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Post  JoeOutlaw95 Mon Apr 15, 2013 4:59 pm

Maximillian Alexei Kuznetsov
Before the 7 Hour War

Maximillian just got out of college after recieving his Bachelor's degree in Medical Technology, 9 years after moving to America in 2003 from Moscow, Russia. After a series of events that happened there including his recent discovery of adding something to alcohol which could possibly kill someone... this is called "Super Spiking", which he could put in someones beer or any alcoholic beverage really by just extracting it from simple items like, pills... liquids... stuff that he learned in college. Doing this got him under-watch by the government, which had found this out after Maximillian had tested it on some customers after offering to "spice" up their drinks, the bar he worked at was the Fat Nargodian. Having these accusations put on him sent Max into hiding for three isolated years...
After he recently stopped hiding from the government with the help of some friends of his, he found away to get out of Russia and on a one-way trip to America to begin a new life... so he hitched a ride on a boat and from there forth he set out for America... he got there a couple months later and landed in California, San Francisco. He stayed there for a couple weeks after he got some help from a certain friend of his which gave him $300,000 dollars to start this life, so Max took advantage of the money and made his way to a college to start learning and practicing in the Medical Field.

The Beginning and End(7 Hour War)

It was a rather sunny day when Maximillian decided it was time that he got outside and excercised, so he got on his Nike's and Jogging Suit. He locked his door and bolted off the steps and made contact with the street and began his run around the neighborhood which takes about... 30-40 minutes.
After he was just about to reach his house he saw a cop car in his driveway, so he slowed down to focus his vision on the car and think why they were there... the cops saw Max walking up the driveway and they got out of their car weapons in hand... one had a shotgun, the other had a 9mm and a pair of handcuffs. Maximillian was told to state his full name so he complied and told them as he was thrown on the car, he was so close to cuffing Max when a shadow was cast over the house and the drive way... the whole neighborhood almost engulfed in darkness as thousands and thousands of odd tanned and white belly'ed ships with blue lights carrying black boxes landed in the neighborhood... both cops were shot by these odd looking Gas Masked Men... they were carrying some wierd looking gun that seemed to shoot pulse rounds which nearly liquidized the cops behind him. Then one of the odd looking flying ships landed in his yard and it carried one of the strange black boxes, as it landed the box opened more and more and Max stared into it as more of these men came out and seized him... Max knew that the earth was being invaded by an unknown force... within 7 Hours it had been confirmed that the earth now was under control by this alien force known as the combine...

On the way to City 18

It was dark out later that day, the day that Earth was invaded... Max was still being transported although he was unconscious from the mysterious Gas Masked men when they knocked him out, he was unsure of where he was as he was phasing in and out of reality... in truth he was on his way back to Moscow which he had tried to get away from but it is no longer how Moscow used to look and was called... it was now known as City 18. Still on the train Max was dressed up much like these other civilians with him... in a Blue Jumpsuit with nothing on it but some pockets, and in those pockets lie a Card and some odd form of currency... tokens? Yes about a hundred of tokens were in this small box in his pocket, they were thin. Max thought to himself "How in the hell did this even happen... how did we fail to stop these... aliens...?" as soon as this thought breached the walls of his mind a cold chill shot up his spine as he looked out the window to see snow on the ground as the train zoomed past mountains and snowy plains... he remembered these familiar places... Russia. The next morning was very chilly as Max got up to look out the window to see the supposed "City 18" on the horizon as the sun jetted its light down on it, lighting up the city. He stood there expressionless as the train entered the city slowly, he saw giant walls made of some dark metal cutting off parts of the city and in the streets we're some odd looking trucks that shot rockets out the top of the truck and had a machine gun as well... even those weird White Gas Masked men next to it... eternally watching the streets...

