps of his girlfriend. james couldn’t believe he didn't want to believe it. he didn’t think anything could get any worse but it did i got much worse when the combine attacked. when the invasion started it only lasted for 7 hours, the humans didn’t have much of a chance winning. james was one of the lucky one’s his life was spared instead of killing him they enslaved him. they took all of his personal belongings and issued him a blue jump suit and a I.D card.

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Name: James smark
CID: 29833
Amount of loyalist points: 0
Age: 26
Country of origin: united states
Hair color: Brown
Eye color: Brown

Specific skills and specialist, such as medical knowledge, knowledge of technology etc?: Special skills are good with weapons


Have you had any previous affiliations with the CCA of the city or the UU as a whole?: no


Have you had any previous infactions from the CCA or the UU as a whole?: no

Steam name:Big Macintosh
Steam ID:STEAM_0:0:45464397
Age:14
How long have you been roleplaying?:One and a half years.
How long have you been playing with The Crew?:About three days now
How long have you played on our server, in total?: Well a little more than 72 hours


/me Sholves non compliant citizen back.
/it Citizen charges me and sholves me to the side i chase after him through the checkpoint
/me Attempts to tackle
/me Fails rolls acrost back quickly getting up and continuing to persuit the citizen
/it Citizen runs acrost catwalk i follow near
/it Citizen turns and slips over railing and is clinging to edge
/me Pulls up and imediatly pins on ground and requests CID and name
/me Pulls out data pad while pinning citizen down and adds 5 points for level 3 tresspassing
/me Ties citizen and knocks him out with a stun stick and drags his limp body to nexus and i detain him for 20 minutes then ask the SeC if i can release him or if he would like further punishment
/radio Uh we got a possible 404 here sir could you come down to nexus and clarify things with this citizen?
/it Nexus door slides open SeC walks through the door and it slams shut behind him
/it SeC walks over to citizen takes him into the interigation room and calls in a JUDGE unit for amputation
/it JUDGE unit straps citizen into chair and presses electrocution buttion i am then ordered to dump the body.



Character backstory (10 lines at least detailing you character's background. Events, job, family etc and should reflect your skills):I was an average joe working at the office you know making spread sheets and whatnot i had a lovley wife and a much loved son and i made quiet a bit of money intill the day the earth changed i heard gunshots outside of my office window i looked out to see mutliple S.W.A.T units firing at a robotic synth creature there where alien looking things coming out of them the office went on a lockdown but the door was destroyed by the synth in a matter of seconds everyone scream and scatterd i just stood and watched as i walked up the stairs i flung me to the side of the office the glass shattered and i flew through i screamed as i fell and i heard a SPLASH as i fell into a neighbor hood pools as i swam to the top i grabbed the ledge and pulled myself up i saw a synth leading groups of people i followed and i ended up in city 1 and i worked my way up to the current city my wife was either dead or somewhere else same with my son i'm assuming there dead because the comunity we lived in was destoyed bombed by the combine i don't blame them.

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Name:Gregory White
CID:75223
Amount of loyalist points:0 However i did jump infront of a inspecter and a crossbow bolt went through my leg they said if i hadn't jumped infront of him he would have been dead.
Age:21
Country of origin:Germany
Hair colour:Black
Eye colour:Blue

Specific skills and specialist, such as medical knowlege, knowlege of technology etc?:I got a degree in medical science in collage and i have a very light body frame and could easly persuit citizens on the run.


Have you had any previous affiliations with the CCA of the city or the UU as a whole?:Once i was requested to pack rations


Have you had any previous infactions from the CCA or the UU as a whole?:Not that i recall.

