Nears Vortigaunt apllication

Near Tue Jun 25, 2013 12:10 am

Steam name: Near
Steam ID: STEAM_0:0:43706931
Age: 19
How long have you been roleplaying?: About 5 years

20 lines of roleplay examples, using /it and /me. (Eg: /it The windows seem to have stains along the edges and center slowly dripping down. /me takes out a wet towel twisting it and scrubing along the glass in a circular motion.)
/me picks up the leaves on the sidewalk.
/it CCA-C45-NOVA-01.04284 looks at me.
01 says, "Biotic, come here."
/me looks up at the 01, dragging his feet as he walks.
01 says, "I said move! Faster!"
/me does as the 01 tells him to.
01 says, "The torture room is coated with blood. Go clean it. Now. If you don't do a good job, then I will have to coat it with your blood and make you clean up that."
Nuir'Gianl says, "Thisss one will do as you wish, massssster."
/me says under his breath, "Lung gah..."
01 says, "What was that Biotic? Speaking in an unofficial language? I think that deserves a beating for you."
/it The 01 starts hitting Nuir'Gian ith his stunstick. The stunstick makes a sizzling sound as the stick hits and burns his skin.
/me tries to take in as much impact as possible until it is too much and he falls.
01 says, "Now get up! I said move!"
/me attempts to get up, but is struggling to do so.
01 says, "I said move! Don't make me hit you harder!
/me gets up onto his feet, swaying a little from side to side.
01 says, "Now, get to the torture room and clean it up!"
Nuir'Gian says, "Yesssss massster."
/me goes to the torture room. As he arrives, he gets a used rag from his tool belt and scrubs the floor and all the filthy blood from it.
01 says, "Haha. Good."

Character backstory (6 lines at least detailing you character's background. Events, job, family etc and should reflect your skills): When Nuir'Gian was small, the combine invaded his homeworld. The vortigaunts had to flee to the planet Xen when the Black Nesa incident occurred. Unfortunately, his mother was killed by the combine. Nuir'Gian used the rift as his chance to escape and it directed the Vortigaunts to Earth during the 7 hour war. He travelled to A near-by canal and found damaged resources to build a shack.

During the night Nuir'Gian was abducted by combine and was assigned to become a slave, he did not want to do this but he had no choice, if he didn't do it then he would be executed. When he arrived to the Nexus he had to get to work as soon as he got there, he was assigned to an owner, also known as his master. They moved him to a city, this city was city 17. The first couple of months of work was hard for Minur'ian, he eventually got used to it though. But, he never got used to the treatment, the combine treated him like dirt. He never told anyone about how he felt.

One night he was freed by a couple of rebels and they took him to their secret hideout, it wasn't secret for long because he had a micro-chip inside him that could tell the combine his location, they found the hideout and captured the rebels and Nuir'Gian. He had got assigned to a new owner and they moved him to a much more secure city, ]city 8. He was glad that he had got moved away from city 17, away from the harsh treatment. Here, they treated him with a bit more respect, he felt much more comfortable here at ]city 8, his new home.

---IC Information---
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(Names formats should be as followed, example: "Zek'Tul" having a dash in the center)
Name: Nuir'Gian
Age: 28
Skin tone colour: Tan
Eye colour: Bright red
Scars/Marks: Various scars on chest.

Specific skills and specialist, such as medical knowlege, knowlege of technology, philosophy etc?:
Nuir'Gian has slight experience with working of several machines from being a factory worker during his life on Xen.

Did you ever have a problem with your established government in Xen?:
No.
What do you plan to do with your biotic character in the future?: Work For the CCA, Clean Be Active. But If I Escape or I get Released I will Escape the city and hide, possibly Work with the Resistance and Take down the ones who made my life that much worst.

**General Bravo** Tue Jun 25, 2013 12:26 am

DENIED
You have already been prohibited from making any further applications for a full week. ~~Add an additional 4 days onto that now.~~

EDIT: Make that an additional full week. That is TWO FULL WEEKS in which you are prohibited from making another application. Do not steal applications.