In city 18

It was still bright out but rather dark in the city... the train was slowly pulling in towards its destination as all the citizens got into a single file line and headed for the exits. Max got closer and closer to the but almost instantly started sweating and shaking as he saw the White Gas Masked men awaiting them on the platform. Max asked the man in front of him "Whats about to happen man? Are they going to knock us out again?", the man in front said quietly "I wouldn't worry, if you stay calm they'll leave you alone." these were the finals words before the train doors opened up and every shuffled out and the Gas Masked Men yelled "Form a Single File line, if everyone complies, rations will be handed out soon enough!" and at that moment someone flew out of the line and tackled one of the Masked Men and another radio'ed in "We have a 10-103m here." that's when a deep voice responded over the radio and the Masked Man who radio'ed it in almost instantly turn back to the man on top of the other masked man was shot directly in the forehead... multiple times... then they dragged his corpse off even though we were sitting there... our gaze filled with fear... mesmerized by the scene, not too long after the CP's noticed we stopped moving and screamed "Keep moving!" so we snapped out of it and kept on walking towards the door. We we're then lead through a small corridor and a couple flight of stairs and out into the room where you would usually wait for the train. The Masked Men left us there and told us to wait until they got back... it took them a long amount of time before the doors busted open... this time it wasn't the original masked men that had brought us, it was something much bigger... these things took the form of a cyclops that stared us down, emotionless and expressionless. But then a small man in a brown suit pushed through them and stood before us... the administrator. We all stood there and glanced at each other and then the administrator spoke "Welcome to City 18, I am Dr. Benjamin Kayne, the city administrator." almost immediately after, everyone looked at each other then the administrator told us all what happened and how the Earth was took over in 7 hours... and who the alien that invaded us was... the combine. The doctor told us all the rules and what was permitted inside the city. We we're then escorted to the streets and told we can go roam around but still we we're to adhere to the City's rules. Max walked into the plaza and looked around... there was a lot of citizens here. Very few in brown suits, most in blue jumpsuits like he was. The ones in the brown suits must be the loyal ones, I then attained the courage to walk up to one, he was an African American... he was a bit shorter then me and was decently muscular then the question popped in my head and I asked "Hello... mind me asking but I am new here and I wanted to know where do you get those suits?" he then looked at me and snickered, he then said "See here friend, you gotta be loyal to the CCA... understand? You know... the CP's? Earn loyalty points by doing work." after he said this he walked away mumbling something. I began to walk around again then I saw this tall dark tower that looked like it was breaking through the atmosphere and into space... I was told it was called the Citadel where the combine made there home, here on Earth. I gazed heavily at it until I heard yelling down the street so I went to go check it out, that WAS my goal until I was slammed into a wall by some crazy fellow... he was ranting on about how there is going to be a rebellion soon and how the CCA will fall and then a metro-police came flying around the corner and grabbed him as well as slammed his head into the ground and yelled "Citizen, do you want a non mal-compliance citation?!" and then citizen lashed out and screamed "Fuck you! The rebels will rise up! Rise up!" then he was hit with a stunstick and the CP dragged him off towards the Nexus. I brushed myself off and wandered back into the plaza and saw an apartment building so I thought "That is where I am guessing we stay?" then it hit me... that was no ordinary apartment building... it was the one I used to live in when I worked at the bar. So I bolted up into the building and up the stairs to my old apartment and as soon as I tried the handle... locked. So I went down the stairs and found the nearest CP and asked "Sir, do you know who owns apartment #5?" the CP looked at me for what seemed like an eternity as I was nervous to talk to him until he said "One moment", he then took out a small pad that held data to the city. He looked back up at me and said "There is someone currently living there... his name is Markus Paine." I looked at the CP and said "Alright, thank you sir." he nodded and I walked off. So now that I was informed of the now new owner of my old home, I had to find him before he found what was hidden in the floorboards... my gun. So it was about night time I assumed because I