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Steam name:KeviQc2
Steam ID:STEAM_0: 1:43680699
Age:16
How long have you been roleplaying?: 4 days 7 hours in another server, but it closed.
How long have you been playing with The Crew?: Over 17 hours!
How long have you played on our server, in total?: 17 hours 41 minutes 12 secondes.
http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=127942774

20 lines of passive roleplay examples, using /it and /me. (Eg: /it The citizen runs through the checkpoint /me Gives chase):
/me takes out some water , drinking it, and placing it into the trash.
/me holds his phone against his ear as he waits for a civil protection unit to respond to him.
/me taps his stunstick against his combine coat as he waits for the citizens to get their rations and get out.
/me waits for the day to go by, as he guards the slums checkpoint A.
/me loads his clip as he leans against the nexus door to open it.
/me holds a water in his hand, shaking it for no reason.
/me waits until someone gives him direct orders.
/me stands against the tower, standing proud and tall, with his SMG.
/me holds his mask in one hand and his pistol in another.
/me starts to rub bio-gel onto his bullet wound.
/it He walks toward his group unit.
/it He waits for the group unit to say something to do.
/it The Group unit, and him, talk with each other, before getting into training.
/it He starts to stutter as a normal walks by, and then he makes a slight wave pose.
/it He walks against the wall, to turn the can of soda machine to find a hidden crowbar.
/it He waits until the boss calls him into his office.
/it He walks out of the nexus, with a pistol in one hand.
/it He waits until the recruit comes back into the nexus, as he didn't follow orders as told.
/it He starts to speak, with a citizen.
/it He takes out his mask to see a young male face.





20 lines of action roleplay examples, using /it and /me. (Eg: /it The citizen runs through the checkpoint /me Gives chase):

/me stands clear, holding his pistol in a one hand and a stunstick with a normal posture,he looks for criminal or rebels as he passes the in the slums checkpoint B.
/me holds a radio against he quickly yells "What is happening here!?" Putting citizens in the apartment.
/me cough up blood against a wall, then realize it was my blood.
/me take C4 he threw one where the rebel fired at him.
/me make the C4 explodes, then heard a yelling.
/me because of all these explosion and fires the building is going to fall.
/me takes my knife and broke a windows to get outside.
/me as another unit comes from the checkpoint B, taking me.
/me as I am dragged towards the checkpoint B, holding the pistol with one hand.
/me falls asleep the unit drags him pass the gate of the checkpoint B.
/it the unit lays the other unit (it was me) weapon on the ground.
/me wakes up at an hospital.
/me is being operated, but is stable as they remove the bullets.
/me wait to be fully healed, everyone leaves the room.
/me wake up 7 hours later and looking at my feet.
/me said thanks to a nurse and leave the place.
/me opens the door, and walk outside the hospital.
/me look at my stunstick to see if it stills work,I thought to patrols the city.
/me looks around, checking for bad citizens.
/me sees a man running, which I was running to.
/me yells "Wall!"
/it the man followed my instruction to face the wall.
/me tie the man.
/it The man doesn't want to resist against me.
/me ties him, checking for items of violation to the code of the citizen.
/me finds nothing but a new suitcase, and a can of soda.
/me attempts to beat him unconsisous.
.// me ask if the man [resist].
/it The man doesn't resist.
/it The man falls over, then I grabbed him.
/me takes the man, taking him towards the nexus.
/me enters into the nexus and the jail center, he tosses the man in.
/me says "Apply!"
/it The man says "Ostavio Lopichio."
/me Says "CID!"
/it The man says "89427."
/me checks my datapad, applying the points of running against his loyalty to the UU status

Character backstory (10 lines at least detailing you character's background. Events, job, family etc and should reflect your skills):
Once upon a time, a young male named Steeven Drikom lost his parents in a plane crash when they went to city 17. He first thought that the plane master was drunk, but it was not real, the plane crashed because rebels (resistance peoples) shot with a RPG (rocket launcher). Then he start to buy weapons, not only to defend himself, but to kill rebels if he has luck. He trained himself into a old abandoned secret lab he found, he became a
killing machine. After 7 years of preparing to being interviewed by a combine, he tooks the plane and he was going to:''city 18''.The combines were being attacked by zombies, when a unit died he tooks a gun (it was a SMG) and helped as long as there was no more zombies. After a week, Steeven Drikom bought a room in the:''45th Apartment'', he also found a job, it was to take the empty ''can of soda'' in the trash, it wasn't a really good job, but he liked it. Since he was waiting for the CP application. Now Steeven Drikom only goal, is to join the CP not to kill rebels or the make people afraid of him, but to make the city a respectful, peaceful, good place to live and he wants the citizens to be respectful too.