felt tired and I couldn't really tell because every time I looked at the sky it was black out... so I got an apartment... apartment #6 so I could keep an eye on this Paine figure. The next morning it was pretty warm out so I took a stroll outside my apartment... I had recently learned that citizens could get jobs, through a program called CETA... I could apply for anything if I had the skills... so I could work up to becoming a Loyalist and getting a CWU Job or maybe open a bar again if they allow it... which they stated as contraband, but since this city seems to be in good shape I don't see why not. Later that day Max got the courage once more to get up off the couch and go talk to a metro police... so he did. He walked out of the apartments and trotted down to the nearest CP and asked him "Sir, could I possibly help out in some way to improve my reputation around here?" it happened to be the same unit from yesterday, he looked at me and laughed "You'll need to ask the divisional... hes right over there.", the CP point to whatever this divisional character was and Max turned his head and literally shuddered at the sight of this CP... he was an Enormous figure lumbering over the other units, he had blue shoulder stitching and a different looking mask. I instantly started sweating and trembling with fear as I started walking over. As Maximillian got closer, the divisional glanced over at him and motioned for the units to stop talking as he turned to look at the smaller man as he spoke "Citizen, can I help you?" and Maximillian stopped in his tracks, nervously re-thinking what he was going to ask... he then spoke "Uhh... is there anyway I can help out to get some loyalty points?" and then the divisional chuckled and said "Starting off on the right foot are we? Alright, come with me." as the divisional starts walking off, Max slowly looks at the other units staring at him and he smiles and runs off to catch up to the divisional. The divisional then stops in front of a building and points to the windows and places a rag in Max's hand and he says "Clean these windows, and the C.A.H. lobby window too." I nodded and he walks off rejoining the other CP's. About what seemed to be 5 o' clock... a broadcast played saying "Rations are now online." and the almost every citizen in the plaza starts shifting toward this building down the streets called the RDC. I got in line of about 20-30 citizens... rag in hand and as I got closer to the CP yelling for everyone to "Apply." I started thinking, what the hell does apply mean? Then soon enough it was my turn in line... I stepped up and he the CP spat out "Apply." then I looked at him and raised an eyebrow saying "What does that mean?" he grunted and boldly stated "Name and CID." I then remembered what CID ment, so I reached into my left pocket and grabbed the card next to the box filled with the tokens and read it aloud "Maximillian Alexei Kuznetsov, #77703." I said it with a monotone voice as I heard some citizens behind me chuckling. The CP then pulled out a pad and scrolled down a list of names and stopped on mine... nothing appeared but my name and CID and loyalty points total. He then looked up and said "Alright, you can go." and he stepped aside motioning for me to go on through, so I did and stepped up to a machine then pressed a button and it beeped... and beeped again... then it beeped even faster and I backed up thinking it was going to explode but a light flashed green then it opened up and steam poured out, spraying me in the face and a small labeled package dispensed as well... a ration. It held a jar that had something sloshing around inside and a can of water and some more tokens. So I left the RDC and got back to cleaning windows and after that was done I told a CP that I was done and he gave me -5 loyalty points, which occurred to me was a good thing. I got back to the apartments... still no sign of Markus Paine. So I gave up and went to sleep.



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Post  Unknown Mon Apr 15, 2013 5:25 pm

This is pretty good, I hope to see you wright more in the future.
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Post  Moose_hater Mon Apr 15, 2013 10:56 pm

Bravo, jolly good! Good story.
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Post  JoeOutlaw95 Tue Apr 16, 2013 4:47 pm

Just an update.
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Post  Cergis Tue Apr 16, 2013 5:04 pm

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Well Cool story bro, But really, I FREAKING LOVE IT!
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Post  Moose_hater Wed Apr 17, 2013 7:35 pm

Cergis wrote:
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Well Cool story bro, But really, I FREAKING LOVE IT!
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Post  Gremnkai Thu Apr 18, 2013 8:54 am

Austin is the lonely Murican. You can join the Bro's Angels if you want Razz
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