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Name:Steeven Drikom
CID:70808
Amount of loyalist points:10
Age:21
Country of origin:Canada
Hair colour:Black
Eye colour:Brown

Specific skills and specialist, such as medical knowlege, knowlege of technology etc?:
Steeven Drikom is a great fighter, but he still wait the moment to prove himself as a great fighter...

Have you had any previous affiliations with the CCA of the city or the UU as a whole?:No I never did.


Have you had any previous infactions from the CCA or the UU as a whole?:
Nope

Just to say: I made a story with my 20 lines of action.

Steam name:Frankie Astro
Steam ID: 34496750
Age: 25
How long have you been roleplaying?: 4 Years, On DarkRP,Hl2Rp
How long have you been playing with The Crew?: 2 Days

20 lines of passive roleplay examples, using /it and /me. (Eg: /it The citizen runs through the checkpoint /me Gives chase)

/me a CCA unit casually patrols the streets in a quiet time during the morning
/it the Unit hears some one yelling his number
/me turns around to see a fellow 04 walking up behind him
04 221- Hey, have you seen anything yet?
/me waves his right hand at waist level with a slight shrug
Me- No its been very quiet all day.
/it the other 04 places his hand on his mask wiping away some dirt as he speaks.
04 221- Its strange, we have had two major conflicts in the last 3 days but all is quiet.
/me rolls his left shoulder trying to feel less worried
Me- All we can do is continue on. The OTA have been busy in the slums but..
/it the 04 interrupts
04 221- Nothing is happening here I know, I know.
/me shakes his head then looks at his standard issue datapad for the time
Me - looks like rations will be held soon, about an hour. We should be ready to report to the terminal.
/it the 04 shrugs
04 221- its always the same, the Citizens line up, they get food, they leave.
/me chuckles lightly
Me - What did you expect with this job? Everyone is starving, they have little fight in them. Even when they do its over quickly.
/it the 04 nods his agreement
04 221- Yea, its probably for the best, I don't know if I could do what I have seen the 02's do. They just.. Beat them.
/me looks into the units mask for a moment, silence settling in.
Me - I uh.. I.. Yea, I get what you mean, some of those beatings were brutal.


20 lines of action roleplay examples, using /it and /me. (Eg: /it THe citizen runs through the checkpoint /me Gives chase)

/me takes cover behind a low wall.
/it 9mm rounds fly over the units head
/me grips his 9mm Pistol in both hand feeling his knees weaken from fear
Me - Crap, crap, Crap!
/it a unit steps up to the side of the cowering unit with a SMG in hand. The unit fires over the wall while yelling.
Unit- GET UP! FIRE YOUR WEAPON!
/me I notice the Unit is wearing a OfC armband but cannot tell his division
/me nods vigorously and forces himself to a low crouch
/it both units open fire on the enemy pouring rounds on them.
/me watch's as the OfC takes cover to reload 9mm rounds bouncing of the ground around his feet
Me- S-Sir! What do we do?
/it the OfC finish's reloading his weapon pulling back the receiver placing a round in the chamber.
OfC - Unit its important you stay calm, wait for the lull in the shooting when they reload and fire back. Reinforcements are on the way.
/me slightly shaking, nods to the OfC
OfC - Theres your chance! Pour it on them!
/me looks over the low wall placing my pistol on the edge and squeeze the trigger multiple times until I hear a audible "Click" and the slide jams back.
Me- RELOADING!
/it the OfC nods to the unit as he fires bursts at the enemy in cover.
/me ejects the spent mag, then slams in a full mag, pulling back the receiver.
/it both units fire during the lull in the fighting until mags are expended.
Me- SIR! SIR! Im OUT!
/it the OfC ignores the unit firing his last few bursts as his SMG clicks loudly.
/it as silence set over the shoot out as the rebels learn the Units are no longer engaging.
Me- What do we do now sir?
/it the OfC looks over
OfC- Pray.
/it the rebels move out of cover slowly testing the units to see if they fire, slowly they move towards their position.
/me shakes while hiding behind his cover thinking that its over, closes his eyes tightly
/it Rifle fire is heard behind the units position
/me opens his eyes to check the sounds, scared out of his wits.
/it a squad of OTA round the corner smoothly entering a firing line, they begin to fire their AR2's felling the Rebels in the streets
Sql - Cleaned. Move it!
OTA 1- Copy.
/it the OTA move forward down the street and enter the building the rebels were in, more shots can be heard.
/me places his hands on the top of the low wall relieved as he watch's the OTA complete their duties.
/it the OfC already on his feet places a hand on the 04's shoulder
OfC- even though you were scared, you did well for a 04.
/me smiles inside his mask
Me- T-Thank you S-Sir!
OfC- See me at the Nexus later for a debrief
/me stands
Me- Yes sir!


Character backstory (10 lines at least detailing you character's background. Events, job, family etc and should reflect your skills): I was a great person and always kind to people. I got told that alot by people that I Infact Hated. I was always trying to gain the respect I needed to get the attention I needed. I was just a local buisness man trying to sell people houses In Canada, Miht seem like a bumer job but it was great! Meeting alot of new people gets knowledge about different types of People, wither Greedy,Selfish,Kind,Etc... I always wanted to be the one in control. I would make everything I say into demanding words.

I did eventullay Quit the job after a while. I did not accomplish the needs of respect Infact, I think I lost some. Even though I was treated well, I wasn't Treated Well Enough. 2015 Is when The Civil Protection Went to Canada. I was not scared of them since I though I was "always" safe in Canada, They had already took over everything. It was May 12th 2015 When they breached our home and took my familt members and friends and shot them, my brother was giving them all the repect they wanted. They took them away, I don't know if they are dead or alive yet to this current time, but what I do know is the repect they are givin from others are in great amounts. I'm willing to do all I can to get the respect I wanted my whole life. Now to this year 2016, I obey the laws and have not been in civil justice once. But I have seen it, many times infact. I have studyed the behavoir of the suspects, and the CP. I think it's my time to shine and show the world that I'm not just the average joe. ([{ This story did not take a long time to make, but I hope it demostrates the requried needs.}])
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Name: Donnie Malcono
CID: 55673
Amount of loyalist points: 0
Age: 26
Country of origin: Canada
Hair colour: Brown
Eye colour: Brown

Specific skills and specialist, such as medical knowlege, knowlege of technology etc?: I'm Fast and Know The Right Places to Look for Suspects.

Have you had any previous affiliations with the CCA of the city or the UU as a whole?: No.


Have you had any previous infactions from the CCA or the UU as a whole?: No.
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Lot of apps this week, don't expect a lot of comments.

POTATO JUICE - ACCEPTED

Jamiefoxx121 - ACCEPTED

Big Macintosh - DENIED

Stopped reading your app when you only had 13 lines of rp examples

KeviQc2 - DENIED

Good RP examples, but the backstory was butchered. I didn't mind the choppy English (i'm assuming you are not a native English speaker) but the backstory was unrealistic, hard to follow, and left out about 90% of his earlier life.

Frankie Astro - DENIED

Good RP as well, bad backstory. Read up on HL2 Canon because I don't think you understand how the 7 hour war happened

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